Okay so this is the first fanfiction that I have ever written EVER, and I did delete it, but now I decided I would just revise it that way I would be able to finally finish this story because I don't wanna be a quitter! But anyways this is defiantly better than what it was, and I hope y'all will like it! Hopefully I'll be able to get the next chapter up soon, but now I'm writing a brand new story about Yu Yu Hakusho and revising this Peter Pan story, so hopefully it won't take me forever to update either, but anyways have fun reading the new and improved New Love in Neverland! :)
Ruby sat on her window-sill with the window open writing..her chestnut brown hair moving slightly in the wind. She was aspiring to be a song writer and a story teller. She would always write songs from the story's her mom told her when she was little and the story's she would conjure from her own imagination. Write now she was writing a song about one of her favorite stories…the story of Peter Pan.
It was on nights like these when she was feeling especially pensive that she would sing the song she wrote for the particular story
"The second star to the right shines with a light for you. To tell you that the dreams you plan really can come true."
She has never been to Neverland but has dreamed of it since she heard the story at the age 5 and now she was 12 and tomorrow was her birthday and how she dreaded growing up, it just broke her heart.
"The second star to the right shines with a light that's rare and if it's Neverland you need its light will lead you there."
'Peter Pan...', Ruby thought desperately 'will you ever come for me? You came for my grandmother Wendy and my mother, but when will it be my turn? When will you finally come for me?'
Ruby looked at the clock and saw what time it was. '9:00 time to go to bed, I've got school tomorrow...'Ruby got up from her seat, and closed the window, but she left it unlocked '...just in case.'
It was 11:00, and Peter was at the window. He saw her sleeping peacefully in her bed. "There she is Tink." He said more to himself than to the bright glowing orb beside him. 'I wonder if she will like me.' He thought to himself. "Come on Tink!!"
Peter and Tinkerbell not being very subtle as they should have been busted through Ruby's window making a loud bang that sounded like they could've woke up the whole neighborhood. Ruby as soon as hearing the noise immediately woke up, and she looked at the strange boy with the glowing orb beside him, and then it dawned on her..."Peter Pan!!!" she yelled then realizing she wasn't the only one in the house "Peter Pan!" she whispered excitedly. Luckily for her and Peter, Ruby's parents were heavy sleepers and could sleep (literally) through a train wreck.
"So your mother told you about me?" Peter said looking a little smug.
"Of course she did, and my grandmother has told me about you too!"
Ruby was ecstatic. 'He has finally come for me, at last.'
"So who am I taking to Neverland this time?" he asked her?
Realizing that he was asking about her name Ruby got out of bed and curtsied as best as she could in her pajama pants. "I'm Ruby." She said smiling up at him.
"Well Ruby are you ready to go Neverland?"
"Yes." was all Ruby could say barely containing her excitement
'You have no idea.'
"Well...I'll have to teach you how to fly first." Peter said scratching his chin.
"Oh." Ruby said getting a little worried, but then Peter smiled and put a comforting hand on her shoulder.
"Don't worry though it's easy, I'm sure you'll pick it up fast!"
'His hand is so warm ' She thought.
"Alright well let's get started, first think happy thoughts!"
Ruby closed her eyes 'Happy thoughts, happy thoughts, hmm...birthday cake, ice cream, horses, the beach, pirates, sleepovers...'
Ruby suddenly felt something sprinkled all over her, she opened her eyes and saw gold dust all over her body, and what surprised her the most is that she realized her feet weren't touching the floor, and now her back was now flat against her ceiling!
"I can fly! I can fly! Oh my goodness Peter I can fly!"
Peter gave her a cute little smirk and then proclaimed "Alright off we go! Time to go to Neverland!"
Peter grabbed Ruby's hand and off they flew to the second star to the right leaving behind a messy bed, and pixie dust that would disappear before Ruby's parents woke up.
Holy cow excitement! Well that was the revised chapter 1 of New Love in Neverland and your input is always appreciated and if you want to see the unedited edition of the next few chapters of this story you can head over to my deviantart account! I have the same exact screen name and everything as this one so it should be easy for you to find :) if note just send me a message and I'll send you the link :)