ok this is a bit of a rewrite of this fanfiction though haven't change much of this chapter the later one will have a bigger difference

Chapter one: where am I?

'its so hot...i-i cant breathe! it feels like my lungs are being crushed! i-i cant move! help!'

Beep...beep..beepbeepbeep...beeeeeeeeeeep...

"docter what happened?!"

"i-i dont know! she was fine a minute ago"

"MO! do something!"

"onee-sama! ONEE-SAMA!"

"maria! you have to leave the room!"

'whats going on?!..."

then everything went black

A young girl about 19 years was lying down, on the dirt. she seems to be unconscious, but then she started to stir.

'ugh…..what happened?' the young girl opened her eyes, looking at the clear blue sky. The girl quickly sat up and notices that she's wearing a some sort of kimono. "what in the world?" she look up to see a small village. 'where am I? how did I get here? Last I remembered, I was in my bed...'

"are you alright young lady?" the girl turned around to see an old woman about 50 to 57 years of age. The old woman smiled warmly at the girl. The girl stood up smiled back. "I think so... Um if may I ask, where am I?" the old woman seemed surprised at first, but smiled. "so, you're a new comer? I see. welcome to the soul society dear"

"the soul society?"

"yes, you're in the Rukongai, a place where souls first arrive"

"souls?" the girl ask.

"yes dear. You're dead. Once you die from the world of the living, you are sent here in the Rukongai. This is the 78 Inuzuri, hanging dog. One of the poor parts in the Rukongai of the soul society." the girl couldn't' believe it! She's dead! 'i-i'm dead?! What happens now? where am I going to live?' As if reading her mind, the old woman asked "would you like to stay with me? My home is small but-"

"no! no! I don't want to be a burden to you!" the girl started to panic even more. the old woman chuckled. "its no burden at all! I also own a flower shop near by. Oh! Where are my manners? I'm Koneko Sohma " the girl smiled and bowed politely. "it's a pleasure to meet you, I'm Kyoko Mogami"

"well it's a pleasure to meet you! Now lets go home and talk about your job in my flower shop tomorrow." while walking to her new home, Kyoko felt some what happy but yet sad. 'I guess I have to start over. But its for the best, I want to leave my past life behind. Goodbye my friends in Tokyo, till we meet again'

Ok end of 1st chapter! so ill continue on with this story and update as much as i can