disclaimer - i don't own anything not cats, the song or anything. Rated t just to be safe

chapter 1 - no more

Victoria was sat in front of one of the pipes in the junkyard. She had been sat ther for an hour so far, watching Plato play with the other kitten Jemima, Electra and Etcetra. Since Tugger was now in a mega relationship with Bombalurina or bomb for short, Plato had taken Tugger's place in the kitten's lives.

Plato was Victoria's mate but he never acted like it anymore. The only time he would talk to her was when he was bored of playing ith the kittens. Other times he would just go to sleep and act as if Victoria wasn't even there. Victoria had been horrified at the fact that her friends were to busy with her mate to even notice Victoria staring at them.


Alonzo had just woken up from sleeping on the other side of the junkyard to the noisy kittens. He quietly crept up onto the pipe behind Victoria, just to look at all the kittens and spy on what Victoria was doing. Suddenly Victoria had started to sing. He was shocked cause she never sang, she was just known for being the best dancer. Alonzo couldn't help but think that she had the best voice he had ever heard.

`You say your gonna work it out` she began singing.
`Then you say your having doubts
Telling me you'll walk away but then you go and stay
Calling me day and night, saying she don't treat you right
Then you turn around and give her one more chance`

`Baby you know it isn't fair
You expect me to be their , but we never get no where`

`I have got one foot out the door
I don't wanna hear about her no more
I'll make a long story short
It's time to make up your mind boy
No more back and forth
I don't wanna hear about her no more
If i'm not what you want
I don't wanna hear no more`

` Stop telling me you need more time
Tired of the same old line
Better make a move or you will find
I ain't takin it, cause you know its wrong
Better let her know
It's time to go, your moving on
Baby you don't know how close i am to being gone`

`I've known you long enougth
I can only take so much
Tell me if you i have your heart
Who do you really love
Baby you know it isn't fair
You expect me to be there
But we never get nowhere`

`I have got one foot out the door
I don't wanna hear about her no more
I'll make a long story short
It's time to make up your mind boy
No more back and forth
I don't wanna hear about her no more
If i'm not what you want
I don't wanna hear no more`

`I don't wanna hear no more
If your sure that you really love me
I don't wanna hear no more
Out the door if you still don't know
I've been there for you and you know it's true
You belong with me, what you gonna do`

`I have got one foot out the door
I don't wanna hear about her no more
I'll make a long story short
It's time to make up your mind boy
No more back and forth
I don't wanna hear about her no more
If i'm not what you want
I don't wanna hear no more`

Victoria wiped away the tears that were forming in her eyes. Alonzo jumped down from on top of the pipe.

"Hey Victoria, theres no need to cry" He said as he sat down next to her and put his arm around her.

"Where did you come from?" she asked in shock.

"I got here just before you sung your song. Might i say it was beautifully sang. Now why are yoou crying?" he replyed,

"Thanks but i doubt it was that good. It's just Plato, he never talks to me and he acts as if im not there. But what really annoys me is that he spends more time with my friends than with me" She said before bursting back into tears.

Alonzo wiped the tears from her eyes with his paw.

"Theres nothing to worry about. If you ever need to talk, yoou know where i am. I promise i won't tell anyone" he answered trying to comfort her.

"Thanks Alonzo, your the best" she stated before giving the black and white tom a hug.

"It's ok Victoria" he said and with that he gave her a small kiss and walked off to his den.

Victoria felt ever so happy now that she had talked to Alonzo. She ran off to her and Plato's den not realising that Plato had seen the hole thing. He had stop playing with the kittens as they had run off to find Mistofelees.

Plato was sat on one of the chairs when Victoria walked in but instead of confronting her now, he thought he would wait and see if it carried on. So with that they both ate their tea and went to bed all with out saying a word.

so what do you think of my first chapter. please review.