Sooo first story :D

things you need to know otherwise this story will make NO sence wat so ever:

Bella is a vampire (details in the story) this is set way berfor graduation

Renesmee doesnt exist (im sorry but if she did it would just complicate the story)

Jacob has imprinted on Leah but dw bout that cause it doesnt really come into the story (atleast i havnt writen it in yet)

should be good i spent like 6 hours writing the first chapter plus the fact that im totally awesome helps so...

disclaimer:

Dont own twilight :( SM does, if i did, i would have shot jane maby even irina (yes i know it wouldnt have killed them but it wouldve been hilariouse to watch) and i wouldve got Jake and Leah together, cause it amuses me n_n so getting back on topic

i dont own the twilight saga *sobs quietly in corner*

BPOV

I walked happily to lunch with Edward and Alice, we took our usual spot in the cafeteria with our fatigue plates of human food.

it had been only a year since victoria bit me after almost killing Edward, luckily Edward had ripped her apart before she could do any real damaged but it was already too late to reverse the effects of the venom so much to his distress he had to let the change happen, I was allowed to come back to school but i had to wear annoying contacts because people would notice if my eyes went from brown to topaz over one summer, I was very good at controlling my thirst and found it easy to be around humans so i had no issue with not wanting to eat my old friends constantly.

So we where sitting in the cafeteria talking and laughing with jess, Angela and ben when Alice's eyes glazed over-she was having a vision. Jessica gave her a look but I interrupted her trail of thought by asking "oh my jess have you done something with your hair it looks so shiny today?"

she immediately blushed and then started ranting about how she thought she should start experimenting with different hair products and how some made her hair greasy and dull and others made it look awesome.

I silently laughed to myself at how cute jess was when it came to the little 'human' things.

Edward smiled approvingly at me and whispered "aren't you a sly little one" too low for the others to hear. i winked back and zoned out for the rest of lunch wondering what Alice had seen, ill ask Edward about it later.

Biology

I walked to last period with Edward and we took our usual seats at the back of the room.

"so what did Alice see?" i had planed to ease into the subject but my curiosity got the best of me and i dove right into it.

"hmm...just a new vamp in town, nothing to worry about love"

"a new vampire?, could they be a threat?" I asked as i shuddered remembering and...victoria

he looked down at me and gave me a reassuring smile "no i doubt it, she looks like a newborn so we are planning to catch up with her tonight and explain our situation and hers"

"can I come?"

"sure love if you want, we are only going to be standing around whilst Carlisle talks though"

"well I've got nothing else planned tonight" I laughed, and with that we turned our attention to the front of the class and got on with the lesson.

After school

we drove back to the house meet with Carlisle and Esme then we sped of into the woods to look for the newborn i now knew was called dawn.

Alice led us into the direction she saw dawn. by a low stream near the treaty line. i had phoned jake to let him know and he said he wold warn sam and maybe come along for support. when we got to the right area Alice stopped dead in her tracks.

"what is it Alice?" jasper asked his voice laced with concern as her eyes glazed and a terrified look spread across her face.

Edwards eyebrows pushed together and he let out a frustrated grunt

"Edward?"

"the girl dawn, she was-is-being chased by something but whenever it gets close the vision vanishes"

"the wolves?"

"no its our side of the area, but whatever it is its got this girl shook"

"oh" was all i could manage to say, whatever was after this girl must be bad, bad enough to have a vampire running for their life-well they don't technically have one but u get my drift-and a new born no I thought over what it could be Edward relayed Alice's vision to the rest of the family

"well whatever it is I'm sure we can take them!" Emmett grinned

"oh come on! we don't even know this girl or what's after her do we really want, or need, to get involved with this" rose retorted

"Rosalie has a point there Emmett for all we know this girl could deserve whatever's coming to her" jasper said with an icy tone to his voice. Jasper, i knew, had been thro Allot in his early life as a vampire and had seen the viciousness of our kind.

"oh but jazz" Alice pleaded "you didn't see her, the look on her face, the fear and innocence in her eyes whatever is going on with her she didn't look even a tiny bit deserving of whatever fate has in store for her" Alice whispered. I was sure if vampire could cry Alice would have broken down by now.

"look Alice I know you feel strongly about this but we just ca-" jasper was cut of by a high pitched scream then the familiar sound of tearing metal.

we all looked up to see a young girl about the age of 14 or 15 re-attach her arm and scamper up a tree. she had long waist length blond almost white hair with a black streak through her fringe. and as I expected her violent red eyes stuck out the most against her pale, pale skin.

she looked down at us and for a second a confused look spread across her face but then the tree she was in started to shake furiously and i looked down to what was causing the disturbance. and when I saw what it was I realized why she had been so afraid, I know I would have.

they where what I imagined real werewolves to look like. too put it plainly they where ugly , two of them where on all fours and they where roughly the same size as Jacob and the pack maybe even a little bigger, and the other two where on their back legs shaking the tree and growling viciously not paying us any attention. and they where huge like twice the size of a human or vampire and with canines the size of my hand. just as i adjusted to the sight of these creatures and tryed to decide on what to do the two on the ground turned their heads to look at us and gave a earth trembling growl before lunging at us.

Whoo so extreme and only the first chapter!

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