So… I can't believe I'm doing this, but I'm writing A Bleach fic! I'm pretty nervous to be honest, so please be gentle with the reviews! This is the first story I've ever written with actual dialogue, and it took a lot of confidence to even write this… Heh, anyway thank you Racholasj, and the writers of Winter War for making me like fan fiction, and for all my fellow nerd friends who also write fanfiction! It seems I've finally become a true nerd!
Anyway before I start, I need to let you know that THERE WILL NOT BE ANY LEMONS OR ANYTHING LIKE THEM! Other than that, allow me to introduce you to my story!
DISCLAIMER: I do not own bleach. If I did, I would explain what Hell is, and give Orihime more badass moments!
Also M rating!
"Hello shinigami" the stranger breathed in Ichigo's ear.
Ichigo jumped in surprise,
He had just closed his eyes after a long night of being a Shingami, but now he was standing face to face with someone he didn't know.
He noticed that he was a short, (barely taller than Orihime) very emaciated looking young man, dressed in grey. Other than that he was pretty average looking.
"What the hell?" "Who are you!" A better question Ichigo thought was where he was. It kinda looked like his inner world, but a lot more desolate, and for some reason that caused a feeling of dread to surge throughout his mid. It felt… off somehow.
"Don't worry." "I put you in my inner world, while you were sleeping". "When you awake, you'll be back in your bed with that annoying stuffed animal." The man glanced behind him l nervously, as if he was expecting someone any moment.
Ichigo clenched his fists. "You know you got a lot of nerve kidnapping me like that!" "I could kick your ass for that!"
"And boys your age should be dreaming about naked women." The man said sardonically. "Unless you prefer men or both, then I should say we are not that disimular." He said way too flirtatiously for Ichigo's liking.
"Shut up you pervert!" Ichigo's anger was increasing by the minute, becoming increasingly annoyed by the weird man before him. "What do you want from me?"
"I see that your one of those people who takes himself way too seriously." He frowned and crossed his arms. "Listen, I was trying to take the levity out of what I'm about to tell you, and you're not gonna want to hear it, and trust me to need to listen!'
"Because if you don't everyone you care about is going to die.
" Ichigo senses suddenly shot in attention. Did he hear right? "What?" What are you talking about!"
Ichigo was now paying close attention…
"GOOOOOOOD"!
"Oh god no! Listen go to That asshole Urahara! Ask about the Izanagi! He owes me anyway…
" MOOORNING!
Many questions shot through Ichigo's mind but just like that…
…he was awake with the sight of his father a few seconds away from attacking him.
Ichgo barely rolled away this time. He must be getting rusty.
ICHIGOO- OOMPH!
Ichigo looked up and saw that his father had gotten himself Imbedded in his bed again.
Again being the key word here.
"Damn it dad! When will you act your age"!
"When you act yours"! Isshin retorted with the goofy grin he almost always had.
Ichigo was about to argue more but was interrupted by the arrival of his sisters.
"Good morning"! "How are my little-
YOU WOKE US UP YOU IDIOTS! Karin all but screamed, thinking to herself how she wished she could have born in a normal family.
"Ichi nii"? Yuzu asked worriedly "We heard you crying in your sleep! Her eyes were large and bright with worry.
Ichigo frowned. There must have been more to his dream then he thought…
Trust me you don't want to know what you saw, A stranger's voice said to Ichigo.
"What the hell!" Ichigo tried looking for the source but his efforts were in vain.
. "Language son!"
"Oh shut up!
" He realized he was late for school, and went to leave…
… and was interrupted by Karin grabbing his hand to tell him off. She had just got done slapping her dad, and wanted him to get a piece of her mind.
What happened next was worse than a nightmare.
He suddenly wasn't in his room, but in what appeared to be a basement cellar. The rank smell of death and waste reached his nostrils, but that was nothing compared to the sight in front of him.
There was Karin screaming and trying to fight a man who mounted on top of her. Yuzu was there as well crying in the corner. A worse sight was Orihime naked and covered in cuts and welts. Her eyes dimly watching as if she wasn't really there…
BANG
Suddenly he was in Karakura town. All the buildings were burnt desolations of themselves..
BANG
Then there was the Soul Society. All that was left of the Seretei and Rukon district was a large crater…
Now he was alone with a old man.
"I'm so sorry you had to see that." The old man whispered sadly.
Shock was quickly replaced by anger and Ichigo grabbed the old man by the callor. WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU! Ichigo screamed at him
. He then saw that the old man was crying.
"I'm so sorry you had to see that. Please save him! It's too late for me to escape this hell, but it's not too late for him! He has different colored eyes! If you save him the what you saw has a lesser chance of happening!" He said all of this, rambling like madman, and collasped in on himself.
What do you mean? It's not too late for… Who are you talking about! He said quickly, yet softly feeling a bit of pity for the old man.
That's when he noticed that the old man was rotting.
Flesh was falling off in droves, disintergrating in ash. Suddenly, the whole world was crumbling into nothing…
"ICHI NII!
He opened his eyes and he was back in his room, his father standing over him.
His sister's were behind him Yuzu with tears, and Karin trying not to look worried.
Wha… What happened? Ichigo asked his voice weak. He struggled to get up, his legs were shaking and felt like jelly.
"You had a seizure son." Isshin looked at him worriedly.
Ichigo looked to his sisters and smiled trying to get them calm.
"Don't worry I'm fine." Karin was about to say something angrily, but Ichigo got up and started walking out of the room.
"I need to go see Mr Hat and Clogs."
And just like that he was out.
Before anybody flames let me note something. THIS WILL NOT BE A RAPE FIC. Or to be more clear if I do decide to use sexual assault I'll do with the maturity it deserves and not sexualize it like other writers (those were the reason I didn't like fan fiction for longest time). If you want to read a good fic where this horrible subject is given said maturity go to Lothian's and Racholasj's page. They truly are great fics! Now don't get the impression I'm not greatfull for any constructive criticism, or That I think I'm this great writer. IF ANY OF YOU DECIDES TO GIVE ME A REVIEW I WIILL LOVE YOU ALLWAYS! I'm just a beginner so please be gentle, but if anyone enjoys this story I'll be crying in joy! I'm also sorry if I offend or disturb anybody I'll apologize immediately! Lots of love- Aj