Hi everyone. Thanks for looking at my first fanfic EVER. Remember to read and review (I don't care if their flames) and tell me what you think.
Lacus Saved
Kira flew through space, the freedom going at full speed as it tracked an enemy transport. Blue Cosmos had swooped down on them and taken Lacus. The second they did, Kira had felt SEED activate and taken off soon after. Now he had caughgt up to the Blue Cosmos. He pulled out a beam sword and targeted the 4 that didn't have Lacus and quickly took them down. He then pulled open the cockpit of the one with Lacus in it and pulled her in, shotting the pilot in the process. She felt safe in his arms. "Kira…thank you." She whispered softly to him. He smiled and wrapped his arms around her waist and just buried his head in her hair and began to cry. "what's wrong Kira?" she asked.
His reply was soft and weak. "I was worried that you would end up like Fllay."
"don't worry Kira, I wont die on you. I promise." She whispered, kissing im softly on the lips. He was surprised. She had never done that before. They gazed into each other's eyes and then locked lips again. The communicator beeped and athrun's voice filled the cockpit.
"Kira, do you want any help?" he asked. He pressed the off button and smiled at Lacus, kissing her on the neck.
"we have all night you know…" she whispered. He smiled back and allowed his body to melt under hers, as their bodies danced through the night.
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