My third challenge to NightClan! Please review!
Broken
"Blossompaw, from this moment on, you will be known as Blossomleaf! Frostclaw has given you great training of courage and wisdom." Mintstar, my loyal EarthClan leader, rested her muzzle on me while I gave her a respectful lick.
I have to admit I was quiet shy when my mentor, a cat that I admired and even loved, congratulated me. "Good job, Blossomleaf."
My eyes shone with happiness.
I had kits. I had mated with my crush. There were four kits. The grey one was Stormkit, the white one was Cloudkit, the hazel one was Ivykit, and the other silver one was Icekit.
Then, Frostclaw swiftly swept inside the nursery, growls rumbling in his throat: he was angry.
"I can't believe I wanted you! I can't believe I loved you. All those lies to myself!"
I looked bewildered. "What's wrong? What's happened?"
"I'm marrying my apprentice, a failure!" wailed Frostclaw in misery and desperation.
Widening my eyes, I realized he must've found out my secret.
"You! Loving an AirClan cat, that stupid Suncloud!" spat Frostclaw, unsheathing his claws, but he sheathed them again. "I can't believe I hadn't noticed earlier. You were meeting that scrap of foxdung, breaking the warrior code!"
He knew my secret.
But then...
I gasped. I couldn't believe I was hearing this. "I don't love you," boomed Frostclaw. He left me weeping there. I looked at my kits. Even more pain filled me. The tom that I had loved didn't anymore. I was broken.
Done! Please review!