The rewritten version of summer problem. Same title and same story just written better. So far only chapter 1 has been rewritten. I will tell you guys if it's rewritten or not.
Key:
"Talking"; "Emphasis and thoughts"
-*- scene changes; POV: Change of view
Chapter 1: Prologue
Ayame sat on a boulder that rested by a stream. This boulder has become her one place where she can just past time. The natural sounds of the woods around her were just background noise for the she-wolf was lost in thought. She was just thinking about her life. Well not really her life more like a person and that person is Kouga. It was that damn "promise" that he told her all those many years ago. Hell she would be better off now if she didn't know about that promise, or worse yet, was taken by the Birds of Paradise.
Spring is just ending and the smell of summer is starting to appear everywhere. Of course with the come of summer is also mating season for the wolf clans and for many of the other woodland animals as well. Ayame sighed. She used to love mating season when she was littler. She thought that all the animals who found their mate was so adorable but now the season was a burden and a reminder of that broken promise.
The promise itself was that Kouga was to mate with Ayame when she was old enough. Lo and behold she's old enough and Kouga has his eyes set on Kagome. Now Ayame felt neither anger nor jealousy for Kagome—at least not anymore— but…
"Ah hell." Ayame spoke aloud; interrupting her own thoughts. "There's nothing wrong with it. But can't Kouga get it through his skull that Kagome doesn't want to be with him?"
She sighed again. Well there's nothing she can do now. Her life might as well be over. She jumped off from the boulder and started her way towards her home.
Review please, remember it's only a prologue.