Hola! So, this is my first story, so I welcome all criticism, good or bad.

Here to do the disclaimer is Fang!

Me: *whispers* Fang say the disclaimer.

Fang: *shrugs*

Me: Fang?

Fang: *silent*

Me: Fine! I do not own Maximum Ride, Mr. JP does!

Fang: *half smile* Good job.

Chapter 1.

Max POV

My name is Max. Maximum Ride. You can call me Max. Anyways, right now the flock and I are flying way up high! Above the clouds. We just got through a huge battle, and I..I accidently killed Ari. I didn't mean to, but I'm stronger than humans, and his neck just snapped.

Not, that Ari is human, either. He is far from it. He's part lupine, part human. We call them Erasers. They are intent on murdering us, brutally. Ari most of all. Ari is Jeb's son.

If you don't know Jeb, why not? I mean, he plays a major role in…my whole entire life! He rescued me and my flock, all six of us, from an evil place called the school. We hated the school, and then he rescued us. He took us away and hid use. For years, we were living happily. Then Jeb disappeared. Then he came back, working for the school! He was never to be trusted again. I was crushed, but I didn't let the rest of my flock see it. I had to be strong, I mean, come on, I am the leader of this group.

If you are new to this let me introduce to you…the flock! There are 6 of us; Me (Max), Fang, Iggy, Nudge, Gazzy, and Angel. We all have wings. Yes, I said it, wings. I'm not pulling your leg, it's true. Now, before I waste all my time trying to make you believe, I'll just tell you about us.

Me. I am Maximum Ride, the oldest if our group and the leader. I am 14 years old, and I can fly up to at least 200 mph, if I want to. No one else in my flock can go that speed. I also have a voice in my head. I can't tell who it is, but he/she/it helps out in quite a few sticky situations. Though, when I want he/she/it to shut-up, that's when he/she/it gets chatty. It's very annoying. The voice usually speaks in those weird fortune cookie sayings! Again, very annoying.

Fang. That is really his name. Don't ask me. Fang is the silent one, He barely speaks, and he wears all black. He's pretty much the strongest one of all of us. Though, I bet I could give him a run for his money. Anyways, he doesn't have a special power that we know of, but I don't know if that disappoints him. He barely shows emotion. He's a loner, but I can tell that he loves all of us. Don't tell him I said that.

Iggy. Poor Iggy. He's the third oldest, after me and Fang, though he still is 14, too. He has it tougher than all of us, though he fares brilliantly. While we were in the school, the whitecoats tried to give him night-vision. Tried and failed. Now, Iggy is blind. The worst part is that he can remember seeing, and now he can never have it again. Now Iggy is a genius when it comes to bombs. He can make a bomb out of anything. Plus, his hearing and touch are extreme. He can actually feel colors. No lie.

Nudge. Nudge is the chatterbox. She cannot stop talking. It drives Iggy insane. Frankly, it annoys the rest of us, too, but she seems oblivious. She can talk forever. I am not lying. Okay, maybe a little, but still. She's 11 years old, and she does have special powers. She can hack into any computer, and she can tell which people have been there just by touching. It's crazy.

Gazzy. Trust me, you do not want to know why we can call him Gazzy, but I think you are smart enough to figure it out. Anyways, Gazzy is pretty good with bombs, too. He's like Iggy's apprentice or something. He's 8 and he can mimic anyone's voice with perfection. Sometimes, that little trick leads to fighting.

Angel. My baby. Not literally, but I love her that much anyways. She's 6 and going with her name is angelic. With the whole special power thing, she got the jackpot! She can read minds and corrupt them. Scary, huh? She can also breathe underwater. She is like super-girl or something.

That's all of us. Except Total, are dog. Yes, we have a dog. He's a Scotty little thing, so he's easy to carry. He's an experiment to, and can jump to like 30 feet high. So that's pretty cool.

So now you met us. Sort of. And now you can never be rid of us. Thank you for risking your life, by reading this. Wait, I did tell you that when you read this you would be risking your life by reading this. I'm pretty sure I did. Didn't I. Oh. I guess I didn't. Oops.

Well, there's no turning back now. (Yes, I really said that).

So that was Chapter 1. I guess, sorry if it was pretty boring, but I felt I should do this, as a little starter, so y'all could know where we are. Now, the first reviewer gets, the next Chapter dedicated to them. Good, or bad, I accept it all. So, um I hope you enjoyed it!

Yours truly,

~~timelord99~~