"Eyes Closed"

By Kitty Rasputin

When I close my eyes I remember

a steed that was really a sheepdog named Ambrosius,

talkative door knockers,

a gentle giant that was cleverly disguised as a big orange-furred monster,

the cleaners,

a valiant fox that always called me "my lady,"

helping hands,

an ancient wise-man and his sarcastic hat,

the oubliette,

reddish orange creatures that could remove their appendages and reattach them at will,

a helpful worm with neon blue hair,

false alarms,

and a cowardly dwarf that always came back to rescue me.

When I close my eyes I remember

a white barn owl,

a crystal that would show me my dreams,

thirteen hours,

a cruel and melodious voice that mocked me at every turn,

a tasty, tainted peach,

untamed platinum hair,

searching relentlessly through a masquerade of goblin faces,

that Cheshire cat grin,

dancing to a song that only we could hear in a place where we could see only each other,

falling down,

a mismatched pair of eyes,

"fear me, love me, do as I say,"

and an unforgettable face that haunts my every waking moment.

When I close my eyes I remember everything that I have lost.

When I close my eyes, he still has power over me.

I wrote this for my creative writing class and thought everyone else might enjoy it. Don't worry. I haven't forgotten about "What You Wish For." I just got stuck for a little bit. Read and review.