Whoa! Kagome Narome here! I'm back baby! It's spring break for me and I FINALLY got to editing the story line! (Only first chapter though...) Ok, so I took a few things out and added a few things in. Then I tried my best to fix all spelling mistakes and such. I tried to make it seem less corny too. :P Although I don't think I did a very good job.
Anyway, this is Trust-edited!
I walked down the halls of the prison that my mother sent me to.
'I hate school.' I thought to myself with a scowl on my face.
I walked up to my locker and spun in my combination, then opened it to get my lunch and my book. I slammed it shut and locked it. I heard a few things inside my locker fall, and I cursed, but decided to just walk away.
'Just walk away Makoto, just walk away and count to 10.' I thought, breathing deeply.
I walked to the tree; the usual place I sit for lunch. I sat down and opened my bento and started eating, while reading my book at the same time. The only problem was that I wasn't really paying attention to what I was reading; my mind was on something else.
'It's all HIS fault! Such a stupid asshole! I got a fucking D- on my paper! Come on! So what, I don't believe in world peace, who the hell cares? I know he sure as hell doesn't.' I thought, my shoulders trebling with anger.
I wasn't usually this aggravated on a Monday, but since I got a D- I'm pissed!
"Hey, Makoto, what're you up to?" I hear a voice yell. I did an anime vain pop.
I looked up to see Tatsuki, and Orihime waving to me. Ugh, great, now I have to deal with those people.
"Tatsuki, why do you even bother talking to her? You know she's going to say something bad back at you." Ichigo and his stupid orange hair of his, asked Tatsuki. Another anime vein popped onto my head.
"Ichigo, just keep your nose out of my business." she shot back. Then she started waving to me again and yelling my name to get my attention.
I just frowned and flipped her off. I heard Ichigo sigh and Orihime gasp, the other dork whose name I didn't bother to know started laughing.
I heard Tatsuki growl and I could literally feel the ground shake underneath me.
This was almost a usual Monday.
I would be sitting under this tree, eating my lunch and pretending to read when really I'm thinking up reasons as to why I hate the world, and then Tatsuki or Orihime come up to me and want to know if I want to hang with them.
Usually I just say something rude or mean back to them and they go away. But Tatsuki gets really annoyed with my attitude and beats the shit out of me.
Truly, I'm waiting for the day when they realize that I DON'T want to hang out with them, and I want to be left to my own personal fuming.
Being pulled back to reality, I'm suddenly grabbed by my collar and lifted off the ground. I come face to face with Tatsuki; she looks the same with her pissed off face. I dropped my book and lost the page I was on. That gave me an excuse to beat her ass.
"YOU BITCH! YOU MADE ME LOSE MY PAGE!" I screamed at the top of my lungs. I picked up my book and threw it at her; it hit her in the face.
"AHK!" She gripped the place where I hit her. She gave me a dirty look, and then jumped on top of me. Of course being me; I wouldn't just sit there and take it, so we started wrestling.
"Ichigo, aren't you going to pull them apart?" Keigo, I think his name was asked.
"I'm sick of pulling those two off each other; they've been doing this every time they talk. It gets annoying. I'll just see how long it lasts." Ichigo replied, sticking his hands in his pockets, just standing there.
'Ha, he's probably enjoying the view...'
Unfortunately, I heard my cell phone go off. I stopped mid fight and threw Tatsuki off me. I ran over to my cell and looked at the number.
It was my mom.
COME HOME NOW!
My mom texted me, and since she rarely texts, she means it.
I put my stuff away and walked away from the group, like nothing happened.
"HEY! Makoto where are you going! I'm not finished with you yet!" I heard Tatsuki yell back at me.
"Some other time Tatsuki, I have something important to do, maybe tomorrow." I yelled back at her, not even turning around, but just waving my hand over my shoulder.
I walked off school grounds, not even caring that I was going to miss class.
-At the house-
"What do you want?" I asked my mother the minute I walked through the door of our shabby, small apartment, not even looking her in the eyes.
She replied with a sob. I snapped my head to look at her. She was crying, really hard too. I've never seen my mom cry but once, and that was when dad left…
I ran over to her, letting my stuff fall to the ground. She fell to floor sobbing and hiccupping.
"Mom what's wrong? Are you hurt?" I asked franticly, she doesn't act like this; it's scaring me to be honest. She looked up at me through her red, sore eyes.
"Ka—Kana—she—she's lost! She was kidnapped! One second she was at the school grounds, the next she was gone! Her friends said that a man jumped out of a van and took her away!" She managed to get out before breaking down. She sobbed into my school uniform while I sat there, lost in my thoughts.
"Kana? What? Kana's kidnapped…but…that just seems…impossible…" I thought to myself while staring off into space, but I soon snapped out of it and stood up.
"Where—where are you going?" My mom asked looking up at me through her bloodshot eyes.
"I don't know mom, maybe to find Kana?" I looked at her like she was a retard. She just sat there in her tears and stared at me. I rolled my eyes.
"Call the police while I'm out there." I turned away from her, not looking into her teary eyes. Soon I was going to start feeling what she was.
I ran through the streets of Karakura. I was fighting back the tears that threated to fall. The running helped me from keeping them back; it kept my fine focused on one thing.
Kana was the one person that I couldn't get mad at and she was missing.
It's probably been four hours since I started the search. Today just wasn't my day.
As I continued running, I looked every place that I could think of, but then I realized…Kana didn't just walk out the front door without letting mom know where she was…she was kidnapped.
I smacked my head and leaned against a wall. Of course it would take a dumbass like me to figure that out four hours later.
I felt the hope drain from me. I have no idea where they would take a little girl, and I can't break into the nearest apartment trying to find her. I felt helpless.
I felt the tear slip past my eye, and slither down my cheek. I tried to wipe it away, but more came. I just stood there next to Candle Light Park and cried silently.
"Makoto?" I heard a wavering voice from behind me. I turned to see who it was.
She stood there looking at me like she was witnessing a miracle, and was completely shocked. She soon shook her head and went over to me.
Tatsuki put her hand on my shoulder and asked what was wrong.
"My—my sister…" I cried; my voice cracking.
"You're sister?" She asked.
"She—she was kidnapped!" I cried louder.
"Oh, no." Tatsuki sounded, imagining what it would be like losing Orihime, who is practically her sister.
I tried to calm myself by taking a few deep breaths.
"Is it ok if I call Orihime and tell her what happened?" Tatsuki asked. I nodded, now trying to wipe away the tears with my sleeve.
"I'm going to help you look for her. Do you have your cell on you?" She asked, and I nodded. "Good, I'll give you my number. I'll call you if I find anything out."
-9:00 pm-
I was still looking, but no one found her yet. I've been looking for seven hours now! Tatsuki had even called her karate buddies and asked them to look for her, but none of them found anything! I've been to the scene where she was kidnapped about a hundred times today, and I didn't find so much as a hair.
Worst thing is that I was starting to lose hope. For all I know she could be dead right now…
I keep going, turning corners sharply, going through dark alleyways, checking dumpsters.
Once, I thought I saw her pink ribbon that she always wears in her hair; dad gave it to her when she was three as a birthday present, it was across the street. The crossing light was red, but I couldn't wait. I ran across the street weaving through cars, hearing their horns beep and people yell that I'm crazy out of their windows.
I got to the other side of the street, but I was just imagining things. I felt stupid, yet sad because I had such hope in me for a second, only to be crushed by such a small situation.
My phone started buzzing. I pulled it out; it was Tatsuki.
Are you still looking for her? I went to the police to talk to them and saw your mom reporting your missing sister. I got to talk to her, she seemed worried about you. They haven't found anything yet.
I could only lose all the hope that was left inside of me then. I sent her a message back.
Ok, thanks for the update.
I walked home then.
Hope. It's such a stupid word. Who even invented it in the first place? Why would they want something that makes you feel so…wishful one second, only to turn to sadness when you realize the hope was false?
'Such a stupid word...'
When I got home, my mom ran to me and hugged me tightly. She hasn't shown this kind of affection to me since I was eight. That was before dad left too…
"Did you find anything?" She asked. I paused. I didn't want to say no, but I had to.
She pulled away from me and looked me strait in the eyes. I looked down, avoiding them.
She started breaking down again. I just stood there watching with blank eyes as she sat on the ground like a helpless child. Wasn't that suppose to be me? Wasn't she supposed to be the one who was to comfort me? If I had to act as the adult and she the child, then I wouldn't comfort her. She didn't deserve it.
I wonder if you've ever felt truly alone in the world before.
'Cause I know I do right now.
Kana's the reason I'm living…she keeps me sane. It not that I'm obsessed with her; I'm just looking out for her since mother can't do it anymore.
I felt hollow as I walked to my room and closed all my blinds. I stuck my earphones into my ears and turned up the volume to a loud, screaming band. Only I didn't hear anything.
My mind was blank; all I could do was curl up into a tight ball underneath my covers.
The world was truly a rude, horrible, conceited, awful, nasty, foul, miserable place. If you weren't careful, you'd be chewed and spat back out.
No one was my friend other than Kana, not even I was my own friend.
This was supposed to be my almost usual Monday.
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