Of course Stephanie Meyer is the true author to the whole twilight series, but here is my re-write of twilight in the span of a day. Okay, it's not going to be very long, five chapters max I predict.

(BPOV)

The fair was back in town. I wasn't the type of person who loves rides, especially spinning ones. I never saw the thrill of getting motion sickness, or the fun in the blaring loud carnival music. Usually I spent the summer holidays with my Mum back in Phoenix, but this year she was on her honeymoon with her new husband Phil, so I had to stay in Forks and therefore, was dragged along to the fair.

Jessica was chatting up Mike Newton in the food line while I was waiting, alone, leaning on the wall outside the toilets. I wasn't the social butterfly, as you can probably tell by now. I pulled my jacket around me tighter. There was no such thing as summer in Forks, even in the middle of July.

That's when it started raining. Every one instinctively ran under the cover of the food stand. I never liked big crowds so I ran over to one of the smaller game stands opposite me.

Every year different families offered to run different stands that held the smaller games such as "Guess your weight," or "The Clowns." I happened to run under the "Ring Toss," stand which was this year run by the Cullens.

The Cullens were new to town. They arrived a month ago. There were three teens in my grade, and two in the year above me, all adopted, but I hadn't met them yet as it was still summer break.

"Hello, I'm Carlisle Cullen," the man behind the table of bottles said.

"Hi, I'm Bella Swan," I answered. I didn't really believe Carlisle was in his thirties, as my dad had told me. He looked like a man from a male soapie with gorgeous blonde hair and flawless features. My mum would probably try and go out with him, but she was married again now.

"Ah, the chief's daughter. Will you be having a ring toss this evening?" he asked.

That was when I noticed him. He was sitting in a chair in the back corner of the tent covering the ring toss game. His hair was a bronze colour, his eyes a dark onyx like colour, and he was gorgeous. He was staring at me until I looked at him and he quickly looked away. Carlisle noticed me looking at him.

"Edward, come say hello to Bella Swan, the chief's daughter. You'll be in her grade when school starts up again." Carlisle said.

"Hello," Edward mumbled, walking towards me stiffly before whispering some thing into Carlisle's ear and then quickly exiting the tent.

"One ring toss please," I said. I didn't want Carlisle to notice that my eyes were stinging, as I was close to tears, so I pretended that it didn't happen. I was hurt. What was his problem? Sure, he may not want to be friends with some one like me, with his looks he could be friends with any one he wants, but did he have to be so rude about it?

I threw the hoop, except it didn't go any where near the bottles, but headed straight for Carlisle's face. Before I could even start apologising I realised it hadn't hit him but he had caught it just inches from his forehead.

"Here, you can have another shot for free," he said his hand gesturing for me to take the hoop. How was that possible? Are people really that coordinated? I wouldn't know, being the biggest klutz in school.

"I'm alright, thanks," I replied and turned towards the rain. I put my back over my head and ran over to the food stand to where Jessica and Mike were. "I can't believe they sell breakfast here," said Mike as he took his bacon and egg roll and turned back to Jessica.

Yes, it was early in the morning. My dad was one of the first people here, helping set up all the tents. It was going to be a long day, as the fair ended at night as well, usually around midnight, and Jessica wanted to stay the whole day.

Since my day had started on a bad note I decided caffeine would help. Jessica was next in line so I asked her "Hey, can you get me a coffee?" as I was getting money from my bag.

"No, get it yourself, I am going with Mike to the Dodgem Cars," she turned and whispered to me then followed Mike. I just rolled my eyes. It was always drama with that girl.

After I got my coffee it stopped raining so I headed over to the Ferris Wheel, at least no one could annoy me up there. As I got to the front of the queue the man running the Ferris Wheel yelled for every one to hear "Single ride, any one else a single rider?"

I wished I could pull my sweater over my face. Just as he was about the call it out for the second time, he had to save me. "I'll go with her," he said, giving the man a ticket and gracefully sitting next to me.

I was about to tell him off when he said "I apologise for my behaviour before, I had to leave to help my sister, she volunteered to run a store as well and I had just got a text message from her," he said in a beautiful velvety voice.

"I didn't see you with a cell phone," I said taking another sip of my coffee. Edwards's hands were in a fist next to me. I started thinking of how I must look next to Edward, such a perfect body. I figured I was some where in between the ugly duckling and a toad.

"Well I had one in my hand," he said his tone more serious. It was silent for a revolution but he broke it as he said "So you're here alone?" His voice was almost menacing, like I was his prey.

"No, well I was here with Jessica and I am meeting up with some other friends later," I said trying not to look at him to much, embarrassed as I was already for noticing how I was slowly moving closer to him as the ride went on.

It was finally time to get off and when he did his hands relaxed and he turned to me, thanked me for the ride and disappeared again. Just at that moment Jessica came running up to me.

"Oh my gosh! You were on the Ferris Wheel with Edward Cullen! EDWARD CULLEN!! How did you manage that?" she said talking so fast I was surprised I even understood her.

"Well, I was a single rider, so was he," I said finishing the last of my coffee. "It isn't such a big deal," I said. "It is, it so is! My family invited their family out to dinner and the whole night Edward didn't even look at me! Turns out that I wasn't good enough for him, by the way every one in that family has very small appetites, they hardly ate!" said Jessica, talking a hundred miles per hour again.

She continued telling me about her dinner with Edward Cullen as it was our turn to run the "Pull the String" stand. The whole time I kept on hoping that Edward would come around the corner, but he never did to my disappointment.

How stupid of me, thinking about a guy I just met! But I couldn't help but think about how his hair blew in the wind or how his onyx eyes looked. Love at first sight didn't exist, right?

Or did it?

(EPOV)

I had to hunt. I was such a fool to think that after I got her on the Ferris Wheel alone with me I could just seduce her into the surrounding forest and kill her. The only thing that stopped me was her astounding beauty.

Before I failed to notice how pretty she was. Her pale features, those beautiful chocolate eyes, I couldn't do it. I would be a monster and it would wreck every thing Carlisle had built up here in this town.

She kept on moving closer towards me instead of further away, stupid human. Most of their kind repelled away from us, their natural instincts, but this one, she was moving closer to me, I couldn't believe it!

I had to leave her, it was the only way. I ran into a secluded part of the surrounding forest and lay down to think. I listened to some Debussy on my walkman; it always helped clear my mind. But all I could think about was her. Her. But surprisingly I did not think of her scent as much as I thought of her face, the way she talked, the little gestures she made every now and again. I had to talk to some one, anyone.

I found Emmet, Alice, Jasper and Rosalie in the car park. From what I could tell it looked as if Rosalie wanted to leave but Emmet was trying to convince her to stay and had called up Jasper and Alice to help. Emmet. He loved rides and fairs, why I still don't know, I guess he was still ten years old inside.

I read Alice's mind. She had seen me on the Ferris Wheel with Bella. Emmett waved his hand in between our faces as we had our silent conversation. "Is some one going to tell me what's going on," he said.

"Edward went on the Ferris Wheel," said Alice still staring at me. "So big deal," said Rosalie trying to take the chance to get into the car but Emmet whizzed around and grabbed her and said "Not so fast Rose." Rosalie tried to struggle out of Emmett's grip, but he was by far the strongest out of all of us.

"He went on the ride with a human," said Alice. Jasper stiffened and said "A human?" Alice just nodded and replied "A girl as well." Rosalie let out a low hiss but I was sure no one heard it besides me. In her shallow mind I could hear she was very jealous. Before Emmett came along, Rosalie and I were meant to be together, but she held no interest for me.

That's when it happened. One minute Harry Clearwater's car was driving past, his boat attached to the back and the next the boat was unlatched from the back of the car and came at full speed towards, towards Bella.

I ran over and pushed her out of the way, my arms securely around her waist. As I looked up I saw my family all giving me the biggest dirty looks, except for Alice, she looked, excited? But there was no time to read her mind before Bella's friends came running over.

"Bella," Jessica cried out as she came running over to me. "Are you okay, oh my gosh that boat almost hit you, how did you get out of the way so fast!" she asked her and then she saw me. I had let go of Bella and was now helping her up. "Wow, Edward, did you pull her out of the way?" Jessica asked, in a flirty, almost admiring tone.

"Yes, if I hadn't been standing there Bella might be in a very bad condition right now," I said letting goof her hand, even though I didn't want them to. Why was I having these irrational thoughts?

"How did you get here so fast, you were on the other side of the car park?" Bella said. Beautiful and smart, this girl was amazing, why would some one as good as her be riding alone on a Ferris Wheel? Again with these irrational thoughts, I had to stop.

"No Bella, I was right here, it happened all so fast you probably didn't see me," I answered. I was a practised liar due to having to hide our family's secret so I thought I sounded quite convincing, but every one but Bella brought it. As she went to argue back, I cut her off saying "I believe you're father is walking over here right now," and walked quickly over to the rest of my family.

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