This is written in a script style, just an idea that came to me. The Doctor Who Universe, the Doctor and Amy are the BBC's. All the rest is mine.
Child of Galifrey
Teenage girl named Felicity lies in four-poster bed, tossing and turning. Her eyes flick under her lids. She sees things.
Flashback: The Doctor striding towards her, his face like thunder
Flashback: A Dalek turning to face her
Flashback: Galifrey in all its former glory before the war
Flashback: The Doctor in red Time Lord robes
Flashback: Amy Pond weeping, all alone, in the dark
Her maid wakes her by shaking her shoulder
Maid
Its all right miss. Just a dream.
Felicity
But-they-she
Maid
What is it, miss?
Felicity
The fallen angel weeps.
Maid
(Worried)
Shall I fetch your father miss?
Felicity
Do not worry him
(Voice become frantic)
Help her!
Maid
Help who miss?
Felicity
The fallen angel
Maid
But who is she miss?
Silence
Maid
Miss?
Felicity
Amy...Amy Pond
Her eyelids close and she faints, falling back on her bed.
Opening titles
The DOCTOR and AMY are inside the TARDIS.
Doctor
Here we are.
Amy
Where's here?
Doctor
No idea. But I picked up some high levels of abnormal behaviour.
Amy
(Sulking)
You said we could go to the Caribbean.
Doctor
Nah, what we need's an adventure. We're in the early...1900's.
Amy
Oh just brilliant.
Doctor
Hey, don't dis the fifties!
Amy
All right, now lets go see where we are. I hope its somewhere sunny like Spain.
She walks out, followed by the Doctor
CUT TO:
DOCTOR and AMY standing outside a large posh house. AMY shivering, the DOCTOR ginning.
Amy
It's freezing.
Doctor
Ahh, good old England.
Amy
Freezing old England don't you mean?
Amy goes back inside the TARDIS and returns with a thick coat
Amy
Much better
Doctor
Come on then
Amy
Where?
Doctor
Well, big house, lots of posh cars. A party.
Amy
A party in the 1950's.
Doctor
Yeah!
Amy
You're mad.
Doctor
Charming.
Amy
We haven't even got tickets.
DOCTOR waves sci-cic paper
Doctor
Haven't we?
AMY takes the DOCTOR'S arm and grins. They walk towards the big house.
CUT TO:
DOCTOR and AMY walk into a big marble hall. A Steward bustles up.
Steward
Who are you? There is a party on you know!
Doctor
Yes, we're guests. I'm the Doctor; this is Amy, my plus one.
Steward
(Flustered)
Yes, of course. How could I have forgotten? I apologise for my previous behaviour. Please go through the doors on your right to the main reception room, where you shall find the Lord of the manor, Baron Hala.
DOCTOR and AMY walk through the doors on the right. STEWARD pulls out a mobile phone.
Steward
(Whispers)
It's them master, its the Doctor.
His Master
And the woman?
Steward
Yes sir, her too. The fallen angel has arrived.
His Master
Excellent...
CUT TO:
The DOCTOR and Amy have walked into a busy large reception room. A group of women by the far, motion for AMY to join them. AMY looks at DOCTOR. He nods.
Doctor
I'm going to explore.
She goes over to them.
Delilah
I'm Delilah sweetheart.
Amy
Amy, Amy Pond.
Delilah
You got yourself a nice man there.
Amy
(Confused)
The Doctor? We're not together or anything. He's an old friend.
Tallulah
Well he sure is, but a fine fellow all the same. Name's Tallulah by the way.
Delilah
I say, where is he? He seems to have vanished.
CUT TO:
The DOCTOR wanders through wood panelled corridors upstairs. He hides in the shadows as a Medicine doctor comes out of a room. Curious, he goes in. Its Felicity's room. She's lying on her bed looking pale.
Felicity
No! Not you-go away!
Doctor
It's all right. I'm a Doctor
Felicity
The Doctor.
Doctor
How did you know that?
Felicity
I see you in my dreams, every night.
Doctor
Well, I'm only visiting with Amy so I don't see why I could be important.
Felicity
She came!
Doctor
Who?
Felicity
The fallen angel. Stay away from her for you shall be her ending.
Doctor
What? I'd never lay a finger on Amy
Felicity
You said it once before, a different you, one of the ten stars that float around your head. You are smart; you can make people want to die.
Doctor
Amy is different. And what do you mean stars?
Felicity
You have many faces, Time Lord.
Doctor
What did you call me?
Felicity
It is what you are.
Doctor
This is like Pompeii all over again.
Felicity
My parents were in Pompeii. He told me so.
Doctor
(Gentle)
Who were your parents?
Felicity
I never met them. They are dead and dying burning, forever burning-
She lets out a gasp.
Doctor
Where were they from?
Felicity
Ireland, a place called Galifrey. They died in a war.
Doctor
That's not in Ireland.
Felicity
The Baron told me it was so.
Doctor
The Baron, what's he to you?
Felicity
He adopted me. I am hope to him, he says. He never married so I am the closest thing he has to a child.
How was it? They'll probably be at least one more chapter.
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