Hi I'm Tianna and this is my first fanfiction and I'm not a very good writer , so if there is anything you want me to improve on just tell me so thanks for reading J
Loren's P.O.V
About 6 months ago Loren Tate was a normal average high school girl constantly listening to Eddie Duran, writing songs she would just sing to herself sometimes even show her mom , Nora Tate. But now she was a rising rock star and the girlfriend of a rock star. None of that mattered though because she has found the love of her life , Eddie Duran.
Eddie's P.O.V
6 months ago I was just a rock star who though he was with the girl he would be with the rest of his life, Chloe Carter. The girl who's name every time he spoke it would make him want to clench his fists. But ever since he met Loren he knew they had a connection something that was beyond what him and Chloe had. Everybody said take it slow , but how could he take it slow when he was falling fast and hard for Miss Loren Tate. When he was gone all he could think of was when he could get back to Loren and now that he was back with her he never wanted to let her go.
Hopefully she says yes to moving in with him he's going to ask her during their picnic at their place , Griffith Park. He was so nervous "What if she says no?" he though replaying over and over in his head as he drove to her house.
Loren's P.O.V
Loren looked in the mirror she was wearing light blue jeans with her favorite knee high brown boots and just a Black Tank with a small jacket covering it. She tilted her head to the right as she examined her outfit and then she smiled a little hoping this was enough. She looked over at her clock . She didn't realize how early she got ready , so she just decided to hang out in the living room and grab a drink. As Loren guided herself to the kitchen she noticed her mom , Nora Tate, drinking coffee while watching television. Loren decided to just grab some juice and sit next to her mom.
"Hey Mom" Loren said while sitting down next to her mom on the couch
"Hey Sweetheart" Nora said while examining her daughters clothing and raising one eyebrow
" You going somewhere?" Loren mentally slapped herself as she heard those words "She forgot to tell her mom about her and Eddie's Date!" she though to herself
" Oh yeah um me and Eddie are going to go to our spot and have a picnic is that okay?" Loren looked at her mom wondering what she'll say
" Sure sweetie" Nora smiled warmly at her daughter " But remember if he hurts you Mama Grizzly is coming out" Nora and Loren laughed knowing it's true but then stopped shortly after the doorbell rang
Loren looked at the clock noticing how early it is she put her juice on the table and opened the door.
Eddie's P.O.V
I smiled as Loren opened the door knowing how beautiful she looked
"Hey Beautiful" I smiled my rock star smile knowing she loved it
" Hey Rock Star" she smiled at him lovingly quickly saying goodbye to her mom and she closed the door behind her
" So where are we going tonight?" Loren looked at Eddie while he was still admiring her
" Now that is a surprise " I winked and quickly kissed her playfully grabbing her hand while we interlocked fingers and I opened the door for her and I got into the drivers seat
I grabbed a bandana and I said to Loren " Close your eyes it's going to be a quick ride so don't worry "
Loren chuckled a little while nodding her head and I tied it carefully over her eyes and I kissed her neck a couple of times knowing she loves it
" Are we going or not" Loren said while smiling as I continued kissing her neck
" Well someone really wants to know the surprise" I smiled kissing her nose and I started to drive to Griffith Park
…10 minutes later….
I pulled up to the park my hand started to get slightly sweaty but thank god it wasn't noticeable
I got out of the car and I went to Loren's side grabbing her hand and I go behind her wrapping my arms around her waist as I lead her to the picnic
Loren's P.O.V
I was trying to figure out where Eddie would be taking me "Rumor? No that's to public I think it's going to be just us" Suddenly these strong hands wrapping around my waist I smile knowing it was Eddie as he finally led me to the surprise
I felt his hands untying the bandana and as soon as I heard the words I was waiting for " Open your eyes" I opened them as fast as I possibly could smiling bright towards the picnic set up with a rose in the middle and candles going around it
"Eddie" I muttered under my breath I quickly turned around and kissed him with passion but I didn't want it to lead anywhere so I pulled away my lips hovering over his " Thank you" I whispered against his lips and smiled grabbing his hand
"Anything For my girl" As soon as Eddie said those last two words I smiled and I sat down on the blanket he had
" So Loren I want to ask you a question" I looked up noticing it Was Eddie's words I was to focused on the food but I smiled as Eddie talked to me
" Okay what's up?" I smiled a little , " Did he look nervous"? I thought
"Well ever since I came back from the "dead" I have been wanting to be with you so much and when we aren't together all I can think about is you " He looked up as he said this . I didn't know what to do so I just nodded my head
"So I was wondering if you wanted to move in with me?" As Soon as Eddie said those words my face fell and I didn't know what to say
" Eddie I-I"
Hey sorry it's not a good cliffhanger but just give me some comments and sorry if it's to short thanks for reading J