I'm always thinking of stories and figured I should finally post one to see if it's any good. Hope you enjoy. Feel free to criticize. Sorry it's so short wanna see if it gets any bites.
Peter's Rapture story
Chapter 1: How it all started
I sit down to catch my breath, it feels like i've been running for days. I was at the New years ball when some brutes came out of nowhere and started shooting up the place.
"Come join us in the underwater city they said, it'll be fun they said." I mumble to myself
Fine whatever, I have my dads old revolver in the safe back in my room, if I can just get there. i might be able to get out of this alive.
I stand up from behind the crates I was laying against. No sign of anyone around.
I start cautiously inching towards the nearest door. As I get there
Bang bang!
Two shots, barely missing me hit the door.
Well so much for that
I pull the lever quickly closing the door.
Guess I'll just have to go the long way around
I jump the ledge the door's next to.
"Come on I thought i heard something move here"
Crap, I jump behind some pile of rubble and metal. Hoping the dim lights of the hall keep me hidden.
"Well go look then."
I think I hear the other guy leaving. This ones getting dangerously close though.
Looking through the rubble for something to defend myself with. I find something cold and hard.
Hes getting closer, snaps his fingers making a fire.
Aam, that explains it. I knew that stuff was trouble.
Hes getting closer. Thud I hit him as hard as I can with my pipe. He goes limp.
Woah, this is almost as good as a frying pan
Doesn't sound like anyone else is up ahead so I start walking again.
"This is gonna be a long day"