HI my name is Laura, i'm a new fan fic writer so likely hood is it won't be so good but critisism will be very helpful because i want to improve. If a follow up is wanted it may be a while and i know that is very stupid because i'm taking some massive exams and i'm afraid they kinda gotta take priority for that i apologize. Read, Review , yea thnks 3
It was dark outside, I wasn't sure of the time but I knew it was late.
Across the table Tobias's gaze tore into me as if he was clawing to see into my mind. He grasped my clammy hands as my leg bounced and I bit my lip, I knew he kept trying to catch my line of sight but I figured that if I looked I would be sucked into a bliss of distraction. I wanted to look but right now I needed to focus, and hope and pray for the outcome I wanted. I sucked in a breath and looked down at the table, at the small white stick with a circle in the centre, it still stood grey, a dim, sickening colour that ripped through you with fear and anticipation. 'Urgh, how long does this thing take to work; this suspense is driving me mad!' I whined.
Tobias smiled, his teeth showing a little as he chuckled before swallowing hard as he turned to look out the window. I recognized the worry in his eyes; I knew he was looking for the same result as I was. We'd only spoken lightly about children; neither of us wanted them, yet. Of course I wanted children, with Tobias; he was always so caring, so gentle, nothing like his father. As I stared into his eyes I heard him begin to fiddle with the packaging in which the test came his breathing increased slightly.
'1 minute, Tris. Then we'll know' he barely moved his mouth but the words still tumbled out.
I looked down. I lifted the stick from the table, to my eye line. A huge grin began creeping across my skin, which was soon reflected on Tobias's face. The single red line, I was practically begging for, sat within the grey circle, that didn't look so dark anymore. I wanted to yell with joy but both, Tobias and I sat very still, facing each other. The anticipation that had sat deep in my stomach had now gone and was replaced by another sensation. It began on my left; a swirling warmth took its time to creep across the pit of my stomach spreading heat through my limbs stopping at fingertips, making me feel alive. We sit still staring at each other. The warmth has now spread to my face and I grin, the biggest grin I can manage without causing my face to ache.
'What?' Tobias asks quietly as he catches my eyes.
'We should celebrate' I reply quickly, too quickly. The smile on his face turns a little sour as he glances down to his hands, pursing his lips.
'Tris, that was too close, as much as I love you I don't want to risk it again so soon' he says as he glances up and meets my gaze. By this time the smile has faded from my mouth, I swallow but I keep his gaze.
'I've had a much better idea' I say to him the smile is slowly creeping back onto my face slowly stand up and walk towards him leaning over him to give him a clear vision of my cleavage, wetting my lips with my tongue, I whisper into his ear in the quietest voice I could manage 'you're coming with me Mr Eaton'
