Hey everyone, lets get right down to buisness.
I Was a bit dissatisfied with the ending to the Kekkaishi manga, it wasn't that the actual ending was bad, it was that the events that took place just sucked.
Like with his mom and Chinsimaru getting sealed away, there were many things like those that were unnerving.
Don't read this if you don't want to see spoilers from the anime and manga.
This story will not be a rewrite, but a continuation of the ending. It will pick up around five months after the ending to the manga, there will be character development, cool new plotlines, and of course everyone loves a little fighting, and a little romance. Probably a lot of fighting. This will be a quest for Yoshimori to finish things he believes need to be done.
Those first few Huuhs are sharp breathing, as its difficult to think up an onomatopia for breathing.
Italics are thoughts.
Anyways, I don't own Kekkaishi, just enjoy it. (Disclaimer)
A reoccurring dream…of losing total feeling…
"Huuuh," Yoshimori awoke, inhaling sharply as he quickly sat up in his bed. "Huhhh…huh…huh," he attempted to catch his breath after losing it from being so abruptly awoken. "THAT dream again…," he softly spoke in a low, raspy, somewhat somber tone.
Finally breathing at a steady pace once again, he planted his hand on his face, appearing to have smacked himself as he fell back onto his bed. He glanced over at his clock, it read 2:54 a.m. Shifting his gaze up at his roof, he thought to himself, "Damn it, I'm finally allowed to sleep at this time of night, but I can't, how am I supposed to sleep if I Keep having that freaking dream."
Thoughts began to wander the corners of his brain. Interrupting his thought process with a shout, "GRRR it won't do any good to lay here and think about it, I'll never get any sleep if you don't shut off brain!" His thoughts kept pacing anyways… "Didn't you hear me, Shaddup already!," he barked, not realizing how ridiculous he looked yelling at himself. He shook his head furiously, as if the dizziness it caused could cleanse his head of all the excess thoughts. It seemed effective, as now he seemed calm, but slowly a look of sadness descended upon his face. He raised his right hand a few inches above his eyes, "I wonder if this is the same feeling that Masamori had when he used to stare at his hand all the time…now that the houin mark has disappeared, I feel…kind of empty…no, Masa just wanted to be the legitimate heir…this feeling is my own fault anyways, It shouldn't have ended that way, It's just not right…and it is all my fault…" The thought echoed and the sadness just flowed stronger.
He rolled over and stuck his elbows in the ground, using his hands to support his chin. As he settled into this new positioning he caught a glimpse of the moon, it was full, emanating a glow that showed just how beautiful the night can be. "Hmm, that sure is one pretty moon, I miss sitting under it every night with Tokine…why can't I shake this…even the moon is making me sad…stupid dream, just had to wake me up and make me feel like crap…" His thoughts just seemed to punish him, the more he thought about it, the more it hurt. Suddenly, he dropped his arms, allowing his face to belly flop into his pillow, he let out a few mumbled and muffled words, "Damn it, it's like I'm…losing total feeling…at least every feeling but one…" With those last few woeful words, he found himself falling back asleep.
A few hours later…
Yoshimori was in a deep sleep when a little boy began to sneak into his room. The little boy began to stealthily approach Yoshi from the shadows, he moved on the tips of his toes, praying that he didn't make a sound.
"Yes!," the boy thought to himself as he pumped his fist in the air, ecstatic over his ninja skills. He moved in an inch away from Yoshimori's ear…
"YOSHIMORI, TIME TO WAKE UP!"
Yoshi flew out of bed, legs tangling is his blankets he face planted into the floor, "AAAAGGGHHHHHH, OWWW, what the hell was that for Toshimori!"
The youngster fell back, consumed with laughter; he barely managed a reply through the barrage of chuckles, "HA, dad..DAD… HAHA, DAD SAYS IT'S TIME FOR BREAKFAST hahaha." The boy strained to grasp his breath as he left the room, chuckling the entire way.
Yoshi was fuming…"Stupid kid, he's lucky I don't smack him one."
Just then, Toshimori stuck his head back in the room, "I got you good Yoshimori!"
Noticing the intent to kill making its way onto Yoshi's face, Toshimori decided it was time to flee, "Bye Yoshi!"
Yoshi's eye was twitching, now he was seething with anger…"I'M GOING TO KILL THAT KID!"
The line A reoccuring Dream, Of losing total feeling is not mine, (It hits home with me though, I've written similar lines) It's from a song called 2 A.M. Lovesick by Blue October.
This chapter was a lot shorter than I had planned, I was working on it and was interrupted. I wanted to make sure I published something though, get that sense of progress. Anyways, review if you want, because I'm going to finish this no matter how much You hate it! A little to cocky?
Actually, I do appreciate reviews, good or bad.
The next chapter should be a lot longer, as it will have the rest of this chapter tied in.
Till next time
