NEON GENESIS EVANGELION
Brave New World
Fanfiction by Raven Chaos
ravenkoruki@aol.com
Disclaimer: ...I don't own Evangelion, plain and simple, so don't sue me, I have
nothing you want.
Also, this quotes some things from comics books I've read...please, Marvel, DC, or
Image, don't sue me.
Scenario: This tale is based a year or so after the death of Koaru, or Kaworu
(not sure of the spelling
of it). During a strange event that followed involving Lillith and Rei, a rip
in the stream of time was
cut, and all that was done was undone. Those who died in the years of fighting
the Angels were brought
back to life. Shinji found Kaworu, now human, in Central Dogma alive and well.
It seemed almost too good to be true, with everything back to a normal pace.
But the threat of the
Angels still exist. It's at this time that NERV seeks out Kojiro, the 7th child.
This story takes place after these events.
This little thing of fiction has a little something for everyone. Romance,
Action, Drama, Comedy, and I'll actually try my hand at a li'l bit of lemon in there.
Enjoy.
Chapter one: Squirrels and Coconuts.
Author's note: I send my regards to Marvel Comics and Joe Kelly for the comic book
Deadpool, who inspired the dialogue about "Squirrels and Coconuts".
The hallways of the NERV headquarters always had an eerie stillness to them...
you rarely saw anyone walking down the cooridors, and when you did, it was like you
were afraid to be seen so you stayed quiet as possible.
This small theory played back in Shinji Ikari's mind as he found himself lost
once again. After the event of the supposed 3rd Impact, NERV HQ had to undergo a
dramatic re-design and
cooridor replacement.
Shinji sighed and decided to give his weary feet a break and paused to sit on
a nearby bench by a
seriously out of place potted plant.
"...Reminds me of myself." he said to himself. A thing of natural beauty in a
man-made labyrinth of
dismay and emotionless void. That described him well. He always hated his place here.
He wasn't like the
others. Rei actually smiled more and talked full conversations these days. Asuka....
well, some things never
change. Kaworu...likewise...but Shinji just shrugged that off...so what if another
boy was in love with him?
Or was it another kind of love? What if he wants to have sex with me one day? What
would Asuka think? Or Misato for that matter?
"Hey! Listen to me when a superior Pilot talks to you!" Shinji 'ack'ed as a
rolled up paper tapped him
on the head, stirring him from his mental panic. Kojiro stood over him, that wide
grin threatening to slice
his face in two. He could have been Kaworu's twin if it wasn't for his green eyes
and brown hair. He was garbed
in his customized plug suit, which looked like the body frame of his Eva,
"Huh? ...did you say something, Kojiro?" Shinji shook his head and could've
sworn he heard a rattle in there.
"I said..." Kojiro cup his hands around Shinji's ear. "DOC AKAGI SAYS SYNCH
TESTS IN 15 MINUTES!!!!!"
Now Shinji's head reeled as Kojiro's supposed war cry echoed through his ear
canals.
"Got it this time? C'mon, I'll show ya the way...It's not where it used to
be." Kojiro practically dragged
the younger Pilot.
The usual Scenario....all five pilots in their plugs, just sitting there,
waiting for something to
happen. How else could you describe a Synch Test? It was almost pointless too.
It doesn't take a genius to
pilot an Eva Unit! Hell, even Baka Shinji aced it on his first try!
"Asuka, your Attention levels dropping...Mind keeping an open mind about
that? We don't want to have
to scrape you off the plug wall when we do the LCL test." Dr. Ritsuko Akagi spoke
to the fiery haired pilot
through the com.
Asuka snapped to attention. Okay, so you did have to do something...sit there
and make sure you keep
perfect mental stillness when they run the LCL test, of course if you didnt, the
pressure would cause your
head to pop, so you just sit there in pefect bordedom...which was less fun then
spending the night at
Wonder Girls house.
On the deck of the observation area, Maya tapped frantically at her keyboard,
occasionally cussing
under her breath.
"Problem, kid?" Ritsuko asked.
"Gah! This damn keyboard sticks too much! I can't get any proper reading on it!"
Maya backed off and sighed.
Ritsuko arched a brow and tapped a key. Didn't stick. She tapped another one.
Nothing. "Are you sure, Maya?"
"I'm postive, Senpei..." she tapped a key that had stuck before. Nothing.
"What the...?"
Laughter could be heard from Com 0.5.
"Kojiro......." Maya growled. Then, suddenly, all her keys on her board retracted
and popped back up, then
repeated the process.
"Just having a little fun, Maya...Don't get your panties in a twist." Kojiro
calmed down his laughter
and sighed.
Maya shook her head and went back to processing files.
"You have time for that sort of thing after the tests, Mr. Lister." Ritsuko was
the only one who called
Kojiro by his last name, Lister. "See me after the tests."
"Mmm mmm mm...Someone got in trouble..." Kaworu mused from his plug.
"Bite me, Nagisa. You wouldn't know a good prank if it jumped up and bit you
in the ass." Kojiro sat back
in his plug, pondering once again why his plug smelled like a bad nosebleed.
"Watch the language there, kid." Ritsuko got onto him again.
Kojiro made a face with the monitor off and hit a switch on his right wrist grid.
As Ritsuko took a seat, she jerked up instantly as her chair sent electric shocks
to her bum. Now all but
Rei and Asuka, who thought this was totally imature, were laughing their heads off.
"...I fail to understand how delivering electric shocks can be found as amusing."
Rei pondered.
"Don't think to hard about it, Wonder Girl...only a twisted, immature, perverted
male mind could think
something like that was funny." Asuka huffed.
"Yeah, puberty's been kind to you too, sweetheart." Kojiro's face popped up on
Asuka's monitor.
Afterwards, Ristuko gave Kojiro a little talking two, which was pointless, because
chances were he'd do
the same thing next time.
"How'd you do that anyway?" Kaworu asked as the five met in the lounge outside
the testing room.
"...Used my device scrambler on his plug suit to malfunction the keyboard and
redirect it's control to my
data-wrist...and I used my data-jack system to pinpoint the chair and used the
nearby computer terminal to sneak
in a large amount of voltage...a complex system." Kojiro said proudly as he took
a swig of from his can of soda.
"Sounds like a lot of math..." Shinji said as he grabbed a soda from the
nearby machine.
"Yeah, I don't care much for it either..." Kojiro sighed.
"And it sounds completely childish if you ask me!" Asuka had that tone again,
obviously still upset over the
puberty crack. Kojiro rolled his eyes and waited for it, her little ego-driven speach
about how she's better than the
other 4 incompetent pilots...he also took this pause to come up with a clever retort.
"I mean, fooling with her keyboard! Big deal! I would've blacked out the whole
room! You always do things no one
cares about! And shocking her butt really takes the cake! How do you expect to get a
girlfriend if you act like such
a...a...Moron! You're like Shinji sometimes, I swear it!"
"Hey..." Shinji looked up from his comic book.
"Don't make me get started about the time I caught you and the Albino Wonder
over there in the bathroom last
week!" Asuka pointed her finger at the two.
Kaworu hung his head and Shinji hid his face.
"You even do that in battle!" Asuka went on. The point about the battle was
almost pointless, since they only
these days practiced in a VR chamber. "Yeah, throw a flash bomb at an enemy mech
who's carrying a railgun and a
blaster cannon! You're lucky you don't get killed! PLUS you hog all the glory when
it's over! I can't believe how
NERV thinks you're so damn special! Big deal! I could pilot that toothpick of an
Eva of yours with my eyes shut!"
Now she was trespassing into the realm of insult.
Kojiro studied her face, wearing that 'Is that it?'look.
"Just who the hell do you think you are?" She put her hands on her hips,
looking down on the older pilot.
Kojiro started laughing.
"...hehheh...HAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!! oh god...stop!....oh, my
sides are hurting!!....woo hoo!!!!"
He fell off the bench he was sitting on. Passerby's stopped to watch the pilot
roll on the floor with laughter,
thinking perhaps the long tests had finally broken him.
"What's so damn funny!?" Asuka growled.
Kaworu and Shinji hid in a nearby closet and Rei simply backed away down
the hall.
Kojiro calmed down and got up.
"Three words, toots ...Squirrels and Coconuts." He said when his chuckling
stopped.
Asuka gave him a confused look. "What?!"
Kojiro sat back down on the bench, looking Asuka in the eye and giving her a
dry grin. "Ever see that
cartoon where that Squirrel tries to eat a coconut? ...Chuck Jones, I think....Anywho,
this retarded squirrel
thinks this coconut is the motherload of all acorns, so he tries to bite into it
and breaks his incisors...then
he tries cracking it. He uses jackhammers, chainsaws, a nail in a board...nothing
works. So finally, this moronic
squirrel carries this sucker up to the top of the Empire State Building back in
the States. He heaves that thing
off and it hits the ground like a 5 ton weight....and Crack! it's shell peels back...
you know what's inside?
Another shell to crack..."
By now everyone was back to their orignal spots, not fearing Asuka's wrath
anymore. Asuka herself was busy
trying to decipher this load of bull Kojiro was feeding her.
"What's yer point?" She asked.
"That Squirrel goes through all that to crack the shell, only to find another
shell to crack...That squirrel
is in Cartoon Hell...That Squirrel is me. Every time I get a shot at doing something
good, I do it...and it gets me
nowhere, just like that squirrel...and, after a few months, the cartoon reruns and
I try again...and again...and
again...and again...and again."
Kojiro got up and took off to change back into his clothes, folding his arms
behind his back. "Again...and
again....and again...and again..."
This left Asuka stunned. She never truly had been outdone in the logic
department, and now she was outdone
by a rookie Pilot! The embarassment was overwhelming.
"...I do believe Kojiro-kun has stumped you, Asuka..." Rei said
Asuka glared at the icy-haired girl, the delivered a hard stare at Shinji,
then hissed and stomped off to change.
"...Does she always do that?" Kaworu pondered.
"...Always." Shinji sighed.
Scene: Misato's apartment, 7:00 pm.
Shinji was sitting on the couch watching some show on new inventions. It was
indeed the only interesting
thing on at that time of night. Asuka was at the table doing homework, occasionally
asking Shinji the meaning
of a certain kanji symbol she was unfamiliar with. It was only at this time of the
afternoon the two got along
just fine. No fighting, no quarreling, no shouting. Just yes and no answers and the
occasional explanation.
"...Shinji...?" Asuka asked after a few minutes of silence.
"Yeah?" Shinji turned to face Asuka over the couch.
"...What Kojiro said today...About the squirrel and the coconut..." Asuka had
that thoughtful frown on her face.
"What about it?"
"What do you think he means by 'Trying and not getting anywhere'?"
Shinji thought. "...The way I see it, it means he tries his hardest, but it
does no good to the situation...
like when we met him in combat a few months back...yeah, he helped...but he didn't
defeat the monster...he simply
was another gun to shoot while Rei detonated a Sonic Grenade...He's simply thinks
he's the guy in the background in
an action movie shooting at the bad guys but not taking any of them down."
Asuka thought this over. "...you think he see's himself like that?"
"Well...you did ask who he thought he was..." Shinji smirked and looked back
at the TV. Now the host was showing
off some automatic Beer Opener.
Asuka was silent again, just sitting there at the table, pondering.
Scene: Elsewhere, a park of some sort.
Ah, the night...what better place to be when your plotting against an organization!
Koruki walked quietly through the park, keeping his eyes open for sight of his contact.
He soon met up with two other men, garbed in black and concealed in shadow.
"You have your mission...?" One asked.
"Of course...Send out the Monster, incompasitate Lister, take out the other
pilots, make off with Lillith
before the smoke clears, all in order...right?" Koruki ran off the objectives.
"Correct...we won't allow screw ups like our last agent." The other man said.
"I don't screw up, gentlmen...now if you'll excuse me, the red light district
is calling my name." Koruki turned
and headed off down the oppostie path.
As the man left into the darkness of night, the two men faced west to gaze at
the cities night lights.
"...That fool takes things too lightly. He'll be dead before he can get into
NERV."
"...Forget him. By next week, this will all be ours."
"...hmm...I just hope that fool knows what he's doing."
"Don't worry about it...I already put in the call that we found our pawn."
"...'Nothing depicted in the Dead Sea scrolls may occur...this will teach the
old men a lesson'...heh heh...
Indeed...Seele will have it's revenge on you yet, Gendo Ikari..."
"C'mon, before someone see's us...It's a brave new world out there, Kaiser...
and it's just waiting for us to
come and get it."
End Chapter one.
Please review this so I know I'm on the right track.
No Flames. Never got one, don't know what they are, afraid to find out.
Next time: Chapter 2- "Trapped!"
Brave New World
Fanfiction by Raven Chaos
ravenkoruki@aol.com
Disclaimer: ...I don't own Evangelion, plain and simple, so don't sue me, I have
nothing you want.
Also, this quotes some things from comics books I've read...please, Marvel, DC, or
Image, don't sue me.
Scenario: This tale is based a year or so after the death of Koaru, or Kaworu
(not sure of the spelling
of it). During a strange event that followed involving Lillith and Rei, a rip
in the stream of time was
cut, and all that was done was undone. Those who died in the years of fighting
the Angels were brought
back to life. Shinji found Kaworu, now human, in Central Dogma alive and well.
It seemed almost too good to be true, with everything back to a normal pace.
But the threat of the
Angels still exist. It's at this time that NERV seeks out Kojiro, the 7th child.
This story takes place after these events.
This little thing of fiction has a little something for everyone. Romance,
Action, Drama, Comedy, and I'll actually try my hand at a li'l bit of lemon in there.
Enjoy.
Chapter one: Squirrels and Coconuts.
Author's note: I send my regards to Marvel Comics and Joe Kelly for the comic book
Deadpool, who inspired the dialogue about "Squirrels and Coconuts".
The hallways of the NERV headquarters always had an eerie stillness to them...
you rarely saw anyone walking down the cooridors, and when you did, it was like you
were afraid to be seen so you stayed quiet as possible.
This small theory played back in Shinji Ikari's mind as he found himself lost
once again. After the event of the supposed 3rd Impact, NERV HQ had to undergo a
dramatic re-design and
cooridor replacement.
Shinji sighed and decided to give his weary feet a break and paused to sit on
a nearby bench by a
seriously out of place potted plant.
"...Reminds me of myself." he said to himself. A thing of natural beauty in a
man-made labyrinth of
dismay and emotionless void. That described him well. He always hated his place here.
He wasn't like the
others. Rei actually smiled more and talked full conversations these days. Asuka....
well, some things never
change. Kaworu...likewise...but Shinji just shrugged that off...so what if another
boy was in love with him?
Or was it another kind of love? What if he wants to have sex with me one day? What
would Asuka think? Or Misato for that matter?
"Hey! Listen to me when a superior Pilot talks to you!" Shinji 'ack'ed as a
rolled up paper tapped him
on the head, stirring him from his mental panic. Kojiro stood over him, that wide
grin threatening to slice
his face in two. He could have been Kaworu's twin if it wasn't for his green eyes
and brown hair. He was garbed
in his customized plug suit, which looked like the body frame of his Eva,
"Huh? ...did you say something, Kojiro?" Shinji shook his head and could've
sworn he heard a rattle in there.
"I said..." Kojiro cup his hands around Shinji's ear. "DOC AKAGI SAYS SYNCH
TESTS IN 15 MINUTES!!!!!"
Now Shinji's head reeled as Kojiro's supposed war cry echoed through his ear
canals.
"Got it this time? C'mon, I'll show ya the way...It's not where it used to
be." Kojiro practically dragged
the younger Pilot.
The usual Scenario....all five pilots in their plugs, just sitting there,
waiting for something to
happen. How else could you describe a Synch Test? It was almost pointless too.
It doesn't take a genius to
pilot an Eva Unit! Hell, even Baka Shinji aced it on his first try!
"Asuka, your Attention levels dropping...Mind keeping an open mind about
that? We don't want to have
to scrape you off the plug wall when we do the LCL test." Dr. Ritsuko Akagi spoke
to the fiery haired pilot
through the com.
Asuka snapped to attention. Okay, so you did have to do something...sit there
and make sure you keep
perfect mental stillness when they run the LCL test, of course if you didnt, the
pressure would cause your
head to pop, so you just sit there in pefect bordedom...which was less fun then
spending the night at
Wonder Girls house.
On the deck of the observation area, Maya tapped frantically at her keyboard,
occasionally cussing
under her breath.
"Problem, kid?" Ritsuko asked.
"Gah! This damn keyboard sticks too much! I can't get any proper reading on it!"
Maya backed off and sighed.
Ritsuko arched a brow and tapped a key. Didn't stick. She tapped another one.
Nothing. "Are you sure, Maya?"
"I'm postive, Senpei..." she tapped a key that had stuck before. Nothing.
"What the...?"
Laughter could be heard from Com 0.5.
"Kojiro......." Maya growled. Then, suddenly, all her keys on her board retracted
and popped back up, then
repeated the process.
"Just having a little fun, Maya...Don't get your panties in a twist." Kojiro
calmed down his laughter
and sighed.
Maya shook her head and went back to processing files.
"You have time for that sort of thing after the tests, Mr. Lister." Ritsuko was
the only one who called
Kojiro by his last name, Lister. "See me after the tests."
"Mmm mmm mm...Someone got in trouble..." Kaworu mused from his plug.
"Bite me, Nagisa. You wouldn't know a good prank if it jumped up and bit you
in the ass." Kojiro sat back
in his plug, pondering once again why his plug smelled like a bad nosebleed.
"Watch the language there, kid." Ritsuko got onto him again.
Kojiro made a face with the monitor off and hit a switch on his right wrist grid.
As Ritsuko took a seat, she jerked up instantly as her chair sent electric shocks
to her bum. Now all but
Rei and Asuka, who thought this was totally imature, were laughing their heads off.
"...I fail to understand how delivering electric shocks can be found as amusing."
Rei pondered.
"Don't think to hard about it, Wonder Girl...only a twisted, immature, perverted
male mind could think
something like that was funny." Asuka huffed.
"Yeah, puberty's been kind to you too, sweetheart." Kojiro's face popped up on
Asuka's monitor.
Afterwards, Ristuko gave Kojiro a little talking two, which was pointless, because
chances were he'd do
the same thing next time.
"How'd you do that anyway?" Kaworu asked as the five met in the lounge outside
the testing room.
"...Used my device scrambler on his plug suit to malfunction the keyboard and
redirect it's control to my
data-wrist...and I used my data-jack system to pinpoint the chair and used the
nearby computer terminal to sneak
in a large amount of voltage...a complex system." Kojiro said proudly as he took
a swig of from his can of soda.
"Sounds like a lot of math..." Shinji said as he grabbed a soda from the
nearby machine.
"Yeah, I don't care much for it either..." Kojiro sighed.
"And it sounds completely childish if you ask me!" Asuka had that tone again,
obviously still upset over the
puberty crack. Kojiro rolled his eyes and waited for it, her little ego-driven speach
about how she's better than the
other 4 incompetent pilots...he also took this pause to come up with a clever retort.
"I mean, fooling with her keyboard! Big deal! I would've blacked out the whole
room! You always do things no one
cares about! And shocking her butt really takes the cake! How do you expect to get a
girlfriend if you act like such
a...a...Moron! You're like Shinji sometimes, I swear it!"
"Hey..." Shinji looked up from his comic book.
"Don't make me get started about the time I caught you and the Albino Wonder
over there in the bathroom last
week!" Asuka pointed her finger at the two.
Kaworu hung his head and Shinji hid his face.
"You even do that in battle!" Asuka went on. The point about the battle was
almost pointless, since they only
these days practiced in a VR chamber. "Yeah, throw a flash bomb at an enemy mech
who's carrying a railgun and a
blaster cannon! You're lucky you don't get killed! PLUS you hog all the glory when
it's over! I can't believe how
NERV thinks you're so damn special! Big deal! I could pilot that toothpick of an
Eva of yours with my eyes shut!"
Now she was trespassing into the realm of insult.
Kojiro studied her face, wearing that 'Is that it?'look.
"Just who the hell do you think you are?" She put her hands on her hips,
looking down on the older pilot.
Kojiro started laughing.
"...hehheh...HAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!! oh god...stop!....oh, my
sides are hurting!!....woo hoo!!!!"
He fell off the bench he was sitting on. Passerby's stopped to watch the pilot
roll on the floor with laughter,
thinking perhaps the long tests had finally broken him.
"What's so damn funny!?" Asuka growled.
Kaworu and Shinji hid in a nearby closet and Rei simply backed away down
the hall.
Kojiro calmed down and got up.
"Three words, toots ...Squirrels and Coconuts." He said when his chuckling
stopped.
Asuka gave him a confused look. "What?!"
Kojiro sat back down on the bench, looking Asuka in the eye and giving her a
dry grin. "Ever see that
cartoon where that Squirrel tries to eat a coconut? ...Chuck Jones, I think....Anywho,
this retarded squirrel
thinks this coconut is the motherload of all acorns, so he tries to bite into it
and breaks his incisors...then
he tries cracking it. He uses jackhammers, chainsaws, a nail in a board...nothing
works. So finally, this moronic
squirrel carries this sucker up to the top of the Empire State Building back in
the States. He heaves that thing
off and it hits the ground like a 5 ton weight....and Crack! it's shell peels back...
you know what's inside?
Another shell to crack..."
By now everyone was back to their orignal spots, not fearing Asuka's wrath
anymore. Asuka herself was busy
trying to decipher this load of bull Kojiro was feeding her.
"What's yer point?" She asked.
"That Squirrel goes through all that to crack the shell, only to find another
shell to crack...That squirrel
is in Cartoon Hell...That Squirrel is me. Every time I get a shot at doing something
good, I do it...and it gets me
nowhere, just like that squirrel...and, after a few months, the cartoon reruns and
I try again...and again...and
again...and again...and again."
Kojiro got up and took off to change back into his clothes, folding his arms
behind his back. "Again...and
again....and again...and again..."
This left Asuka stunned. She never truly had been outdone in the logic
department, and now she was outdone
by a rookie Pilot! The embarassment was overwhelming.
"...I do believe Kojiro-kun has stumped you, Asuka..." Rei said
Asuka glared at the icy-haired girl, the delivered a hard stare at Shinji,
then hissed and stomped off to change.
"...Does she always do that?" Kaworu pondered.
"...Always." Shinji sighed.
Scene: Misato's apartment, 7:00 pm.
Shinji was sitting on the couch watching some show on new inventions. It was
indeed the only interesting
thing on at that time of night. Asuka was at the table doing homework, occasionally
asking Shinji the meaning
of a certain kanji symbol she was unfamiliar with. It was only at this time of the
afternoon the two got along
just fine. No fighting, no quarreling, no shouting. Just yes and no answers and the
occasional explanation.
"...Shinji...?" Asuka asked after a few minutes of silence.
"Yeah?" Shinji turned to face Asuka over the couch.
"...What Kojiro said today...About the squirrel and the coconut..." Asuka had
that thoughtful frown on her face.
"What about it?"
"What do you think he means by 'Trying and not getting anywhere'?"
Shinji thought. "...The way I see it, it means he tries his hardest, but it
does no good to the situation...
like when we met him in combat a few months back...yeah, he helped...but he didn't
defeat the monster...he simply
was another gun to shoot while Rei detonated a Sonic Grenade...He's simply thinks
he's the guy in the background in
an action movie shooting at the bad guys but not taking any of them down."
Asuka thought this over. "...you think he see's himself like that?"
"Well...you did ask who he thought he was..." Shinji smirked and looked back
at the TV. Now the host was showing
off some automatic Beer Opener.
Asuka was silent again, just sitting there at the table, pondering.
Scene: Elsewhere, a park of some sort.
Ah, the night...what better place to be when your plotting against an organization!
Koruki walked quietly through the park, keeping his eyes open for sight of his contact.
He soon met up with two other men, garbed in black and concealed in shadow.
"You have your mission...?" One asked.
"Of course...Send out the Monster, incompasitate Lister, take out the other
pilots, make off with Lillith
before the smoke clears, all in order...right?" Koruki ran off the objectives.
"Correct...we won't allow screw ups like our last agent." The other man said.
"I don't screw up, gentlmen...now if you'll excuse me, the red light district
is calling my name." Koruki turned
and headed off down the oppostie path.
As the man left into the darkness of night, the two men faced west to gaze at
the cities night lights.
"...That fool takes things too lightly. He'll be dead before he can get into
NERV."
"...Forget him. By next week, this will all be ours."
"...hmm...I just hope that fool knows what he's doing."
"Don't worry about it...I already put in the call that we found our pawn."
"...'Nothing depicted in the Dead Sea scrolls may occur...this will teach the
old men a lesson'...heh heh...
Indeed...Seele will have it's revenge on you yet, Gendo Ikari..."
"C'mon, before someone see's us...It's a brave new world out there, Kaiser...
and it's just waiting for us to
come and get it."
End Chapter one.
Please review this so I know I'm on the right track.
No Flames. Never got one, don't know what they are, afraid to find out.
Next time: Chapter 2- "Trapped!"
