So, this Is my very first fanfic I have published! I would appreciate some constructive criticism. I wrote this in my notes, but I had it on phone mode, and I couldn't figure out how to publish it! So, finally, let's start the show! Oh, and btw, I dot own Hetalia, or Hary Potter. I do, however, own my OC Joseph Willams.
Chapter 1: Getting on is easy, finding it, not so much.
Madeline Williams looked around at the train station platform. It was like any other platform in Britain, trains rolling in, bricks everywhere you turned, and of course, packed with muggles.
She had strawberry blonde hair, which were tied in low pigtails, and reached down to just below her chest. Her eyes were a beautiful blue, almost violet, which were covered by spectacles that were oval shaped. She wore a blue two-piece suit like outfit, with a red tie and pencil skirt. Madeline also sported a red jacket that resembled a rain coat. All in all, she looked like any other muggle.
What are muggles you might ask? Well, muggles are non-magical people. You and I, for example, are muggles. However, in the case of Madeline Williams, that is not true. For you see, Madeline was, or is, in fact, a witch. A witch getting ready for her very first year at the prestigious school called Hogwarts. I should stop boring you with details, on with the story!
Madeline's father, Joseph Williams, was currently trying to find out where her train was. The letter she had received from the school had said that she was to board the train for Hogwarts( Hogwarts Express), which was stationed at Platform 9 3/4. She was currently standing with her suitcases, all of which were packed and loaded onto stroller. "Excusez-moi*," Her father said to a nearby guard. "Would you mind telling me where Platform 9 3/4 is?"
Mr. Williams had short, sun-kissed blond hair, and sky blue eyes. He was also quite a flirt when his wife wasn't around. And oh, I forgot to mention. Madeline's father wasn't her real father. We'll get to that later. Anyways, continue.
The guard looked puzzled, and said that there was no Platform 9 3/4. While her father pryed him, Madeline started to observe passersby, listening in to their conversations. She only caught a few words, though. One particular conversation caught her ear. "Oh, it's already 10:45. I hope we make it on time. Anyways, why is there so many muggles around here?" It wasn't the fact that they were running late, it was more the fact that she had mentioned muggles. The woman also had a child with her, looking about the same age as her. Mustering up her courage, Maddie politely tapped the woman's shoulder. "Excuse me." She said, in her usual small and quiet voice. "But are you possibly going to Platform 9 3/4?" The woman looked surprised at her question, but still smiled sweetly. "Why yes, dear, we are. Are you lost?" Maddie nodded, and motioned for her father to come over.
The woman showed them a pillar that looked just like any other, and told her that she would have to run into it to get to the platform. Madeline was worried at this statement. It obviously showed on her face, seeing as the woman said to let her son go first. She watched in awe as he ran into the wall, and was gone a second later. Getting ready to go herself, she started running. Faster and faster, catching more and more speed. It was obviously too late to stop. She close her eyes right before she hit the wall. But Madeline Williams never hit the wall. In fact, she simply walked right through it. Opening her eyes, she looked around. If the other platforms had been packed, this platform was full. It had many people, some wearing long black robes, and others wearing muggle clothing. Either way, it was obvious that they were all wizards or witches.
Boarding the train, she found an empty apartment, and sat down. She then put her luggage on the luggage rack. Sticking her head out the window, she waved her hand to Francis. He came over. "Mon petit ange, s'il vous plaƮt soyez prudent.**"Madeline's father said, kissing her forehead. "Je vais, papa. Je t'aime***" and with that, the train took off.
French to English
[Google Translate, might not be correct translation]
*"Excuse me"
**"My little angel, please be careful."
***"I will, papa. I love you."
