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Chapter 1
(Tris's POV)
I didn't like living this way. I felt like I no longer belonged at dauntless. Tobias was gone. He had left to go with abnegation for a while. He was going to stay there for a year and a half. We knew long distance wouldn't work so we just decided to break up. He gave me one last final kiss and left. That was just one bad thing. Shauna had died. Her sister Lynn and boyfriend Zeke were finding it hard to get over it. We were all still friends, but talking to each other was difficult. It had been two months since all of this happened. The initiates had finished their fear landscape the day before. The one that really stuck to me was my fear of intimacy. I didn't know why but it scared me. We had two more days till we picked our jobs and moved into our apartments. I got out of the bed to get a drink of water. There I bump into Uriah. He was scratching the back of his neck. "T...Tris, do you want to go on a walk with me?" I thought nothing of it. "Sure." He starts walking and I follow him. He takes me to the pit. "I thought we were going on a walk," I say anxiously. He looks into my eyes.
(Uriah's POV)
I was sad for my brother Zeke but he was recovering slowly. I had spent so much time with Zeke that I had practically been ignoring Marlene. She ended things between us. I got up to get water and then I saw Tris. Her grayish blue eyes looking at me. I wanted to talk to her but how could I without her knowing I liked her. I asked her, "T…Tris, do you want to go on a walk with me?" She replies with a simple, "Sure," I didn't really want to walk. I wanted to talk to her. Even while I was dating Marlene my mind often shifted to her. I didn't know how or why. I guess you could say I had always liked Tris. I take her to the pit and sit down. She looks at me with those eyes and I melt. She was anxious as she said, "I thought we were going on a walk." I just stare at her. Then finally I snapped out of it. "What's wrong Uriah?" she asks a puzzled look in her eyes. He reached down and grabbed her hand. He looks at his hand intertwined with Tris's. It felt good to him. He see's Tris look at their hands and pulls her away fast as she blushes. He starts to open his mouth but Tris talks first. "Uriah I like you but I'm trying to get over Four and you're dating Mar…" I cut her short as I kiss her. She does nothing at first but then she kisses me back. "Wait!" she whispers loudly. "Aren't you and Marlene dating?" I take a deep breath and reply, "She dumped for hanging out with my brother." Tris looks puzzled and relieved at me. I realize then that Tris and Marlene are close friends. i didn't want to ruin things between them. Then i look into her grayish blue eyes. I can't help it and I kiss her again. This times she knows its coming and kisses me passionately. Then she pulls away and looks deep into my eyes, "I can't do this!" Then she runs back into the transfer room. I knew I messed up and I did bad.
(Tris's POV)
I needed time alone to pick up everything that had just happened. Uriah said he liked me and kissed me twice. I kissed him back but Uriah and Marlene must have recently broken up. Plus I still loved Tobias. I knew I had feelings for Uriah, but would I be willing to lose Marlene as a friend to show Uriah.
Thanks for reading chapter one. Please leave your reviews. I want at least ten views but I am doing chapter two tonight anyway. Thank you. And tell me should Tris date Uriah and share her feelings or should she wait for Four. Please Review.