This is my first Harry Potter fanfiction, but I'm really excited and I hope you like it, but please review and let me know if I should continue...I'm working on the next chapter, but i wanted to get this first one up before I go to sleep, and I know it's really short, but I promise the chapters will get longer, and this is mainly to see if people like my story...
please R&R
Disclaimer: None of the characters belng to me all belong to the very creative JK Rowling, well except for Elizabeth Jayne Riddle, she belongs to me, and is basically me, only with a name change because I really don't like my name, and I'm pretty sure Suzy doesn't sound British and I'm trying to use authentic British names, like Elizabeth, but enough of me rambling and on with reading :)
October 1st dawned bright and sunny, the perfect fall day. No one in Malfoy Manner had any idea that today would become the most happy and terrible day of their lives. This was the day Elizabeth Jayne Riddle was born at 10:37 a.m. to her ecstatic parents, Voldemort and Bellatrix Riddle. This event was the best and long awaited day in the lives of Bellatrix and Voldemort, but unfortunately, an exactly an hour and 23 minutes later, the house was raided by Albus Dumbledore, his piercing blue eyes filled with rage and selected members of the Order of the Phoenix.
The Order entered the house, cursing everything and everyone in sight, finally making their way to the room where the happy Riddles were smiling and spending time with their newborn daughter. Suddenly the door burst open and Dumbledore stood in the doorway in all his glory and terrifying might. Just behind him and to the right, Sirius Black shot a stupefying spell in Bellatrix's direction, hitting her square in the chest. She immediately crumpled on the bed, the infant underneath her still form. Voldemort attempted a killing curse in Black's direction, but Dumbledore blocked it (I know, I know impossible, but pretend it is possible for this story) and the two magnificent wizards started to duel.
While the wizards were dueling, the chosen Andromeda Tonks ran quietly and quickly over to her still sister and carried her niece over to the doorway where the other members of the Order stood waiting, and disapparated, heading for the Order's safe house, number 12 Grimmauld Place. Right before disapparating, Black shot a perfectly aimed enervate spell right to Bellatrix effectively waking her up, and before she even lifter her wand, he was gone in a swish of his cloak, along with Dumbledore.
So, what do you think? Should i continue or not? please let me know, because if no one tells me I should continue, then I will take this story off so please click the little button under this that is labeld Review Storyad write "please continue" or something like that