I have a problem…well the charger of my laptop doesn't work and so well I can't update my story "I like autumn best" because chap 2 is on my laptop. So I have this new idea, and I'm going to use my bro's laptop even if he doesn't want to but I have this urge to write this story of twilight…well new moon.

As u know, Edward left Bella on new moon and….I cried. So I was a little mad and I though what if when Edward left Bella, Victoria found her and changed her. But she found her like when she was waiting Jacob at the beach…And right before she went 'cliff diving'. Victoria may have though that she was going to commit suicide so she kidnapped Bella and changed her. Making her life a living hell…

Will Bella be saved? Will Edward come and look for her? Or maybe Jacob?

The first chapters will be from the book but not totally, I have some of my own word and ideas and writing in it.

DISCLAIMER: the twilight saga doesn't belong to me…I know …it's for The awesome writer, my idol, Stephenie Meyer…but this story is all mine ha-ha *dark laugh*

Prologue: the END

He took a deep breath

"Bella we're leaving"

I took a deep breath, too. This was an acceptable option. I thought I was prepared. But still had to ask.

"Okay" I said "I'll come with you." I knew this would happen some day so I would go with them.

"You can't, Bella. Where we're going… it's not the right place for you"

"Don't do this to me Edward… I know you love me" I stated begging much to my pride

"Of course, I'll always love you..In a way. But I realize that it's time for a change. Because I'm… tired of pretending to be something I'm not, Bella. I am not human."

"Don't…Don't do this" my voice was just a whisper now; awareness was beginning to seep through me, trickling like acid through my vein. "Please…I know we're different but…"

"You're not good for me, Bella" He turned his earlier words around, cutting me off, and so…I had no argument. How well I knew that I wasn't good enough for him…I knew that too well for my own good.

I opened my mouth to say something, and then closed it again. He waited patiently, his face wiped clean of all emotion. I tried again.

"Alice isn't coming back," I realized. It's like I didn't speak at all as I heard no sound coming from me. But he understood.

He shook his head slowly, always watching my face.

"No. they're all gone. I stayed behind to tell you goodbye" he stated flatly.

"She's gone?" my voice blank with disbelief. My best friend, my sister, She was gone.

Edward kept explaining how he convinced her that a clean break was better for me, but I didn't seem to register anything as words kept repeating in my head

'they're all gone'

'I'm tired '

'Goodbye'

I tried to breathe normally. I needed to concentrate, to find a way out of this nightmare.

"Goodbye Bella" he said in his quiet, peaceful, velvet voice. Then I realize he was walking away.

"Wait!" I choked out the words forcefully, reaching for him. I thought he was reaching for me, too. But his cold hands locked around my wrists and pinned them to my sides. He leaned down, and pressed his lips very lightly to my forehead. My eyes closed.

"Take care of yourself "he breathed, cool against my skin. There was a light unnatural breeze. My eyes flew open.

He was gone.

I began running without realizing. Searching for him,

Love, life, meaning … Over. But I kept running. I don't know where I was going. I walked, ran, fell, got up and kept running. I didn't know where I was headed, time made no sense. Maybe it stopped because the forest looked the same no matter how far I go. I started to worry that I may have been traveling in a circle, a very small circle at that, but I kept going. I stumbled often, and, as it grew darker and darker, I fell often, too. I was lost it was a fact, but I didn't seem to realize that.

Finally, I tripped over something – it was black now, I had no idea what caught my foot and I stayed down. I rolled to my side so that I could breath. It was starting to get really cold, but I didn't seem to mind. My mind was blank as I kept staring into the dark. Nothing …

I saw nothing; I felt like nothing, I couldn't do anything to stop him. Useless, pathetic human I was. My chest hurts like hell, like there wasn't anything but a big hole. Is this how we feel after lost love?

I understood now how my father may have felt after mom left. He loved her, and he still do. Pore dad... I feel worse now, thinking how I told him the same words my mom said to him when she was leaving him. That evening, before walking out of the house trying to lure out James away from him.

How long has it been? As I lay there, I had a feeling that more time was passing by. I couldn't remember how long it had been since nightfall. Was it always so dark out here at night? Where was the moon light?

I looked up. Not tonight. Tonight the sky was utterly black; there was no moon… a lunar eclipse.

A new moon… Then I remember some of what he said it would be as if I'd never existed, he promised me. I was drowning, slowly, painfully into my broken heart disease as I lost consciousness. This emotion was too much for me to handle.


ok ok i know! it ressemble to the book but i had to. it's where my story starts

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