United By Destiny: REWRITE!

Hello, fellow readers! I'm pretty sure at least some of you have read my old crappy version of United By Destiny, I did not get so many good reviews. Actually, I got hardly any reviews at all. That crappy version was before I got transferred to AP English, and learned how to use literary devices! Anyways, if you haven't read my OC's profiles either on my profile or on my old United By Destiny, I suggest you do that before you start reading this story.

I do not own Bakugan.

Fifteen year old Amie Makino sighed as she brushed her short, blond hair behind her ear. It had been two years, when was she going to go back home? She remembered her happy-go-lucky aqua-haired friend, Runo, who was left behind. At the moment she was attending a boarding school in New York called The New York School of The Arts with her friends Bryan, Mari, Samantha, Kyo, and Justin. Mari and herself came to study painting and drawing, while Sam and the guys came to study music. Amie remembered the times she and Runo would play together when they were younger. She was broken from here reverie by an ear-piercing shriek.

"Amie!!!" screamed Samantha Hollicandorr

Samantha was a lanky girl of fifteen, with mid-length brown hair and red bangs. She was gorgeous all over! Samantha had a perfect body, perfect hair, and perfect skin! The only thing that needed adjustment was her sense of style. Sure, she was gorgeous, but she wore clothes that resembled punk rock. Amie was secretly jealous of said girl, but wouldn't admit it. Amie would not let herself admit envy of Samantha, mainly because Samantha and her twin brother Bryan lost their parents at the age of three.

Amie looked at Samantha with disbelief. Sam never screamed! Not even when she was upset! What could possibly make her shriek like that?! Amie didn't have time to think about that for she was tackled to the ground in a hug.

THUD!!!

"Ugh, Sam! What in the world?!" Amie shouted as she tried to pull herself off the ground.

"Ohmygod!! You are not going to believe it!!" Sam squealed, her voice coated with glee.

"What, what?!" said Amie, anxious to know what was making her friend so excited. "What won't I believe?"

"I think Kyo should tell you. You're not going to believe me…" she sighed

Kyo was Amie's boyfriend of sixteen, a man of little words…and emotion. God knows how happy, excited Amie Makino fell for cold, almost heart-less, Kyo Miyakimoto. Kyo's father died when he was ten and his mom abandoned him, so he basically lives on his own. About a month ago, Kyo got his lip pierced and also his eyebrow. Kyo was known as a delinquent throughout middle school, but everything changed for him when he started dating Amie.

Amie gave an exasperated sigh as she knew Sam was probably right. Samantha was not the best person to go to for news. She was always spreading gossips and rumors. She looked at Sam suspiciously and sighed again.

"You sure about this? Kyo is not part of your gossip?" said Amie suspiciously

"Positive! Now, come on! Kyo is at the café with the rest of them." Sam explained

The café was the main hangout place for them. They always went there to discuss important things. The café was small, but private place for them.

When they got to the café, Amie was met with four pairs of oddly excited eyes; even Kyo was smiling beyond belief. Amie was hit with a sudden wave of realization.

"You have got to be kidding me? We're going back?!" she squealed in disbelief

"That's right, babe. We are going back!" Kyo said as he kissed her cheek.

"All right, then. If you two are done with your love-fest, let's discuss plans" snorted Bryan

Bryan is Samantha's twin brother. They are so much alike, but will blow steam if you tell them that. Although, they do have some differences. For example, romance sickens Bryan, Sam adores it.

"Right! So, I bet I could get us plane tickets! I also still have that condo back in Wardington. You guys can crash there until you get your own place…" Amie pondered

"Wow, Aims. It seems like you've been planning this mentally for months." Justin mused

Justin might as well be gay with his amount of sweetness. He is the most sincere, sweet, person you could ever meet. He is always the optimist, and practically glowing with happiness.

Amie smiled sheepishly as a small blush appeared on her cheeks.

"Actually, I have been planning this ever since we left." She admitted

"Well, looks like we're set. When can we leave?" asked Mari

Mari was the brains of the group. She is very small and petite, but had a big voice. She was passionate about fashion designing. Mari was Samantha's best friend/enemy. They always fought over guys and had endless bets.

Amie looked unsure for a split second, and then snapped her fingers.

"I got it! I can get the tickets tonight, we can leave tomorrow!" she said proudly

"Thank the lord for a rich girlfriend!" stated Kyo. The others agreed with a nod.

~~~~The Next Day~~~~

"Alright, is everyone packed and ready to go?" Bryan asked professionally

"Are you kidding? We packed up the whole dorm as soon as we got there!" snickered Sam

Justin was on the phone talking to someone in a giddy voice. He seemed to be happy about something. As soon as he realized everyone was looking at him, he quickly pressed the 'end' button on his new IPhone. He turned to face everybody with a wide grin etched onto his face.

"Justin" Mari stated "Who was that? And why are you grinning like an idiot?"

"That was Tyler" Justin spoke "He is meeting us in Wardington."

Tyler was Justin's older, extremely handsome cousin. Tyler was a young man of sixteen; he had icy blue eyes and pale blonde hair. His skin was fair as porcelain. Tyler was just as sweet as Justin, and just as smart as Mari. Tyler was currently traveling the world studying music. Tyler and Bryan were extremely competitive with each other. The main reason for this was that Bryan thinks that Tyler wants to show him up.

"Oh, great…prissy boy is coming" Bryan muttered sarcastically

"Oh, c'mon Bryan! Tyler's a sweetie! It'd be great to see him again!" squealed Mari

"Just wait until Runo finds out, it'll be priceless!" commented Amie

"That's mean! Runo's had a crush on him for years!" pouted Sam

"Just because we haven't seen her in a while doesn't mean we can't have fun with her! C'mon Sam, don't be a party pooper!" pled Bryan

"Fine…" Samantha groaned

"Attention boarders, the gates to plane 135, destination Tokyo, are now open. Please proceed the boarding process."

"That's us! Come on, let's get on our way to Tokyo!" exclaimed Amie

~~~End of Chapter~~~

Hah. The End. Just Kidding!

Really, what do you think? Was it better than the last one? Worse? Tell me. Click on the review button and tell me if I should continue. BTW, I'm sorry I haven't posted anything in a while. This new college prep school is drowning me in homework and studies. Thanks to Rima187, for giving me her opinion on my previous story. Also, my thanks to Look2theHeavens, for all her fabulous support!

~Ren