Hey everyone out there in fanfiction world I decided to go back and edit some stories of mine this one I especially wanted to fix the punctuation nothing else I didn't know anything about it when this story was created so I decided to change that problem anyways onto the story
Danny just sat there sitting next to a grave his grave
How could he be so stupid he knew that his parents would reject him as soon as they found out
But still he went back
Flashback
As soon as he had stepped into the house he knew something had been wrong it was quiet too quiet
Suddenly he saw something move out of the corner of his eye
He heard his parents voices "how could you lie to us like that"? asked Jack "after all we did for you you still lied to us". said Maddie
"Well to give me some credit you guys are ghost hunters so what else was I supposed to think" said Danny
Suddenly he heard a ecto gun fire and there was a sharp pain in his shoulder he yelped out in pain
"That's a good point Danny so if we kill you we can say well he is a ghost and we are ghost hunters". Maddie cackled
"what's got into you two you would never do this to your own son". said Danny
"That's the thing you aren't our son"! yelled Maddie as she pointed the ecto bazooka at Danny
Danny just stood there and let the blast hit him he knew he could never hurt his parents no matter how much they hated him just as the world went dark he looked to his parents and saw two ghosts coming out of them they hissed and then cackled.
Then they said "now that the great Danny Phantom is going to die let ussssssss leave". They both cackled and left.
Danny could see his parents coming out of the trances they were in they looked to Danny in horror as they raced over Maddie check for a pulse yelled Jack
Maddie checked but couldn't find one at that moment Danny changed back into his human form and opened his eyes and in a whisper like tone said to his mom and dad
"Mom Dad it isn't your fault two ghosts took you over and possessed you and please tell Sam that I loved her and I am sorry I couldn't show her that tell her I was going to love her to the ends of time and Tuck he chuckled lightly give him his present its under my bed I as going to give it to him for his birthday in a few weeks but I guess I don't have that much time I love you two". he said
His eyes closed for the final time.
End flashback
Danny saw two people come up to his grave site he knew these two people
"I can't believe he loved me and he never told me that". said the girl
"I know Sam I just wish I could thank him for the new pda he got me". said the boy
"He was the best boy a girl could ask for tucker". said Sam with tears in her eyes
At that moment Sam could of sworn she heard Danny's voice say "I love you Sam".
She smiled and just walked away Tucker trailing behind her.
So how do you like it I added punctuation to it
Please read and review especially those that said my punctuation needed work
