it was a dark night I went to my room you never thought this night would come. I sat down on the foot of my bed my mum said Lily what are you doing here she don't want me here she never did that's the night I ran away ran to the alleyway near my house there was a man at the entrance of the alleyway he had a dark t-shirt with the lettering I couldn't quite understand what the t shirt said until I got up close it had SDMN written on it in brightly coloured letters he had something in his hand looked shiny shaped like a oval I got a close up it was a knife he slowly lifted his arm he said it'll be ok it'll all be over soon that's when he drove the knife straight through my heart I let out a terrible scream that you could half a block away I fell to the floor my body cold my last words were tell my mum I'm sorry.
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give me ideas on who it could be and how to keep the story going
