Disclaimer- Da owner of DA warriors is DA Erin hunter, not DA me. KKz?
One of my reviewers said that a haiku was only 3 lines Long. He/she is right, I am also right. It is true. But, all my "haikus" are actually a lot of haikus. And, sometimes I tweak th rule. Sometimes it' or something. Cuz tweaking means I have more freedom with the words. :) Also, one of my guest reviewers asked for his/her virtual brownies. If you want virtual treats, you MUST be a member so I can PM you. Oh, and you have to ask for them. Or I'll forget.
Virtual Jamba Juice for DA reviewers! And, if you guess the special POV (by Rain That Falls From Cloud, who everyones should say thanks to) you will also get... CHIPS! (Read above about the member thingie)
The ice was cracking
Some cat yellEd "Be careful Flametail!"
But it was too late.
The ice was cracking
I was plunged into darkness
I couldn't swim up
Jayfeather dove in
His blind blue eyes looked scared
He began to pull
I wanted to say,
"Don't fight the water's peace"
But I had no chance
For a creature came
With hard grey skin and white eyes
Talking to Jayfeather
It rasped, voice shaking
It said "It is not your time"
To Jayfeather, not me
I felt him let go
I sunk back to the bottom
As Jayfeather lived
And there was peace. Once again.
The last sentence is not part of the haiku. I put it there because I liked how it summed up the haiku. Please read and review!