Disclaimer: I am not Stephanie Meyer and don't own Twilight.
Authors note: ok, I had an idea for a story and just wanted to see if you think I should continue it. I'm not sure how good it is but I'm going to start the first chapter soon and I will post it if I get enough responses.
Ok, believe it or not, I first got this idea in a dream…I'm not sure how I managed to get this story from that dream because it was completely random but here it is. This is basically what I think of when I'm day-dreaming at work (that happens a lot).
Anyway, I am not going to have any Americanisms in this story because I usually manage to confuse myself so it's set in Scotland. I actually based it at my own work but I'm not sure how it's going to work out…
Ok, so here's the plot…please tell me what you think and if I should continue it or not….
Green-eyed stranger
Bella is a 16 year old girl, nearly 17, and one of four. Her older sister, Alice, is 19 years old. Her younger brothers, Jacob and James, are ages 15 and 6, respectively. She just starts work at a café owned by her brother, Jacob's, girlfriend's parents. While there she meets a 'green-eyed stranger' and brother of one of her best friends, Emmett. She gets to know Edward gradually while at work, who suspiciously comes into the café a lot more than he should. What could be the reason for this? A hidden attraction, perhaps?
A/N: so that's it. It will be an all human story, obviously. It should be better than it sounds and I already have a few ideas for it. I couldn't resist having James in there but he will be a typical little brother and not completely evil. Well, no more evil than little boys naturally are. Jasper and Rosalie will also be in the story. And Jake's girlfriend will be none other than Nessie. So, review and give me some advice please.