Yes Fuck SF: Command. In this story it does not exist and neither does (Assault yet maybe?). This takes place after Adventures and may continue for a while. I do have an OC and I am open to some character development requests. I will NOT take FLAMES of any kind. My definition of a flame is a complaint without a suggested way to fix the complaint. I you have a complaint at least be courteous enough to suggest a fix. This is revised edition 2 of this chapter. Do NOT expect constant updates because I am still in school and I am juggling this story with my studies.
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Fox McCloud awoke with a splitting headache. The agony of it was so intense that it brought tears to his eyes. With a groan, Fox rolled out of bed and landed with a sickening –Thump- on the floor. This is where he spent the next several minutes, all the while feeling every sore muscle, cut, and scrape that were reminders of his last week or so.
That damned Dinosaur! I could hardly think with all the banter, he just never could take the hint to shut up. I don't know why I gave him that pin; he's probably showing it off to all his dino friends.
Fox Gathered all of his strength and in one fluid motion, he pushed his upper body upwards and simultaneously brought his legs forward. The end result was an extremely sore vulpine stumbling to the shower. The door closed and fox winced as he pulled his shirt and boxer shorts off. He punched a few keys on the built in holopad and waited for the water to reach his shower head. Nothing came out so he banged on the side of the shower head, which sent hot water into the vulpine's face. Fox yelped and fell down, hitting his arm on the wall. He instantly recovered and began to enjoy a hot shower.
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Krystal yawned, her pink tongue escaping her muzzle and curling at the end. She closed her mouth and licked her muzzle. Earlier that day she had asked Slippy how to work the controls to her bathtub and was now enjoying a hot bath.
I can't believe I played the cliché Damsel in distress. I am a Cerinian Priestess, not some kit just let outside the house for the first time. I have had training and I should have reacted quicker when I saw that ape man.
She bared her teeth at the thought of being trapped in a floating crystal waiting for a 'Prince Charming' to rescue her. She felt ashamed that she had let herself be captured.
In a way, Fox is cute, but he's so guarded. I can sense the feelings of a great loss emanating from him and I want to get closer to him. My senses also tell me that he might push me away for fear of losing me too. I don't know what to do.
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Fox was sitting in his chair on the Bridge when the expected call from ROB came.
"Fox, General Pepper is waiting on line one, He wishes to speak to you."
Sighing Fox said, "Put him on ROB."
"Affirmative" came ROB's reply. Immediately, the image of General Pepper came to life on the Holo-Projector. The hound had dark purple bags under his eyes and a disheveled appearance. The spark in his eyes however, was not lost.
"General Pepper here, Great job Fox, You did exceptionally well on that mission to Sauria Mission. I have already wired the credits to your account and they should be there by now."
"Yeah, Yeah, cut to the chase General. What do you want?" Fox asked.
General Pepper growled. "Don't mess with me today Fox, you have no idea what I've been going through right now. I want you to take the next week or so off. I also have a very close friend of mine flying up to land on Great Fox. I would ask that you let him join Star Fox."
"What are his credentials exactly?" Fox asked. He was interested in a new member for Star Fox. The crew had been short handed for a while now. He could use a new member to help the crew with the daily tasks of keeping the Great Fox in running condition.
"He has graduated with top honors at the Academy. Also he has been a lone wolf mercenary with about 6 years worth of combat experience. You and your team are not the only ones that Corneria relies on in times of war or crises."
"General, based on your description I would be glad to accept this person as a member of Star Fox."
"Glad to hear it. I'll call some time later with a new assignment. Pepper out."
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An Areowing, looking worse for the wear, was setting down on the flight deck of Great Fox. Fox was waiting patiently at the end of the hangar for the engines and the sound of 'music' appropriately named Metal, to fade. The engines and music died as the cockpit slid open to reveal a vulpine.
As he hopped out of the Areowing one could easily mistake him for Fox. His fur blazed a deep orange, almost red, accented with a black vest and black cargo jeans. His muzzle was a cream color, with a cream stripe running down his head to his back. He had black combat boots and mirrored black sunglasses. On each hip he had a blaster, and on his right hip he had a grenade.
"Hello Fox, I am honored to meet Lylat's greatest hero."
"I could say the same Mister…"
The vulpine smiled and pulled off his shades to reveal the most stunning steel gray eyes Fox had ever seen.
"My name is Mitch, Mitch the Fox."
So what do you guys think? If you take the time to read this story please review. I do look at all of them and I try to fix them. I also need a Beta-Reader. Anyway, I would like to thank SC-Safe-Cracker for his input. It is really helpful. Please, review.