Note: Hi! This is my first submission to this site! A sad little poem about Koishi and Satori.
Please feel free rate and review, leave suggestions, comments about my poem, etc...
I wrote this right after I had a rather strong, sudden and unexpected emotional experience one day. It was one of those things that you just have to write down, you know?
The first two lines (because for some reason, I couldn't seem to take them out) are from my perspective and the rest is from Koishi's perspective.
.. And the visions- those terrible,
horridly realistic visions;
My sister shunning me,
leaving me kneeling there to
call out her name and cry
my heart dry again-
but there's no answer
to calm me;
no last farewell as she walks
away without a glance-
she doesn't need one.
She can feel me,
but I can sense our connection
weakening as she continues on.
I start to run towards her-
rain and salty tears
streaking down my face- begging,
pleading for her to come back.
She turns her head and looks back at me-
a tear sliding down her cheek and a
stony look on her face, one that I
had never expected to see.
She faced away again,
bowed her head and vanished
into the distant fog,
the feel of her presence
fading with her.
Alone in the rain,
against the dreary sky,
I wept.
