OK people, this is my first story on fanfiction so plz don't judge harshly. I'm trying my best to make this story great. i really am. I need constructive criticism! Oh, also, i know i have a bunch of grammer mistakes. I am doing this on Microsoft Word, so im trying.

SLEEPOVER!

Ch.1- Invite

Max's POV

It's been two years since that eventful year when the erasers came and took Angel, and only one since I've saved the world. Now, were back here at my mom's house in Arizona. Fang, Iggy, and I are 16, Nudge is 13, The Gasman is 10, and Angel is 8. Were all enrolled in school and currently staying at my mom's house with her and Ella. Ella's 15, but turning 16 in about month. Fang and I have been getting closer and closer, and by that, I mean we've been dating for a year and a half. Iggy and Ella have been going out for a few months, and all is perfect on their watch, as is ours. All but Angel has gotten new powers. Here, ill explain. Me, ive gotten a few, I can transport over very long distances, fly and run up to 1,500 mph, my hearing has improved, and when fang turns invisible, I can see him. Trust me I need that power, he always tries to sneak in my room to watch and see what I do when I'm alone. To bad I always catch him. Fang's invisibility power has gotten really strong; he can stay invisible for six hours at a time, move around, and has power to turn other people invisible by touching them. Iggy has gotten his sight back thanks to some nice doctors, can hear things from up to a mile away, is the best pyro I know, and can levitate stuff, he's a telekinesis. Nudge has the power to talk your ears off, attract metal, make it bend and twist anyway without breaking it, and is the best hacker I know. The Gasman or Gazzy is still known for his name, can still imitate voices, and turn into a hawk for five minuets, then he just poofs back. It's really funny. Angel hasn't gotten any knew powers, her's have just improved.

"Hey Max" Someone yelled from behind me on the sidewalk. Fang and I immediately stopped dead in our track and turned around to see my best friend Jessica. She was the pretty girl every girl wanted to be, and every guy wanted to be with. She had a light brown pixie cut with dark highlights, big innocent golden eyes, a big smile, and a pocket full of money to match. Jessica was one of the first friends I made when we moved here. (A/N- Based on Alice from Twilight.)

"I couldn't find you anywhere after school, and I wanted to give you this." She handed me a fancy looking, cream covered envelope that had my name embroidered in it. "It's a invitation to my sweet-sixteen part, and I wanted you to come to my sleepover, it's going to be so much fun, and It wouldn't be any fun without you!" She said. I glanced at Fang, only to see that he was trying hard not to laugh. I glared at him. As I tore open the envelope and looked at the delicate looking card that read:

Hey girl,

You are here by invited to Froths SWEET SIXTEEN slumber party that shall be held a the downtown Hilton. You are obligated to bring PJ's, your bathing suit, CD's, pillows and blankets, and anything else you desire. It will be packed full of crazy, wild fun! There will be 14 girls attending besides you and me. The party will start at 6:30 pm on May 9, 2009 and ends at 3:30 pm on May 10, 2009. I hope you can make it, your presence will make this party more enjoyable for everyone!

Jessica F.

"So…can you make it?" Jessica pleaded while giving me the Bambi Eyes. I truly wish Nudge and Angel wouldn't have taught her that. I quickly ran my eyes to the ground, trying to avoid her gaze. Don't get me wrong, I love Jessica and all but… well…lets just say that the last slumber party I went to, murderous things happened, that included nail polish, hair spray, zebra print bikini's(oh, by the way, we all developed a new power to make our wings disappear.) spray tan's, and semi-hot guys. (None compared to Fang though, he's way hotter!) It was kind of fun, so…maybe I should give it another go.

"That depends, are you going to dress me up as Malibu Barbie again?" I said in a calm, steady voice. Meanwhile, after I was finished inspecting my shoes, I glanced up to see exactly what I dreaded, once again, the Bambi Eyes! So…with all of you out there knowing how they are my weakness, I bet you can guess what happened.

"Sure, why not?" I mumbled, accidentally making it sound more like a question than a statement. Faster than what Ithought was humanly possible, she attacked me with a giant hug and repeated the words 'Thank You' over and over and over again. Once she finally pulled away, she bided us good-bye and left. I then turned to Fang, who had been silently laughing at the whole conversation, only he knows the truth of what happened at that sleep-over. "What are you laughing at?" I said with a steel hard, icy voice that could make the happiest person on earth depressed and go hiding in there emo corner. But, of course, Fang being Fang, only smiled wider. Man, I hate him so much! Though, knowing myself, ill probably forget this ever happened by the time we start making out in either my room or his, and being me, that'll only make me love him more. (Yes, I admit it, I am in love with Fang. He knows it to, I tell him every night before we go to bed, and every morning when we wake up for school, and anytime in-between when he kisses me or is being sweet. The great thing is, he loves me to! Who would've known?) "Nothing" He answered to innocently to truly be nothing. I put on my sad, yet still cute, pout face, the one I know he can't turn down, and looked up at him sadly and said "It's ok, you don't have to tell me…"then looked away slowly, giving him just enough time to get a last glance at my sad face. "No, it's okay, ill tell you. I was laughing because you can't ever seem to turn down those eyes." He said while wrapping his arms around my waist, pulling me close to him. "Hey, you can't turn them down either." I said accusingly, while starring into his eyes. I could see the small smile that was starting to play at his lips, and I could feel mine doing the same. We must've looked pretty happy, standing in the middle of the sidewalk, Fangs arms wrapped around my waist as if they belonged there. He started to lean down, gently pressing his soft, full lips aginst mine before pulling away. "Let's get home" He said, and then winked at me. He leaned back down and seductively whispered in my ear "We'll have more time for that later" gently grazing my ear as he spoke. I could feel Goosebumps rising up on my arms and on the back of my neck. Apparently, he felt it to and started chuckling. We walked the rest of the way home in a comfortable silence, enjoying each others company. When we arrived home, i could faintly ake out giggling coming from my room.

"I'll be right back Fang, I think theres some little monsters in my room." I said over my shoulder while hedding for the stairs. I silently popped my head into my room to see what Nudge and Angel were doing, they were on my computer. They were to pre-occupied with the computer to notice my entrance, so i decided to take advantage of the situation. I soundlessly crept up behind them and peeked over Nudge's shoulder to see what they were doing. That's when it hit me, Why arnt they on their computers? Why mine? I glanced at the screen only to see the words Welcome to Max's Blog!

Crap! How did they find that?!?! That's personal! I'de rather have Angel reading my mind every second of every day! Truth is, i wouldnt of cared if it wouldnt have stuff about Fang on there. He's the only person that knows about it! He's never read it, never will. Unlike some people (coughcoughAngel&Nudgecough) he actually respect's my stuff. It doesnt have anything bad on it, just a few things they didnt know about us. Like...The time we were talking about random stuff in his room around mid-night last summer when we both fell asleep on his bed. Or, the time Iggy walked into the kitchen and found Fang pinning me against the wall while we were making out. That's not stuff they need to know about our relationship...At all!

"What are you to doing?!?!?!?" I yelled from right behind them, making them jump and fall out of there chairs. Normaly, i would've cared, but i was to mad at the molment.

"Uhhh...well...you see max, we were..." Nudge was at loss for words for the first time in her life. She looked scared. She should be scared.

"YOU TO ARE SO GOING TO GET IT!!! I screeched, chasing them out of my room chassing them down the stairs, to the living room, out the door, and into the air. There so going to get it!

Ok, this is the first chapter! Please Review!!!I need constructive criticum!!! Please!!! Im trying my best here!

LOve and Kisses,

~ ~Andrea!