I am not Dauntless I am Divergent

by AhpWriter

No war. Tris struggles to fit into Dauntless as Six, she begins to find out who she really is. Is she Tobias' lover? Christina's friend? Eric's enemy? Is she Dauntless, really? The answer is no. Tris is Divergent, and can't be controlled. Rated T for unexpected twists that may come into play and I want the rating to be correct; minor swearing.

1. Chapter 1

A/N I am new at this, so if you have any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism or encouragement it is greatly appreciated... Enjoy!

Tris POV

I lay on the bed with Tobias, who I managed to find in the massive crowd of Dauntless, and listen to the whoops and hollers of my fellow Dauntless members going to a rooftop party to celebrate the initiation of me and my fellow members. I should go; it is part of being Dauntless, going to parties. But then I would have to see Peter again so soon, and Christina will insist upon making me up just to show him something that I am unaware of. I hate both of these prospects, but I did come in first. I deserve a party. Maybe I am still too Abnegation to celebrate. Maybe I will always be too Abnegation to celebrate. No. I am Dauntless now, and Divergent or not, I'm going to fit in. I will even resign myself to Christina to achieve it.

"Hey Tobias?"

"Yeah? Are you thinking about going? "he asks, staring pointedly at the door.

"Yes. I know you won't come with me, seeing as it is on a rooftop, but will you at least keep Christina from smothering me in fashion? I am so not in the mood."

"Oh, I don't know. You look even better than usual when she 'smothers you in makeup'." He playfully quips. "I'll walk you to her new apartment."

"How do you know where it is?" He arches an eyebrow at me.

"I know things..."

"Tobias!" I say, exasperated. He simply turns and walks out of the apartment. I did say I would go, so I reluctantly follow. As we cross the threshold, we lapse into a bemused silence all the way to Christina's new home, on the third floor of the glass building above the Pit. My old instructor Four, who is not my boyfriend Tobias, told my initiation class that we would learn to love it, and indeed we have. As Tobias and I walk across it, someone calls out to him. He gives me a questioning look as I to say, "May I go? You can get to Christina's on your own, right?" I give him a tiny nod of permission and he slips away with the unknown companion. I continue on my way to Christina's.

A/N: My chapters are shorter than most writers'…but I update more often. (I think)Anyway please just give a chance.( a reminder: any suggestions, advice, or other forms of constructive comments are greatly appreciated!)