Ice: Our dearest readers we're sorry it so long for another story and this is really just sort of a poem.
Fire: But don't get your panties in a wad we're working on getting everything updated.
Wonton: w00t! I really like this one! And our Buddy here would like to say something.
Gabriel: Well These guys here were talling me about the fic Skeletons by Maiden of the Moon and this idea poped up and I got them to write it for me.
Randa: Well here you all go...
Edward: All my life I've watched you grow. All my life I've watched you change. Our mother watched us both, so she never saw the individual changes and growth in you. I've seen your smiles at the praise given to you.
When our mother died I pulled you into my ambition. I see it now, I've gotten you in more trouble than you ever could alone. Yet somehow, the only thing I would ever change, was the fact that you had to have your body taken away. You're my brother, I love you.
Alphonse: My brother as I've grown, as I've changed, I've only saw you. Our mother was there, but you were the one I wanted praise from. Every time you made fun of me it always hurt more then the bullies.
It hurt me to see the hurt in your eyes as I talked about dad. How he would come back to see our dying mom. I wouldn't listen and I always fought.
While maybe it was your ambition to revive mother, I never wanted to see you hurt or in my position. I don't truly remember what happened those years we were together, looking for the Philosophers Stone, but I do remember that last thought I had and the sight of you lying in a pool of your own blood. I couldn't let you die.
Edward: I almost gave my life for you
Alphonse: And I almost gave my life for you
Wonton: Tell us what you think.
Fire: Love? Hate? Needs a little work? Flame if you must or be extra sugary.
Randa: I personally thought it could have used a little more work but... A friend said it was good so we just went with it.
Gabriel: It is a good poem. You just need to be more confident in your abilities.
Ice: SEE YA NEXT TIME!!!