What if it takes for Derek and Chloe 2 weeks to get to Andrew's house? What if Derek realizes that he feels something for Chloe on the way? And what if Derek meets a new friend?
Too Early
***Derek's Pov***
"Chloe?" I asked "w-what?" she turned from the bus window and stared at me. She Sat up straighter and gave me a confused look "what is it D-Derek?" "I… love… you".
*** Author's Pov ***
Whoa wait I have about 2 weeks of their lives missing here
Back it up *beep* *beep*
2 weeks earlier
*** Back to Derek's Pov ***
Chloe and I were walking down a road together, well I was walking and she was jogging to keep up with me. I stopped to let her catch up when she said "C-can we stop for the n-night, you now f-find a cheap motel to sleep in. I found a fifty on th-the side walk?" huh, I considered it. "Fine, one night, one room and no room service… ill take the floor." "Thanks!" I could see the surprise on her face. Was I that unreasonable? I took a deep sniff to make sure were safe. Just a bundle different people I don't know… and Chloe. She always smelled of fresh strawberries with whipped cream on top. I can get lost in that spell. "Earth to Derek, Were almost there." "Oh! Right I was just thinking about…. Umm Simon and Tori" "We'll find them soon" "yeah... well find them soon"
*** Chloe's Pov***
When we finally got our room Derek started talking again. "I call the shower first." O_o "ok". While he was in the shower I got a good look around. Full sized bed, Small TV, Telephone and a dresser full of clothes someone left here, everything a typical room would have except a floor space big enough for Derek to sleep (considering how much he rolls around in his sleep).
3 minutes later Derek got out of the bathroom… in his underwear. I quickly moved my gaze to the safety of his face. "Hi... umm I-I think ill take the floor this t-time" "No it's been awhile scince we had a bed its all yours" he replied "You s-sure?" "Yeah positive"
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