Koji: I think I should remodel it a bit because it did look messy
Note: This happened after the first episode of the pokemon advance. Also I'm not good at summary so you can read the story and figure the summary for yourself. Ash and Max play a minor part in this story (Ash and Max: Why?) So Read and Review at the end
2nd Note:
"This is human talking"
"This is pokemon talking"
'This is human thoughts'
Brendan's Pokemon
Mudkip/Kip
Zigzagoon/Goon
Abra/Eli
Bagon/Keith
Poochyena/Poochy
Taillow/Tai
May's pokemon
Torchic/Amber
Wurmple/Beauty
Skitty/Delicate
Meditite/Cam
Roselia/Rosy
Swablu/Teri
Ash's Pokemon
Pikachu (No nicknames)
Taillow
Makuhita
Whimsur
Shroomish
Wingull
Max's Pokemon
Treeko/Skip
Aron/Aaron
Electrike/Trike
Trapinch/Joe
Tropius/Timmy
Clamperl/Hunter
Takashi's Pokemon
Mudkip/Kipper
Feebas/Bass
Sharpedo/Cutter
Magikarp/Carter
Kingdra/Hydro
Corphish/Dawn
Specter's Pokemon
Torchic/Torch
Vulpix/Pixel
Numel/Mel
Slugma/Cargo
Torkoal/Coal
Bagon/Sal
A new journey
"Ash how's your Pikachu?" Ash smiled and said "Thanks for worrying May he's fine (He is a he right?),"
"How long is it to the pokemon center?" "Just a couple of miles," "A couple of miles will kill me," "Don't worry May we'll be there,"
Ash and May finally arrived at the pokemon center. They went to the trainer's room and talked about pokemon, gyms, leader, etc…
"Have you heard there's a new gym leader in Little Root Town," Ash overheard that and said,
"Who is it?" May also heard the conversation and said
"Come on Ash it's getting late," "But May," May ignored that and still dragging him out. They didn't talk till morning…
Ash yawned out loud and stretching his arms out
"That was a nice sleep," May nodded in agreement
"Come on let's go," They got up and went to a town called Little Root. May scanned the place
"Ash do what you want I have to do something," "But May-," "See you later!" Ash blinked in surprise
"Okay May...,"
May
"Hmm…I wonder where dad is," May say. Just then a blue blur tackled her then licked her
"Aw…Hey Kip," said May to the little blue creature
"Where's your trainer?" Kip just smiled and stared at his trainer
"Oh hey May back already?" "Yup I just got Torchic come on out Amber," said May letting out her Torchic.
Torchic looked scared as she saw the trainer but May assured her that he was nice
"Don't worry Amber he's a friend of mine, he has a pokemon too," Torchic chirped in happiness as she saw Mudkip
"So May are you going to go get the badges?" said the trainer
"Of course Brendan, I always do, I'll see you soon I hope,"
Brendan nodded back as he return his Mudkip back and May did the same
"I'll see you soon May," said Brendan walking out of the town
"This is my gym and I can prove it!" shouted a boy. May thought 'Oh no, Max is trying to be the gym leader,' She rushed to the gym and see Max and Ash glaring at each other
"Hey Max," Max pushed up his glasses "Hey shisuta (Sister)," "Shisuta? This is your brother May?"
May nodded "He's not the gym leader,"
Max stuck his tongue out and said, "Our dad is," "So where's your dad? I want to challenge him,"
"Here I am, when did May arrived?" said Norman, Max and May's father.
"Just a couple minutes ago dad," "You want a challenge right? Alright then,"
Ash thought 'Uh-oh I only have Pikachu with me,'
"Go Absol!" "Go Pikachu!" After the battle Pikachu lost to Absol (I want to skip it)
"Your dad is hard," "That's what you get messing with a gym leader," said Max
"May did you get your pokemon yet?" May nodded then let out Torchic
"Come on out Amber," Torchic blinked
"Where's that Mudkip?" said Amber.
Max looked at the Torchic
"May are you sure you can take care of a pokemon?"
"Of course I can Max!" "Well I'm not sure about that," "What is that suppose to mean?"
The two siblings started to bicker then stopped by Ash "Come on May we have to go to Rustboro city,"
May nodded
"Wait I'm coming too!" shouted Max
"Huh?" said the two trainers
"It would be a good idea, Max could help you out," said Norman then he turn to Max
"Here Max it's Pokenavigator. Also here's a couple of pokeballs and a treeko," "Wow thanks dad! I'm going to name this Treeko…Skip!"
"Skip?" questioned the two trainers
"Treeko full evolution is Sceptile," "Well that explains it," "Take care of Max," Max waved good-bye to his parents and May did the same
"Come on Amber go back to pokeball," said May returning back amber. Then they heard a rustle in the bush
"Who's there?" said Ash. Unexpectedly a pokemon came and tackled May licking her
"May why is that Mudkip licking at you?" said Max. May looked at the Mudkip
"Where's your trainer?" Mudkip walked to Brendan
"Kip you shouldn't do that to May," Kip whimpered and said "I wanted to meet Amber again".
Brendan patted Kip's head and said,
"Alright boy, May can you release your Torchic?"
"But I just…Fine," said May letting Amber out. Amber chirped as she saw Kip
"Hey Kip," "Hey Amber want to play?" "Sure!"
Amber and Kip started to tackle each other
"May when did you meet Brendan?" "In our town Max," "But-" "I just arrive to check around then went to travel again," "Oh…Ok then Brendan,"
Ash looked at Brendan then May then Max
"So how did you guys meet?" "We were next door neighbor but when Brendan got Mudkip he started to travel. But he didn't get any pokemon and I'm guessing no badges either," said May narrowing her eyes at Brendan.
Brendan blushed in embarrassment and cleared his throat
"That's true, I only went far as Oldale town," "Brendan how bout a battle?" said May. Brendan smirked then nodded
"You won't stand a chance," "Come on Amber!" "Kip let's go," "Amber use peck attack!" "Dodge it Kip and use tackle!"
Kip was able to dodge it then tackled Amber who made Amber nearly fainted
"Don't worry Amber! Use your tackle as well!" Amber tackled Kip but she hardly does any damage to him! "Kip finish her off using water gun!" Kip used water gun on Amber making her fainted
"Great job Kip," "Oh Amber," said May picking her up.
Brendan looked at the Torchic and said "Here,"
Brendan gave May a couple of potions and revives
"I'll see you soon May," May nodded
"I'll see you soon Brendan Birch," Brendan took his Mudkip and walked away. Max looked at May's Torchic
"She's not damage much luckily," May gave her the potion and she was nearly healed
"You did fine Amber," "I know, hope I meet Kip soon!" "May can you tell me how and where did you meet Brendan?" "Well…"
Flashback
"May why don't you meet our neighbors?" May nodded and went to the house near-by
"Oh who are you?" "I'm May I just moved in," "So you're our neighbor why don't you meet our son? He's upstairs,"
May nodded and went upstairs
"Pokemon is fully healed and items are packed," said Brendan not noticing May went to his room
"Oh hey who are you?" "My name is May I live next door," "Oh so you're May I didn't know you were a girl," 'Didn't know I was a girl?' thought May angry inside
"Do you want capture a pokemon? Wait I have to help out my dad I'll see you later May," May stared at Brendan until he was out of sight
"HE DIDN'T KNOW I WAS A GIRL!"
End Flashback
"Did you really say that May?" "Yeah, at first I didn't like him but the more I hang out with him the more I beginning to like him," "Yeah, yeah, so can we go now?" "Err…sure Max let's go to Rustboro city,"
They went to the forest and in two hours they haven't came out yet
"Ash we're lost!" "Don't worry I know where I'm going," "This is boring I'm going go my way," said Max running off
"Wait Max you might get lost too!" shouted May running after him
"Wait Max! May! Great…I'm alone,"
May (Her POV too)
"Max! Where are you!" I shouted. I was beginning to worry where's Max? Then I heard a rustle in the bush. I checked it out and it was a…wurmple and a zigzagoon
"Oh cool a wurmple!" I was excited I wanted to capture a pokemon but here there are two! "Go Amber!" "Go Mudkip!" shouted another person "What the?" I look back and saw Brendan smirking
"This is my battle!" "Too bad!" I stuck my tongue out "Amber use peck!" "Kip use tackle!"
My Torchic tackled the wurmple making him almost fainted and Brendan's Mudkip tackled hurt zigzagoon making him almost unconscious "Go pokeball!" shouted the both of us. The pokeball was shaking then finally…
"Yeah I captured a wurmple!" "So what I captured a Zigzagoon," said Brendan smirking again. Ooh! I wish I could wipe the smirk off his face! I check in the pokedex
-Name: Wurmple
Type: Bug
Evolution: Silcoon/Cascoon, Dustox/Beautifly
Attacks: Tackle, String shot, Poison Sting-
-Name: Zigzagoon
Type: Normal
Evolution: Linoone
Attacks: Tackle, Growl, Tail whip, headbutt-
"Doesn't matter, I'll see later…Brandan!" "It's Brendan," I smirked at him then he left. It's so cool I captured a wurmple…what to name her? Hmm…wurmpy? Wormy? Nah I heard that Wurmple evolve to either a Beautifly or a Dustox. I wanted a Beautifly so I'll call her Beauty
"I'll call you Beauty even if you do evolve to a Dustox," I said to the pokeball that wurmple is in. I kept searching around to find Max but no dice
"May!" shouted Ash
"Oh hey Ash did you find Max?" Ash shook his head
"I couldn't find him," "Darn it Max…Oh yeah I captured a wurmple," "A wurmple? Cool,"
Ash and May kept looking for Max "MAX! MAX! Where are you?" "It's no use May, maybe he's in Rustboro already," "I don't know Ash," "Don't worry I'm sure he's fine,"
Max
"Oh cool it's a wurmple," said Max looking at the wurmple who got scared and ran off
"Wait! I'm a friend!" Max looks around the forest and saw a flower shop. There he saw a girl
"Hi, you know, if you don't pick a berry for a while, they'll drop to the ground but they'll sprout again. Also when you plant a berry you should water them with a Wailmer pail, here's one," said the girl giving Max a Wailmer pail
"Err…Thanks I think," "Did you know that these berries can make candy too? I want one right now, here," said the girl giving Max a Pecha berry "Many berries give out different effects to the pokemon, a sitrus berry can heal a pokemon while a Persim berry can heal confusion in a battle," Max blinked
"Cool," "Oh I haven't introduce me yet, my name is Rebecca," said the girl
"My name is Max," "What are you here for?" "I like to travel and meet new pokemon," "You know my sister is traveling right now, her name is Kumiko, if you see her tell her that I miss her very much," Max nodded
"I'll do that for you," Max went out the flower shop and went to Rustboro city
Ash and May
"Come on Pikachu, thunder attack!" shouted Ash. Ash was in a battle of a Shroomish. Shroomish was down to the ground but hasn't fainted yet "Go Pokeball!"
The pokeball shook but stood still
-Name: Shroomish
Type: Grass
Evolution: Breloom
Attacks: Absorb, tackle, stun spore-
"Alright I capture my first pokemon in the Hoenn region," "I wonder where's Max," "Like I said don't worry, come on I think he's at Rustboro city already," "I hope you're right," "When am I not?" "Shut up," said May then ran to Rustboro city
"Hey wait up!"
Finally they arrived to Rustboro city and saw Max
"Max!" shouted May hugging Max to death
"M…May…you're crushing…me," said Max
"Oh sorry Max but you shouldn't run off the woods," "Sorry…Mom," said Max.
May ignore that comment
"Come on let's go to the gym," said Ash going into the gym
"Wait for me!" shouted the two sibs. Ash was battling Roxanne
"Go Nosepass!" "Go Shroomish!" "Rock tomb!" "Absorb!"
While the two was battling, Max was battling a young boy while May was battling another young boy
"Go Geodude!" "Go Beauty!" "Come on Skip!" "Let's go Geodude!"
"Tackle!" "Same for you Geodude!"
"Absorb Skip!" "Geodude tackle!"
"Absorb Shroomish!" "Dodge it Nosepass and tackle him!"
Takashi
I carefully went in the room trying to find out what's Team Magma doing. I got caught because of the infrared sensor "Let me go!" I shouted but they were too tight. The leader, Maxie (Is it maxie or is it archie?), came up to me and smirk
"Well well if it isn't little Sasaki," I glared at him and said nothing
"You know, you're like your mother, so naive," "Shut up!" I shouted at him. My eyes were full of tears, they killed my mother...I need my revenge...
"What do we do with him boss?" said one of the member of the magma team
"Throw him off board," He nodded and that's all I remember when I woke up.
"Huh...," I see a trainer's face then help me bandage my woulds
"Why are you helping me?" I said.
"I cannot abandon a person who's injured on the dock," "Oh man...," Damn Maxie, I'll get him back. Hey...my glasses, I took off my sunglasses and got a new one from my jacket
"So...," I heard the trainer said. Oh yeah, my name
"My name is Takashi Sasaki," I put up my hand
"Mine is Brendan Birch, nice to meet you," I widen my eyes a bit. Brendan Birch? The son of Doctor Birch? He use to work for my mom, I grin and he shook my hand
"Where's your pokemon?" He blurted out. Oh I almost forgot
"Oh yeah let's go Bass! Kipper!" I saw Birch's eye widen
-Name: Feebas
Type: Fish
Evolution: Milotic
Attacks: Splash, water gun, Flail-
"That is so rare man! I tried to get one but it's so hard!" He blurted out. I laughed and said
"I know it's rare,"
For a moment I saw Birch's face gone a bit red and at the same time I know he will help me
Brendan
I went into the cave and trying to look for Steven then I finally find him. "Thanks Brendan, I really appreciate for what you do the Rustboro Corporation,"
I nodded. As I try to get out, I saw this Abra injured. I gave him some potion and I grabbed him to find the pokemon center. But I was stuck in this cave and I don't know where to go 'Aw man, I can't find a place out of here,' Suddenly I was out. Huh? I look at Abra, wow I couldn't believe it but I thought he was doing it for himself. I went to the pokemon center and he got checked out. I smiled and told him you can go back to your cave but he just stared at me. I blinked, I don't know what's he doing. I realize he wants to be my pokemon so I threw a pokeball at him and he was caught. 'Abra are smart pokemon...maybe I should call him Eli because my cousin is name Eli and he always annoy me when he talk about stuff I don't know,'
-Name: Abra
Type: Psychic
Evolution: Kadabra, Alakazam
Attacks: Teleport-
I went in the gym and battled Brawly. He seemed shock when he was beaten
"Whoa dude, My pokemon is hard to beat you're lucky Brandan," "It's Brendan," I snapped
"Ok chill dude,"
I went out of the gym and I heard someone groaning on the dock. I came over to check it out and saw a guy who was injured. He wore a red bandana with the letter 'X' with broken sunglasses, a blue t-shirt that said 'Water Sport,' I helped him up and bandaged his wounds.
"Why are you helping me?" said the guy
"I cannot abandon a person who's injured on the dock," "Oh man...,"
It sounded he has a headache. He took off his sunglasses and got a new one. I don't know where he get those but I don't care
"So...," I began
"My name is Takashi Sasaki," He put up his hand
"Mine is Brendan Birch, nice to meet you," I shook his hand
"Where's your pokemon?" "Oh yeah, let's go Bass! Kipper!"
Takashi let out his Mudkip and a...Feebas?!
"That is so rare man! I tried to get one but it's so hard!" I blurted out. Sasaki laughed a bit and said
"I know it's rare," I was a bit embarrased but shook it off
"So what happened to you there?" "I don't really remember," I could tell he lied but I didn't care.
"So you want to travel with me? It's pretty boring without a friend," He hesitated but then nodded
"Sure Birch," "Just call me Brendan," "If you call me Takashi,"
I nodded and we head out to go to Slateport city
"Let's go Kip! Goon!" I let out my pokemon
"Hurry it up Bass! Kipper!" "Surf!" shouted the both of us. Then my pokenav went beeping and saw May's face
"May? What is it?" "Where are you right now?" "I'm on my way to get my third badge in Slateport," "Nani? But how did you get to Dewford?" "Oh that's easy just get a water pokemon," "Huh?" "Brendan watch out!" shouted Takashi.
A sharpedo slammed my pokemon and my navigator out of my hand
-Name: Sharpedo
Type: Dark/Water
Evolution: None
Attacks: Take down, Slash, Swagger-
"Oh man! Dad's going to fry me!" "Worry about your dad later! Worry about him!" I looked at Kip and Goon but they're unconsious and the only pokemon that I have is Eli and all he knows is teleport! I was looking worry and said to Takashi
"Takashi, my pokemon is out, you have to do this by yourself," He nodded and shouted
"Kipper you know what to do!" Kipper nodded and tackled the sharpedo but got hurt in advance. Must be of his hard skin. Then the sharpedo suddenly got knock out
"What happened?" I asked. Takashi carefully look at the sharpedo and look at the fin. There was a shot, it had X and label as Team Magma
For a second there I thought Takashi looked angry. I couldn't tell by his eyes because of his sunglasses. I shrugged it off and told Takashi
"We better put him in the pokemon center," He nodded. First he took his pokeball and captured him. We went to the pokemon center rushing in.
"Hello boys," said Nurse joy
"You got to help Nurse joy, this Sharpedo has been shot!" I shouted.
Nurse Joy took the pokeball and went in surgery. For a couple of hours she came back
"You're lucky you brought this Sharpedo in time, another minute it would've died, who would do such a thing?" "Nurse joy, I think we should bring it back to the ocean now," Takashi softly said.
Nurse joy nodded and gave the pokeball to Takashi and we went to the ocean
"Sharpedo," said Takashi and the sharpedo came out
"You gotta go Sharpedo," said Takashi but the sharpedo kept staring at him
"Takashi, I think he wants you to be his pokemon," I said
"Do you want to?" Sharpedo went under the water and jumped
"I guess that means yes Takashi," "Alright, Sharpedo, you are now mine! Return!" Takashi shouted returning Sharpedo
"So Takashi, what are you going to name him?" "I guess I'll call him Cutter," "Good choice, now let's go, hey, how come there's so many people?"
As we look in there was a huge crowd and we tried to go in but no luck
"Well let's try to get Captain Stern, you told me before that we have to get something to him," said Takashi
"Great idea," We went to Capt Stern's place but find that he's not here. Then we tried the Museum
"Fee is fifty zen," I look at my pocket and I'm broke
"Hey Takashi spare a dime?" Takashi sweatdropped and said "Sure,"
Takashi hand in the money. We went to stairs and found Captain Stern "Captain Stern, this is from Devon Goods," "Ahh thanks, I'll be sure-,"
But then two people dressed in red came in
"Captain Stern, we demand you to give us the Devon Goods," Takashi took off his sunglasses and see his firey brown eyes
"No, we're going to protect them!" "We will?" I whisper to him
He sweatdropped and said "Yes, Brendan,"
One of the guys that dressed in red
"Don't make me laugh, you two kids?" "Yes!" shouted Takashi.
"Fine, I guess we will have to battle to get them! Let's go Numel!"
-Name: Numel
Type: Fire
Evolution: Camerupt
Attacks: Tackle, Ember, Growl-
Takashi enlarge one of his pokeball
"Kipper!" A tired Mudkip has yawn and made one of the grunts laughed
"Numel, tackle them!" "Dodge it Kipper!" Kipper barely able to dodge and made a counter attack
"Good job! Now water gun!" The mudkip spatted water at the Numel making it critical damage
"Hold on boss, I'll help too, Numel you will help too!" The other guy was saying.
"Oh no you don't, two against one is not fair, let's go...," Hmm...who needs more experience? Zigzagoon?
"Goon! Help us now!" "Alright, now it's fair!" shouted Takashi
"Head butt!" I shouted. Goon hit the newly numel
"Alright!" "Kipper use tackle!"
Kipper used tackle on the damage Numel making both of them unconsicous
"What?! Two kids beat us?" "You guys are pathetic," says a new voice.
"Boss, we're sorry," "Sorry nothing, now...my name is Maxie," "I already know your name!" Spatted Takashi. Huh? Did I miss something? "Well...if it isn't Sasaki, I thought we got rid of you," "You can't get rid of me that easily!" "Why can't be like your brother?"
His eyes burn "I have no brother," "Well Takashi, soon...you and your friend of yours will be gone!"
The two grunts and Maxie left and we turn to Captain Stern "Keep the package safe," Stern nodded "I will," I turn to Takashi "Let's go,"
May (Also her POV)
"We finally got our second badge!" I shouted.
"Yeah, thanks Mr. Briney," "No problem Ash," "So where did we go?" "How about to Slateport?" "Sure Mr. Briney,"
Ash, Max, and I went on Mr. Briney's boat and travel to Slateport city!
"I'm so happy with my new Aron!" said Max hugging the small pokeball
-Name: Aron
Type: Steel
Evolution: Lairon, Aggron
Attacks: Tackle, Harden, Mud slap-
"Max...," I trailed off "Hey you guys," said a new voice
"Oh hey Specter," I said. Specter is a guy that helped us how to go to Slateport. Lucky he was there or otherwise we would've been stuck! Specter wears a red bandana with a t-shirt that says 'Firey courage,'
"So we're going to Slateport?" "Yup!" "Then full speed ahead!" shouted Specter
Specter (A few moments before meeting Ash, Max, or May)
"Specter, we have thrown Takashi overboard," I stood up furiously
"What?! He's my blood for goodness sake!" "But...he's in Team Aqua," "I don't care if he is! He's my only blood for now...even though team Aqua killed my father," I closed my eyes for stopping the tears. I went up to Maxie
"Sir! I want to inspect the area!" "Permission granted," I nodded to Maxie and went around the city. I saw a couple of kids shouting to how to go to Dewford Island. I went up to them
"How about we go find Mr. Briney?" I said to them and they all looked confuse
"Mr. Briney is the only one who owns a boat," There face beamed
"Sure!" "Who are you?" "My name is Specter Sasaki," "Ours is Max, May, and Ash," said a boy name Max
"So let's go," And that's how my story starts
Brendan and Takashi (Brendan's POV)
"Takashi, what are you doing?" I said sweatdropping
"I want to buy this doll!" I blinked, it's a mudkip doll
"And...why?" "I don't know, don't you think it's cool?" My sweatdrop got bigger
"Umm....Takashi, shouldn't we keep going?" "Just hold on, I got to buy this sharpedo doll too!" Oh boy...I guess I'm stuck here
May (POV)
"Finally we're here, Mr. Briney can you stay here until we are done?" "Sure kids, I'll keep a look out," "Let's go May, Max, Specter," said Ash running to Slateport
"Wow...," said Max
"There's no gym...," Ash said disappointed
"Don't worry, why don't we keep going we have all the stuff we need," said Specter. Everyone nodded
"Let's go," We went to the route and Max spotted an Electrike
-Name: Electrike
Type: Thunder
Evolution: Manetric
Attacks: Thunder wave, leer, howl-
"Ooh! I have to capture it! Skip let's go!" The Treeko yawn and spread it's arm out
"We have to get this! Pound it!" Skip hit the Electrike with every punch he has. The electrike was nearly down but uses Thunder wave "Dodge it Skip!" Skip was too slow and got hit
"You alright?" Skip nodded
"Alright, now Quick attack!" Skip uses Quick attack and the electrike was down
"Go Pokeball!" The ball was shaking for a while but then a ding!
"Way to go Skip!" Then Skip was glowing
"Skip?" "It's evolving!" shouted Ash. Then the Treeko that Max had known turn into a Grovyle
-Name: Grovyle
Type: Grass
Evolution: Sceptile
Attacks: Fury cutter, quick attack, Pursuit-
"Skip?" Grovyle nodded
"Cool!" "Huh? What are you guys doing here?" said a familiar voice. I turn around and saw...Brendan?!
"Brendan!" I shouted widen my eyes
"And...Takashi," Specter said while growling. Did I miss something?
"Specter...what are you doing here?" said the guy who Specter called Takashi
"Takashi what's going on?" Brendan said
"Specter is an elite member of team magma," "You mean the group we had just beaten?!" Takashi nodded
"He is also my brother, Specter Sasaki!" Specter nodded too
"You're missing something Takashi, you're an elite member of team Aqua!" Ash stared at Specter
"You mean the group that tried to kidnapped Mr. Briney's wingull?" Specter nodded. May and I took a glance at them
"So...," "We're enemies for now," Takashi said
"Torch!" "Kipper!" My eyes widen "Let's go!" shouted both of them. Then Takashi looked at Brendan while Specter look at me
"Brendan?" "May?" Wait a minute..."You mean I have to battle against May/Brendan?!" shouted Brendan and I. Takashi and Specter nodded. Specter is my friend...This is confusing me! I nodded
"I have to!" Brendan looked shock for a bit then put on his serious face
"I guess me too. Kip!" "Amber!" "Battle!" shouted all four of us
End
Koji: That's it. Who do you think will win? Do you think this better? I add some pokemon infos and stuffs
A. Takashi and Brendan
B. Specter and May
