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Zack Martin POV

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Hi my name is Zack Martin, I'm a Mental person, I have problems, I think I have supernatural imagination.

I imagine things or dream things and does thing that I imagine or dream, Happen in real life. (without wanting to do it)

I make it happen...

Is crazy I know, but some how, It happen, it happen to me.

(the others) The outside people, think that I'm crazy, That nobody can do what I do with my imagination with my mind.

They think I'm a sick men, and it hard and sad when all the people look at you or treat you like a sick man.

But I even know who am I.

Who am I?

I'm in a Mental Hospital.

Why?

It all started like this...In a Car Accident.

1 year ago..

"Maya I will arrived your home,as fast as possible I promise Calm down" I said. I was talking over the cellphone with Maya and driving at the same time, it was already night.

"you always forgot our anniversary Zack! I hope you bought me a gift" I hear her yelling at me over the phone.

"I never forget the gift Maya I love you bye" I said in calmy tone and she hung up.

This is our second anniversary, and I forgot that today was our anniversary,That's why she was yelling at me, and That's why I was driving fast to arrived to her house and I was trying not to be late. I was going to take her to the most expensive restaurant of Las Vegas.

I stop the car because the traffic lights were red. Other car hit my car and pull me on the opposite side of the traffic, and then other car hit me and I was now unconscious.

Other people call 911 and they took me to the hospital. I was pretty bad, They took my wallet and my personal things and Call my Parents and my girlfriend Maya.

Even when I was unconscious I could hear the people.

But then my heart was pounding slow. I hear the people yelling at the doctor to bring me back to live.

But then I open my eyes and Found My self in other place.

I hear a women said "I will help you Zack" she looked blurry, I can't almost see her. But I could tell she has Black hair.

I close my eyes again and I found my self in the hospital.

"Zack... Zack" It sound like the voice of my brother. I open my eyes and he yelled happily "Zack! you are okay!" and I asked confused.

"where am I?" I asked weakly.

"In Las Vegas hospital you had a car accident" Maya said crying.

"I am okay baby don't cry" I said to her.

"You are?" My brother asked.

"Yeah I'm fine, why?" I asked a bit worried.

It will get more interesting ;) Please review thanks