Come Save Me

by The-Dauntless-Tribute-Wizard

Well guys our story starts out with Tris' fear landscape and a confession by Eric. At the next initiation a small girl comes into play. Who is this small girl? Well she is the younger sister of our dear Tobias and Eric as well. What will happen when Four is forced out of Dauntless by the initiates complaining about the brother/sister relationship? Better than it sounds. Fourtris

1. Tris' POV chpt 1

I don't own Divergent all rights go to the awesome Victoria Roth. I do need a beta if anyone is interested just review it 'kay? Well so farther on in the story I'm going to need some extra OC's if your interested review the name, what faction you were from and want to transfer to, and what he/she looks like.

TRIS' POV on chapter 1
I walk up to him nervously. I rub my hands on my jeans trying to stop their shaking. My voice quiet I speak up. "Hey uh Four could I talk to you quickly?" all the boys heads turn to me and I see a group of eight drunken eight-teen year olds and my bravery falls me.
He looks at me and nods. "Sure" I nod at Eric and chew on my lip as Four hands someone I can't recognize his beer. I smile slightly at Zeke.

He pushes me towards a secluded corner and looks at me. "Tris what's the matter?" he asks his voice hiding his concern. I feel him lay his hand on my cheek, softly brushing my skin with his thumb. I close my eyes and lay my head into his hand with a smile. I mean, I know I shouldn't be smiling, what I'm about to tell him is serious and important. I just can't help it though. He makes me feel so safe and secured.

When I open my eyes his dark blue ones are searching my bluish-grey ones. "Nothing is the matter, Tobias." I say quietly looking up into his eyes. "I uh wanted to know. Could you uh go with me into my fear landscape?" I ask him quietly looking down embarrassed. My voice was quavering.

I look up quickly at him and see his gentle smile then I feel his warm, strong arms close around me. I lay my head on his chest listening to his breathing. I feel him whispering before I hear him. "I would be honored to" I sigh against him and look up. "Thank-you" I say quietly. I feel more relaxed now, knowing he will be there to help me like I was for him. I stand up on my tip-toes and kiss his cheek gently. "No problem" he whispers before capturing my lips in a searing kiss. He then releases me from his arms.

I watch, feeling lonelier already, as he walks back over to the boys. He takes his drink from the boy. I walk past them quickly before I feel someone grab my arm. I turn and come face to face with Eric.

Sorry it's so short you guys, I was going to put Tris', Tobias', and Eric's POV's all in one chapter but decided against it. I hope you guys click the wonderful little review button at the bottom and tell me what you think. It's my first Divergent Trilogy fanfiction. I hope it's up to snuff. 'Kay ~Twirls hair like an annoying girl~ Well byee 3 Angel/ Josie