I'm trying my hand at the whole writing thing, I wanted to do it for a while but just didn't follow up on it.
So here I go
Disclaimer: I don't own one piece just my OCs
Chapter 1: Terrible beginnings
Bang! The ship rocked viciously as the cannon fire collided with the ocean.
"Scarlet are you alright?" screamed Aoi as he sprints to his wife who had recently given birth
"What's happening Aoi, what were those explosions?" asked Scarlet
A cannon ball collided with the ship, destroying the mast causing the baby to cry. Aoi then turned to his wife and newly born daughter, Razz.
"Pirates, they've found us. We have to get away from here." Aoi stated
Many pirates were after the legendary sword in their possession, which is worth a fortune. Pirates were tracking Aoi and Scarlet for weeks across the East Blue. Aoi is a master blacksmith who forged many high grade swords and Scarlet is a swordwoman who wields Aoi's highest grade sword, the legendary blade 'Sumire".
Sumire is said to be of a caliber only rivaled by the 21 O Wazamono grade swords.
Aoi grabbed a bag and started packing clothes for Scarlet and Razz. He also grabbed his sword and the legendary sword and helped his family to the life boat to escape the pirates
"Captain, I see them" yelled one of the pirates. The pirates boarded the ship and rushed to Aoi and Scarlet.
The crew opened fire upon the family, hitting Aoi in the shoulder and Scarlet in the leg. Aoi saw his wife got shot and his eyes widened. "These bastards are going to pay, luckily Razz wasn't hit" Aoi thought. Aoi hurried Scarlet and Razz to the life boat, supporting Scarlet as they hurried. The pirates were closing in. Aoi, Scarlet and Razz reached the life boat. Aoi put Scarlet in the life boat with Razz and tore his shirt and tied it around Scarlet's leg to stop the bleeding. Aoi also put the bag and Sumire in the boat.
"Aoi hurry, lets go" Scarlet shouted. Aoi looked at Scarlet and Razz and smiled.
"This is as far as I go Scarlet, make sure you take care of our little girl." He said whilst kissing Razz's forehead.
"Please Aoi, don't do this" Scarlet pleaded with teary eyes as Aoi grabbed his sword.
"This is the only way you can get away, I love you both with all my heart" Aoi said as he kissed his wife passionately. He then pushed the boat away.
"We love you too!" Screamed Scarlet as tears were streaming down her face. Aoi smiled as his tears began to fall.
"I'm going to miss you guys, I want to go with you" Aoi said as his face became hard and killing intent was radiating off him in wave "but theses bastards need to die here"
"It has been awhile since I had to fight." Aoi sighed "Time to see how weak I've gotten over the years." The rain began to fall as Aoi unsheathed his sword. The pirates were about to regret boarding this ship.
Aoi hid behind a corner and waited until a pirate came around it. In one fast slash the pirate's head hit the floor. The crew of pirates saw this and were enraged. "Listen up you sons of bitches, today is the last day you'll drawn breathe into your worthless bodies" Aoi bellowed as he rushed the group of enemies.
"Don't let him get close, shoot him" shouted the pirate captain, the crew opened fire on Aoi. Bullets showered Aoi as heavy as the rain, He managed to dodge the majority of them but some caught him in his abdomen. "Guess I'm a lot more rusted than I thought but no worries this is a suicide mission anyways." He thought as he coughed up blood.
The pirates were being cut done one after the next. "Do it, burn this ship down" shouted the pirated captain as he retreated to the safety of his ship.
"I'm running out of time" Aoi said as he got his tenth shot since the beginning of the fight. He started to blackout whilst being consumed by the flames. "I can't die, not yet I have to make sure they don't go after scarlet and Razz. Razz my baby girl" He suddenly got an overwhelming drive and stood up, jumping out of the flames landing on the pirate ship.
"Kill that monster" yelled the captain, the two remaining pirates attacked Aoi, and before they even got a chance to touch Aoi their heads hit the floor. He then turned to the captain who started to cower "please don't kill me, im sorry" pleaded the scared captain.
"You're sorry?" Aoi asked starting to laugh menacingly "you don't deserve to live in this world bastard" Aoi started to walk slowly towards the fearful man. "Oh dear God" the pirate captain said as Aoi raised his sword.
"He can't help you now, I'm the devil and I'm taking you to hell with me" Aoi said as he swung his sword down killing the bastard captain.
Aoi looked up at the sky "I can finally die, Scarlet take care of Razz, I lov…." Aoi fell to the floor with a sickening thud.
Meanwhile on a random beach
"Please help us" Scarlet said to the shadowy figures as she fell unconscious with Razz in her arms crying.
That's it for chapter 1
I need feedback as to better my writing skills. This is the first time I ever tried something like this