DragonShifter:Here goes on my sixth Labyrinth Story. Please tell me what I need to improve one. I hope you like the story.
Prologue:
One dark night two queens gave birth to a lovely brown haired girl and a handsome blonde hair boy. These two queens were the best of
friends and loved each other like sisters. Both were the queens of two neighboring kingdoms. But one of them was the heir to the high
throne. The other was the daughter of one of the lower royal families. The Heir to the high throne was known as Gwendolyn and the
daughter was named Linduath. Both were in the High Palace for a conference. The high palace was a large building made of a mixture of
marble and black sandstone. It was the center of politics, which meant that it was more than a home. Royalty visited the palace for
various reasons year round. But when the two queens went into labour in the middle of the conference, both were rushed to a room that
had been prepared for them. The room was a beautiful golden color. Gold was supposed to help keep a mother relax during the labor. The
beds that Gwendolyn and Linduath were ushered to were fluffy. They were built to keep the laboring mothers comfortable. Their midwifes
changed their clothes magically to night gowns designed for expecting mothers. During the labor, Gwendolyn and Linduath looked at each
other and started to laugh every so often. About half way through labor Gwendolyn spoke "You Linduath look terrific."
"I look terrific" Linduath spoke with a hoarse voice "You should look at you. You look just beautiful, as always." Gwendolyn laughed. "So
you say Lin. I feel like one of the junk ladies that live in the Labyrinthine junkyard." Linduath gasped as a contraction hit, then replied "no
kidding. I feel like I have been trampled by a whole clan of mountain trolls." For the next few hours passed with Gwendolyn and Linduath
comparing their pain and joking about their appearances. The midwifes had to silence them several times on the account that they were
talking more than trying to give birth to their children. After they gave birth to their children, they slept until they were woken up by their
husbands. They were hurriedly told that a messenger had arrived from the Land of the Wolves (the small kingdom that Linduath and her
husband ruled) saying that they were under attack and the attackers were planning on continuing attacking all of the kingdoms until they
took over the whole Underground. Plans were then made for Linduath to be taken Aboveground. Before Linduath left, Gwendolyn caught
up with her with her brother in tow. "Lin, I know that things didn't work out with you being able to marry Orbert, but, well, He would like
to accompany you to Above." Orbert looked at Linduath shyly and blushed. Linduath turned to the high prince and spoke. "You would do
that for me Bert?" She smiled and Orbert saw affection in Linduaths eyes. "Yes." Was Orbert's replied. Just then Linduath's husband came
up behind her. He knew that his wife had and still loved the High Prince. He was fine with it, for he had seen the love between the two
Fae before he had married Linduath. After all, he was the High Prince's best friend. "Lin, Bert, You have go now." He said. Linduath and
Orbert hurried to the vanish point that would take them to the Aboveground. They made it just in time. They were then transported to
a small town that was surrounded by a forest. To be more precise, they were transported into a white Victorian house. The house was
large enough. It had a large front yard and a half acre back yard with the forest at the edge of the property. The house had at least three
levels above the ground and a basement. There was a large porch with a porch swing. There were also three or four large comfortable
chairs by the swing. Orbert whistle then spoke "Welcome Home Linduath." Linduath giggled "Welcome home indeed. Not a bad house or
town. We need more mundane names Bertie" Linduath said.
"How does Linda and Robert sound?" the high prince asked "Sounds good" The brown haired woman replied as they went into the house.
