Hey everybody I am rewriting Ecto Effect and I hope you enjoy the rewrite. There will be a few differences to the old one. Well on with the story.
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Danny has running, both figuratively and literally. He was running from both his past and the Guys in White. He had been running for five years ever since he was fifteen when Dan killed his family and Clockwork couldn't bring them back due to the Observant Council.
Danny was starting to tire after five years of paranoia and constant fear looking over his shoulder. They first picked up his trail after he locked down Fenton Works. He was currently headed north in the upper most regions of Canada.
"Stop Ghost Boy!" Yelled an agent as they chased Danny on a mountainside with dozens of troopers and helicopters. Danny ducked as a large anti-ghost round flew above his head by scant inches.
Skidding to a stop at the cliff's edge he turned towards the heavy mechanized troopers with heavy weapons pointing at him. Danny looked over his shoulder to see a lake at the bottom of the cliff about a hundred feet down. Danny smirked and looked up only to see the GiW fire Ecto-rockets at him.
Danny tried to raise an Ecto-shield but with years of running and no rest he was too weak to raise it in time. The rockets hit him directly in the chest and threw him over the cliffside. Fortunately for Danny there was a small natural ghost portal about six feet below him. Falling threw the portal Danny only had seconds to see his surroundings before he fell unconscious.
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Jayne Shepard had just returned from picking up Mordin Solus and was talking to Garrus when am alert sounded.
"What is it, EDI?" Jayne asked as they ran towards the elevator. "Unknown bio-signature and radiation signature detected in the cargo-bay." EDI told them as Miranda and Jacob met them at the elevator. Inside was Mordin, once the arrived in the cargo-bay they fanned out to find the signatures.
Finally Garrus called out, "found it!" floating i. front of him was a moderately sized eerie glowing green tear. Mordin immediately started scanning it with his omni-tool and muttering to himself at a rapid pace.
Janye turned to look for the life sign EDI found and saw a foot lying next to a crate directly in front of the tear. Walking over she was a human male of about twenty to twenty one laying unconscious on the deck. "Garrus I found our stowaway over here. Help me get him to the med-bay."
They heard a shout of surprise and turned to see the tear closing itself up as Mordin tried to get more readings before it disappeared. After they dropped him off at the med-bay they went to the conference room to discuss the new guy on the ship.
"Mordin just what was that tear thing?" Mordin shrugged and started into a scientific speel about the strange readings. "Mordin slow down and take a breath."
Mordin nodded. " The energy signature is unlike Anything I have ever heard about. It didn't decay but seemed to close on it's own regard. The human we found also seema to have a similar radiation reading but unique at the same time. Either he created the Tear or travelled through it or both."
Jayne interrupted him. " Wait so that tear was some kind of portal?" Mordin nodded and quickly spoke, " yes but it appears either he has no way of controlling the exit yet or he went through in distress."
"I would put my money on distress Commander Shepard," spoke Chakwas as she entered the room. "Our guest had fragments of metal embedded in his clothing and his skin In some places. He is slightly malnourished but he will be fine in a few hours which leads to the unusual things about him."
Jayne turns to her. "What kind of unusual things?"
"Well I removed the shrapnel from his skin but before I could put medi-gel on it his skin started to knit itself back together although at a slow rate due to lack of energy I would say, at the rate he is healing if he was healthy his healing rate would almost be krogan level. But what is really interesting is his genetic structure, it is covered in a strange energy reading and has nearly no junk DNA sequences compared to the average human."
Jayne shakes her head trying to understand. "What do you "junk" sequences?"
Chakwas nodded, "The average human genome has about 40% of its genome full of random genetic pairs that while affecting your genome they aren't really important. They are what causes evolution as they change in the next generation which can cause mutations over generations. Miranda's genome was manipulated to make her "perfect" but even she has around 30% of her genome is junk. Our young guest only 12% of his is junk."
"Have you been able to run his DNA in the records yet EDI?" Miranda asked to the AI. "I have not had a chance to connect to the Extranet to run it yet. Also our guest is awake Commander."
Chakwas was surprised. "I gave him a sedative that would a krogan out for three days!"
They quickly headed for the elevator. They would make sure the boy wasn't a threat to the ship.
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Well the first rewritten chapter is up so let me know how you like and if you have any suggestions for me