Note: I removed the Daemons from the 'base talk' as I've decided to call it, mainly because I'm trying to stay with a mostly technologically based story, not magic.
Note 2: I decided to clean this chapter up a bit.
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In the Milky Way Galaxy was a planet called Earth, populated by an organic species called humans. There wasn't anything notable about this species in terms of biology and physiology, but they were a wonder of there own when it came to ingenuity and spirit. One of these humans was a male named Jack Darby, a pale skinned teen with raven black hair. This seemingly insignificant human wielded the Omnitrix, an incredible device created by the great Azmuth. The device itself allowed the wearer to change into one of a few million different alien species, each one with their own abilities.
Jack Darby was, in essence, a hero to the universe. By his side stood his human friends, Miko Nakadai, Raf Esquival, his mother June Darby, and of course, his Cybertronian friends, Optimus Prime, Bulkhead, Wheeljack, Bumblebee, Ratchet, and his lover Arcee. With his friends and family by his side, Jack Darby was pretty much a force to be reckoned with, but what none of them realized was that something was coming there way.
In the depths of space, just outside the Milky Way Galaxy, we see a small, gunmetal grey cube, no bigger than a human adult, zooming through space, and in its center, appeared to be a small metal red orb in the front. Inside that orb was a highly advanced mind with only one thought.
It needed to get to Earth, soon.
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On planet Earth, inside the unsuspicious looking mountain that was home and headquarters to the Autobots, all was peaceful. Ratchet was continuing his work on trying to perfect the Synthetic Energon, Bulkhead and Wheeljack were lobbing on the other side of the room with Miko watching from the couch,Optimus was speaking to Special Agent Fowler, Jack and Arcee were...having a good time in her room, and Raf was showing Bumblebee a game he found, a strategy game called Dawn Of War. (which he found a really good mod for, called Ultimate Armageddon) Right now , Raf was showing Bumblebee the different races in the game, which surprisingly, existed.
"So your telling me that the Tau, Orcs, Eldar, and Tyranids all exist?" Raf asked. Bumblebee nodded in response. Ratchet also chipped in his thoughts "Of course they exist" he said as if it were the most obvious thing in the world, "I myself have met a few Eldar and Tau myself during Cybertron's golden age, they're relatively peaceful, the Eldar more so. The Orcs and Tyranids are monsters that are thankfully several galaxies away."
Bulkhead, Miko and Wheeljack were looking over at Ratchet with newfound interest. "I've actually met some Tau myself" Wheeljack said. "They have some pretty nice tech, but they absolutely suck at close range, and hand to hand even more so."
Raf looked at Ratchet and Wheeljack with surprise, but then realized something.
"And the Necrons?"
As soon as the words left his mouth, it felt as though the room got slightly colder, and all the bots went deathly silent, though Fowler and Miko were confused why.
"What in Sam Hill is a Necron?" Fowler asked.
Ratchet looked around nervously before looking at Optimus, who nodded.
"The Necrons are a mysterious race of robotic skeletal warriors that have lain dormant in their stasis-tombs for more than 60 million years and who are the soulless creations and former servants of the ancient C'tan, the terrible Star Gods of Eldar myth. The Necrons are ancient beyond reckoning, predating even the birth of the Eldar, however, they started to awaken from their Tomb Worlds before the Golden Age of Cybertron, for they will stop at nothing for conquest and the restoration of the Necron Empire since the disappearance of the Old Ones more than 60 million standard years ago. The Necrons are a completely robotic humanoid species whose technological prowess is probably unmatched by any of the other intelligent species of the galaxy. Yet out of a desire for vengeance against the more fortunate long-lived ancient xenos race called the Old Ones, and the trickery of the godlike intelligences known as the C'tan, the Necrons shed their original organic forms and lost all forms of compassion and empathy, becoming ruthless, undying killing machines who are determined to exert their mastery over the galaxy once more."
Ratchet looked over everyone who was paying attention before continuing.
"They will stop at nothing to bring back their empire, even if it means killing everyone they meet, though fortunately, they are several galaxies away from us, and are being held back by the efforts of the other races I mentioned."
Raf looked horrified with the thought that the Necrons existed, while Miko looked excited. "These Necrons guys sound awesome!" Miko yelled. Ratchet glared at Miko before speaking. "I can assure you that the Necrons are not peaceful by any means, and will be more than willing to-" He was interrupted when the alarm went off, grabbing everybody's attention. Ratchet quickly went over to the computer to investigate the cause of the alarm while a disheveled, but slightly smiling Arcee and Jack entered the room.
"There seems to be a small metallic object entering the Earth's atmosphere, I can't recognize anything about it, but its trajectory indicates that's going to land just outside of Las Vegas." Miko jumped up at the chance of going to Las Vegas, but Jack sat her back down. "We have no idea what we're dealing with here Miko, and for all we know, it could be dangerous."
Optimus looked down at Jack and nodded. "Bulkhead, Ratchet, Arcee, Jack, and I will investigate the object, Bumblebee and Wheeljack, you watch over the humans." Everybody nodded in agreement, while Bumblebee went over and activated the coordinates Ratchet had inputted for him into the groundbridge. The groundbridge swirled to life in a flurry of green energy. Optimus looked over the team going with him before speaking. "Autobots, roll out!" Optimus, Ratchet, Bulkhead and Arcee transformed into their respective vehicle modes, while Jack pulled up the sleeve on his grey shirt to reveal the Omnitrix. He fiddled with the dial until it showed a familar looking hologram with tall pointy shoulders and a floating head.
He slammed down on the dial and he was engulfed in a flash of green light. He felt his skin become harder, more metallic in nature. His neck shrank back into his body and he felt his hands change into pincers. When the flash of green light disappeared to reveal Jack had turned into a very famiilar alien.
"LODESTAR!"
With the team ready, they raced through the groundbridge, unaware of what they were about to face.
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The unknown object crashes into the desert floor, just outside of Las Vegas, scattering dust and rocks everywhere. When the dust clears, it reveals the object to be unharmed, just dusty.
Than it changed.
The object explodes into a flurry of tiny metallic shards, with the red orb floating above it. The metal bits twist and turn in the air like liquid. The composition of metal pieces slowly form a humanoid appearence, with the orb appearing to act like a head. When the transformation is complete, it appeared to be a humanoid like being that was about eight feet tall, more specifically a female one, with the orb acting as a head.
The being turned to face the city that was Las Vegas and pieces of data began flowing all around the orb, both on it, and floating around it. It than spoke. "I must find him." It said, the voice like that of of a digitalized female. A flash of light appeared behind it, causing 'her' to look behind her, just in time to see the Autobots emerge from it and transform, their blasters raised, but what the being really noticed was the alien that stood beneath them with a familar symbol on its chest. The being calmly walked towards the group, ignoring the weapons pointed at it. It stopped just 10 feet from them and 'looked' at Jack. "Are you the human known as Jack Darby?" Jack's eyes narrowed slightly at the being. "Yea, and you are?" he said, not lowering his hands.
What happened next, surprised everybody, The being than outstretched its hand in the form of a greeting. "My name is Palidan, and I have urgent news for you." Jack slowly lowered his hands, but he didn't relax his body. "And what would that news be?" Palidan was silent before speaking. "War is coming eventually to this planet,for you have attracted the attention of the Necrons."
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What do guys think of the sequel to an awesome story so far, comments and constructive criticism are welcome while flames are ignored.