I'm a writer who needs to break free of writer's block… HELP!

Well… If I had any ideas, I wouldn't have writer's block. All I have is this one really lively idea…

And I had to take off The Heroics of a Mysterious Man. It wasn't going anywhere and it was sort of dumb to put it on if I didn't know what to put for chapter 2.

Well, here's chapter 1, I guess…

The summer breeze felt cool on Sinai's back. The summer was hot, but the winds were cool and relaxing.

The young Orc's face was soft and content, her purple hazed eyes shifting from one point in the sky to another. Her large, jade green hands grasped her large, bulky warhammer.

The look in her eyes went from happy, to suspicious, for she heard nothing. Nothing was bad. There had always been at least a roar of laughter or loud shouting in her town, The Crossroads. Trouble is stirring… I can sense it…

Then the yells of agony pierced her like a dagger. She saw this, for she could see the future. The Seers had special plans for her… Very special plans…

Then the swish of swords was heard and axes biting flesh. Sinai moaned, as a pain in her stomach grew larger on, kept her from standing to at least see what was going on.

My father! No! She thought, her mind racing and her heart in pain.

"Gah! Arrgh…" she screeched in pain as a Paladin hit her in the side with the help of a giant warhammer. The pain increased, as the Paladin was still banging her weapon against her.

Then she heard a familiar voice.

" Lok Tar Ogar! For the Horde!"

Her father was heading toward them, as he ran up to the Paladin. She tried to block his attacks, but he was too fast for her. A cracking noise was heard and Sinai almost passed out from the massive injuries.

Then he rushed up to Sinai and lifted her from the ground.

Thank god he's safe… She sighed. Her vision would not come true today…

(The vision)

"Sinai, no!" The yell was loud and caring, but her vision was too hazy to identify The Orc male.

"Don't come! You'll die!" She heard her own voice, loud and clear.

Then the Orc ran to her, getting bigger as he took each step.

"Watch out, Kamil! The blades!" His face was now clear to her.

Then a scream was heard from Sinai. She fell backwards as a dark, tall figure approached her.

Then the Orc male jumped in front of her as the Dark Figure drew his blades.

Slash.

(End of Vision.)

So? Click the purple button and review for me! I need criticism, I need critique! Please review and feel free to tell me it sucked or if it was good.

CrimsonReaper