Okay, something really embressing happened yesterday! I accidently uploaded the wrong document of another story!
Well this is the real chapter
I know I wrote that story before, deleted it then (I really hated myself for that). But now I'm going to rewrite it and make it better. So please have fun…
It's set somewhere in Book 2, Toph is already there but Zuko isn't in Ba Sing Se with his uncle.
Masked Rescuer And The Anuish (Revised)
Chapter 1: Captured
I could feel the sharp pain in my legs, well almost every part of my body hurt but my legs were the worst. Slowly I opened my eyes to see a dark cell. My hands were chained above my head and my back leaned against the cold and wet wall.
I closed my eyes because there wasn't much to see and I had a bad headache. I tried to imagine that I was at the back home at South Pole. Imagining the snow falling on my face and smelling the fresh and cold air made me feel at least a bit better.
My daydreams were interrupted by a squeaking noise. I opened my eyes groaning. "What do you want from me?" I tried to sound strong and tough but my voice was only a whisper.
"The General wants to see you." A guard demanded and walked over to me. He unchained me and my hands fell down in my lap. They were sore and a bit bloody. I had no time to fight because I was dragged out of the room.
He pulled me along a long corridor to another room which was also dark, why didn't the Fire Nation have any candles or torches or whatever? The guard stopped in the middle of the room and lifted his arm. I heard the rattling of iron before my hands were pulled above my head. My toes were slightly touching the ground but the weight of my body pulled my arms down.
Suddenly the room lightened a bit up and a middle aged man stood in front of me. He watched me smirking and went around me. "I'm General Li, and this is my base therefore you're my prisoner until I say otherwise."
"What do you want from me?" I asked him, maybe he would give me an answer. "Just an answer to one simple question: Where is the Avatar?"
Of course, they wanted Aang but I wouldn't give in and just tell him what I knew. "Go to hell." I spat.
The General's answer was a punch across my face. "Okay, I give you one last chance before it gets really bad here. Now answer me."
I just kept silent and I didn't think that I could speak, his punch had been really hard.
"Very well, then we'll have it another way. AKITO!" The General screamed and suddenly the whole room was filled with light and the door opened.
"Yes, General Li. You called for me?" Akito asked as if Li had invited him for dinner not yelled for him.
"Make her talk." Li just demanded and walked outside. Now I had time to look around and saw tons of weapons and other things that seemed to be very useful for … torture.
There is going to be some torture now, so if you don't like to read stuff like this you can skip it until the next note.
"So waterbender, how would you like to start?" Akito asked sarcastically and walked over to me with a few long needles.
"Do you know what this is for?" He asked surrounding me. "They are chi-blockers, so the people who come here cannot defend themselves, but I like it when my toys struggle."
I shivered, and it was not because I was only in my bending outfit, it was because that guy really was a psychopath.
He walked away and came back with a leather whip, before I even realized what he was holding I felt a sharp pain running over my back.
That monster must have realized me shrugging because he said slyly. "I'm just beginning, but this can end now. All you have to do is tell me where the Avatar is."
"I don't betray my friends." I whispered but I'm quite sure he understood. So my torture began. I bit my lips not to yell in pain but I would not give him this satisfaction.
Somewhere between the 20th or 30th stroke he stopped and walked out of the room. First I was relieved but then he came back with a bag of coal.
He emptied the bag on the fireplace and let a guard lighten it with some firebending.
Akito held an iron bar into the fire until it glowed red and then came towards me. "Last chance." He said smirking and held the metal near my skin so that I could feel the heat.
I shook my head and bit my lip again, awaiting the pain. And I didn't have to wait long.
Akito pressed the iron into my skin and I bit my lip so hard that it began to bleed, he pressed stronger and stronger until I screamed in pain.
Then he held it into the fire and back on my skin.
In the next few hours, I learned how much the Firenation knew about torture and experienced it more than I would want.
Akito only stopped to ask me again and again of the location of Aang but always I would say that I would never pretend my friends. Finally, I fell unconscious.
Okay from now on it won't be that bad you just need to know that she's been tortured.
A noise outside my door made me wake up from my dreamless sleep. Every single part of my body hurt and lying on a wooden bank wasn't helpful either. I tried to sit up but after the first few inches I had to lie back down.
Then the cell door opened and a guard stood outside. "The General wants to see you again, waterscum." He belled and went towards me.
"Stand up." I tried to move but I was too weak. "I'll get you to the General one way or another."
"I can't move, you idiot." I said, I wanted to be strong but my voice was only a caw. The guard only growled and grabbed my wrists and pulled me of the bank.
I yelled in pain as he dragged me through the hallways and to General Li.
"There you are peasant, so did Akito change your mind." The General's voice was an arrogant as always.
"Answer me, peasant." But I kept my eyes on the floor. I was a bit dizzy and concentrating on one spot helped me to keep myself from falling.
Suddenly I felt a sharp pain on my cheek and when I looked up I saw the guard raise his hand again, ready to slap me again.
"I said before, I don't betray my friends." The next slap hit me hard and I fell unconscious again.
The next time I woke up I was in chains again and Akito stood in front of me and everything started over.
Later in the evening I lied on my bank again, I wasn't chained but that wasn't necessary. I was so badly hurt that I would be able to move the next weeks.
Memories of my family and friends came into my mind, me and Sokka at the South Pole or Aang trying to waterbend.
I couldn't help, tears began to fall down my face. Suddenly there was a hand covering my mouth.
My eyes widened as I saw a figure with a blue mask leaning over me.
That's the first chapter. Sorry if there are some spelling or grammar mistakes I wrote it around midnight. I really hope you liked it and I want review (critic, suggestions for next chapters and of course you can tell me what you liked or whatever goes through your mind :D)
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