Hi guys this is another try at making a great FLCL fan fiction. My last try lost steam and inspiration so here is my new one. I hope it is good. I do know that I have many grammar errors. If you wish to help copy and paste my stories and change the grammar errors then send the file to me over aim. My aim account is dagreydude also chat with me whenver. Also previous statements I have made about the character Eri Ninamori I would like to take back. Also if you haven't read "GUITARS" YET READ IT because it is the best flcl fanfiction that has ever read and I have read a lot. Oh yeah I do not own Flcl and will not be gaining any money or anything from this fanfiction well hopefully a sense of completion. Umm my word processor sucks things in bold are actions And I haven't decided whether to signify the difference between thoughts and actions
Starting off on the wrong foot
My name is Eri Ninamori. I am 20 years old. I am living in America and attending The Saving Grace Medical School through a exchange program. I have been doing very well in classes and accomplishing my tasks with high marks. Yet I feel that there is something missing I wonder about him…
BRERUP BERUP BERUP BERUP. Ah crap I am late. I wont have enough time t get coffee with Jill. AYA where are the clothes I laid out they were here earlier. Ninamori scurries around her apartment. That's it I'm not gonna find them in time and I'm going to fail medical school and will have to be a homeless person or even worse turn tricks. They will call me loose legs Ninamori and I will be disease ridden and then I will die in prison from aids and then—oh wait there they are. Whew there is my book bag. Goodbye takun waves goodbye to her pug and walks out the front door be good. She walks out side her apartment and rummages through her purse. Where are my keys now today is not going my way at all. I used to be so organized. They're they are. She hears a engine putter behind her the sound is familiar. It sounds like something small trying to use all its power yet is exhausting itself. …It's a scooter it's a motor scooter . Naota she whimpers under her breath. She looks and sees nothing her heart returns to its normal pace she sighs. How silly Naota is still in Mabase its been two years why would he come and see me out of the blue. Stupid Eri hes forgotten about you forget about it. She gets in her car and heads to her classes unable to concentrate. She gets notes from her friend Jill which keeps her up later then expected. Ninamori comes home exhausted and heads into her bedroom. Yawn man im gonna need a lot of sleep to do well tommorow goodnight takun. But Takun the rest of your night is just beginning Ninamori is tackled from behind and forced onto her bed by a woman in clad lingerie. RAPIST RAPIST you wont get away with this I have neighbors who are cops you'd best leave now and get a head start. Crap he must know I'm lying I'm going to be raped why me why me? # Your not naota# (These #marks represent Haruko's voice). Ninamori turns around to face her assailant. YOU!
#Oh who are you?# The nerve of you asking that WHO ARE YOU? #Haruko# I knew that I was making a point. First you break into my apartment then you steal my THOSE ARE MY SECRET CLOTHES NO ONE I REPEAT NO ONE IS TOO SEE THEM. #Why keep them secret? They're very nice even though I fill them out better then you# Ninamori flusters in rage. What are you doing here. All you do is wreck things. Slowly approaches haruko and elevates her voice with every step. Do you know what you did? Do you know how long Naota waited everyday at the bridgeeachday hoping you would come back he waited for SIX MONTHS, SIX MONTHS STRAIGHT. He would have had to repeat his grade if I didn't help him recover. He didn't get over you until Me, Gaku and Mahashi sat him down and explained that you were selfish, manipulative and weren't coming back. #Shouldn't it be "Gaku, Mahashi and I"# Whatever I hope you understand that you broke his heart he would have done anything for you anything yet you just kept on chasing that big phoenix bird thing. Haruko looks down and a tear runs down her face. #(In a low voice) I know I screwed up I just couldn't deal with that right then and I needed to find out about Atomsk. I just… If I could go back in time and change things I would He deserved a childhood and I wasn't going to take that away by taking him into space with me and risking his life# The room remains silent for a few moments after hearing these powerful words. So why are you back then. #To find him…You mind if I spend the night )#
Well that is the end of chapter one tell me how you liked it please R/R comments please and thank you.