Hey I'm going to try something new. This is my first fan-fiction, so I'd love to hear some constructive criticism, and would like some help knowing how to improve this. Thanks! BTW this is
only an intro, and that only some of the characters are mine, the rest belong to sega.
Revival
A long shadowy figure approaches an enclosed tube, he flips a switch and the tube slowly begins to open, as it opens the figure talks "I've been able to revive you after you fell through
the atmosphere. You won't be able to remember anything prior to what I'm saying to you, but bear in mind, you are powerful indeed. When you hit the earth, you lost so much of your
data that you will have to meet your original in order to function fully. You will find out more once you find him, but do not engage him in combat unless attacked first, do you
understand? … Metal Sonic." As the figure says this the tube has fully revealed it self to show it holds Metal Sonic. He nods his head to the figure, he responds by saying, "alright, if you
think you're up to it, your first mission is to learn Sonic's moves, good luck!" as he finishes this briefing the tube rises to the roof where a launch pod is prepared for Metal Sonic, as the
tube is placed in the pod, it sets it's course for green hill zone.