Hope from nowhere

Hi there this is darkjak98 from his comfortable spot in front of his pc

Please note that this is my first EVER fanfic story so bear with me please

I do not own Jak and Daxter, they are owned by Naughty Dog

Ok here we go! (badabum tshhh!) (applause)

The Big City

Jak's POV

I stared around myself in wonder, it was the first time I had been out of that freaking hell in two years, now that I was out I didn't know where to go or what to do, in the corner of my eye I saw an old man wearing strange robes trying to get my attention, I scowled and walked over to him, I grabbed the collar of his robe and growled "you look like a reasonably smart man, I want information where the hell am I!" The man had a small little boy next to him that looked up at me strangely. The old man responded by saying "you are a guest of his royal highness Baron praxis" "oh so I was just a guest in the good Barons prison huh?" The old man looked at me and said "In or out the prison walls surround us both, we are all his prisoners." The little kid started to tug at his robes, he looked around and saw a squad of soldiers walking towards them. The old man quickly said "oh no the Krimson Guard, we have to protect the boy, please if you protect us I will take you to someone who can help you" I turned to face the guards and narrowed my eyes and cracked my knuckles.

I rushed forward and got one of them off guard and slammed my fist in to the side of his face, he went down like a sack of rocks, a bullet shot past my ear I spun to face the other guard while flicking the fallen soldiers gun up with my foot, and started shooting, soon all the guards were down. I walked back to the man with the boy who were hiding behind a broken side of a building. "oh thank you" he said "now my name is Kor, and now I can tell you where you can go to meet the person I told you about, he is the leader of the underground, freedom fighters who go against Praxis, his name is Torn he may be able to help you" I grunted " huh so where can I find him?" Kor said "he is on the southeast side of the slums." I looked at the passing zoomers before looking quickly back to say thank's but they were gone. I jumped and grabbed a passing bike and easily chucked the helpless rider off, and sped off to find Torn.

-ok that's the first chapter up, I have lots of time so I might have the second one up later today

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