Helllloooooo everyone! I am back and am starting off with Taken! Please bear with me Exams are the week after the following so I will be updating a lot during the Christmas holidays. I will be starting the New Year with a new writing pace. I will try to update at least once a week. Probably Friday or Saturday nights. Mostly Saturday though because Friday nights I go to a church place just for kids/teens in middle and high school soooo if you ever want to meet and you live in the Metairie/Harahan area in Louisiana, want to talk to me, and are in middle/high school just PM me about the address and I will talk to you then. Also I am going to be at mag con (July) and comic con (January), I can meet you there if you live in Louisiana. I want to meet a couple of you out there 'cause I think all of you are awesome.
So I know you're antsy so without further ado welcome to Taken Rewritten!
Disclaimer: I do not own Criminal Minds or Twilight
Infidelity is horrible- there's nothing worse than that; it's devastating – Jessica Capshaw
Bella's Pov
I had just reading the scriptures of the bible. I was no saint, but I made a deal with my saint of a grandmother. Putting the bible away I got up and stretched. The house was clean and everything was in perfect condition for me to go to bed. I could hear the front door slam open as my pig of a husband came home. He walked into the room after about three minutes.
Our house was very large even though it was only he and I living here. He was a wealthy lawyer and I was the head doctor at the large hospital nearby. He was always out 'working late' on some reports from his past cases, or 'out of town for a client meeting'. I knew that was total crap.
For a while he had been cheating on me with his co-worker Tanya. She was a natural strawberry blonde with implants and a nose job gone wrong. She was naturally beautiful, but everything she has done to her body plus the make-up layered on her face like icing on a three tier cake made her look fake and abnormal. I shouldn't judge but I knew from the start that she was a slut. I filed for the divorce paper months ago and I had finally gotten it. All I needed was his signature.
"Hello Bella" Edward said as he leaned over me and gave me a kiss on the cheek. He smelled heavily of that oh-so-familiar perfume. I didn't wear perfume considering that I work in a hospital.
"Hello Edward," I said getting up out of the bed. I needed to take another shower. I smelled heavily of that perfume and sex now. I got a large, baggy white shirt, a lacy black and white bra and panties set that I once brought to show off to him, but now they were just there to use and some black short shorts. Sighing I walked into the bathroom and took a hot shower bathing and just thinking. I looked at the clock seeing as I had been in there for about fifteen minutes. The moonlight just barely illuminated the room since they were partially drawn together. I bent down looking for the shorts as the lights were now off and I dropped them somewhere before I walked into the bathroom. I wanted to put them on because I was not getting into the bed with that pig without any shorts on.
Just as I found the shorts everything went black.
Spencer's Pov
"Guys hurry, there's been another call" JJ said walking into the office. Everyone shot out their seat and began running to the SUVs. Hotch's van drove out first with a screech from the tires. The GPS's were already programmed with a set destination courtesy of Garcia. As we pulled out of the house I could tell it was a lost cause.
"Morgan," Hotch said tilting his head to the side of the house. Morgan nodded and his group circled around the large house. I went with Hotch's group through the front and everyone fanned out across the home. I started down the hall and down the right corridor. The angle of the home and view from the front of the house concluded that the bedroom would be down the next hallway. There were many bedrooms but each seemed to be empty.
As I came upon the only room of the house so far that had the door opened a bit so moonlight illuminated the area of the hallway where the spread area is. Looking back I saw that JJ was being me so I looked at her and nodded. She came around on the other side of the door quickly and we burst through the door. The room was mostly clean but there was a body on the ground that was clearly male by the shoulder set and facial structure. Although there was the husband's body, the wife was nowhere to be found.
"We need a medic in here!" JJ yelled as I put on my gloves and looked around the room. There was a blood spot on the other side of the room by the closet, far from the body. There was also a pair of shorts near them as well. I took notice of the bibles stacked on top of the night stand.
"Hey JJ come take a look at this" I called to her. She walked over pulling her gloves on. She tilted her head to the left suggesting signs of interest, curiosity, and uncertainty.
"What made this house so different? This is out of character for him." JJ asked looking through each of the books. "What made this house so different?"
"Take a look at all of them. They all are different versions. I don't think this is his doing, but I think that all of these belong to the wife. Considering that this bed stand has a stethoscope, I would suggest that this is her side of the bed and she is in a medical practice. There are no pictures of the two together but one, so it seems their marriage wasn't as happy as they wanted people to think." I spoke taking in the room. The medics came and checked his pulse. The confirmed what we already knew. Edward Anthony Mason Cullen was pronounced DOA and the wife was pronounced missing.
Relaying the information to the other members of the main squad as they came in the other began taking pictures of the crime scene.
"Has the family been notified" Hotch asked in a stern tone of voice.
"Yeah, they'll be at the station first thing in the mornin'." Morgan replied over his shoulder.
"Good we'll need to know everything about her. This spike in the M.O. is unlike him. We need to figure out what was so special about the wife. He didn't even leave a note this time there must have been something special about her" Hotch said as Morgan's phone went off.
"Give me all you got babygirl. You're on speaker." Morgan said before sitting the phone down.
"Alright so the victim as you know was 26 years old Edward Anthony Mason Cullen. Born on June 20th, 1988, he was put into the adoption system. He was in there until the age of fifteen and it seems he was a bit of a trouble maker. He was adopted by a very young couple Carlisle Cullen a doctor at a nearby hospital, and Esme Cullen the CEO of a home designing company. She couldn't have children so they adopted. His adopted siblings are Emmett Cullen CEO of a children's summer and afterschool activity center married to Rosalie Cullen a model for Cullen Fashions run by the sister Alice Whitlock, the CEO, married to Jasper Whitlock twin brother to Rosalie Cullen and is a child/adult psychiatrist. Edward seemingly stayed out of trouble and became a model student. Now he is a lawyer making big bucks. He married his high school sweetheart Isabella Marie Swan on as soon as he was eighteen on August 13th, 2006, a month before her eighteenth birthday. Ohhhhh look at that" she said as she stopped talking.
"What is it babygirl?"
"It seems now though that they weren't as happy as they were back then. She went and filed divorce papers that she needed him to sign. He was accused of cheating with his coworker Tanya Denali" She said.
"What about Isabella, Garcia?" I asked.
"Ohhhhh um let's see. Ahhh Isabella Marie Swan was born in a small town in Washington on September 13th, 1987 called Forks. Her parents split when she was three months old and her mother took Isabella with her, but she visited her father for two weeks during the summer. She moved in with her father in 2005 when she was seventeen and married Edward the next year. The next year, they had a child named Renesmee September 11th, 2007 whom the IQ has been assumed to be great but a test has not been performed yet. Isabella is head doctor at the same hospital Carlisle Cullen works at. She has been named head doctor. The position was originally given to Dr. Cullen, but after he refused it went to her. That is it so far but if I have any other information I will let you know, Garcia out!"
"Okay so now that we know that let's get some rest. Be at the station early. we need as much information we can get in the morning." Hotch said. We all dispersed to our hotel rooms. All I could think was that Isabella Swan was scientifically with her facial proportions was beautiful.
