Alrighty, three cheers for the first chapter of Inferno! I admit, it's short (cough veryshort cough) and I admit it's bad (verybad) but, you'll have to bear with me for now.
Chapter 1
"Run!" "Hurry!", "This way!" The cries rang out among the once peaceful camp,where cats were now rushing frantically about,while the burning flames of the inferno leaped high above their heads. "Mossypelt hurry up!"
"But-"
"Hurry!".The calico she-cat hesitated a moment longer before leaning over to pick up one of her kits,while another slate colored cat grabbed the other. Racing out of the nursery,the two she-cats pelted out of the entrance,where flames where already licking at the brambles. "Hurry up Mossypelt! We have to make it! The river isn't to far from here!"
"I know,I know Mistfur. It's easy for you to say,you didn't just kit!" The she-cat meowed indignantly between huffs. Mistfur gave her friend a sympathetic glance. "I know,I know,we're almost there. It's only just over this clump of bramble..Ah!Here we are!" The she-cat halted started to move towards a shallower end,Mossypelt following slowly behind.
"Mossypelt,Mistfur!" "There you are!" "We were getting worried!" The two she-cats were greeted with cries of relief and all seemed to be fine. Mossypelt sighed and looked over her two kits while Mistfur kept her eyes trained on the blaze as it's red flames shot into the sky. "Mossypelt! Oh Mossypelt,are you all right? Are the kits all right?" The calico turned towards the speaker and smile wearily, "No worries Oakclaw,they're fine." the tabby tome,her mate,smiled with relief.
"Adderstar!"
"Jaytail!"
"You're here!" Cats crowded around the two, eyes frantic and pelts bushed up with fear. "What are we going to do?"
"What about our home!"
"Will we ever go back?" Adderstar held up his tail for silence,and began to speak. "Mistclan cats, don't fret. We'll be back into our home soon enough."
"What matters most at the moment is if we're all safe," Jaytail put in, eyes scanning the crowd. "Is everyone here?" Cats started to mutter to each other and move towards family. Heads began to nod in the crowd,and eyes turned towards Adderstar once again. "Alright-"
"Wildsong? Wildsong! Wildsong where are you!" Eyes began to widen with shock and fright as Adderstar turned towards the speaker,a tortoiseshell she-cat. " Spottedfur are you sure-"
"She's gone!" The she-cat wailed with grief,while Hawkleap tried to comfort her.
"If she's gone,then she must have done something wrong. This is her punishment. Death." A dry voice sounded out and was met with hisses and a yowl of fury from Spottedfur. "How dare you accuse my daughter Mallowfur! I'll..I'll..Oh Starclan why?" The she-cat broke down in tears,wailing to the sky. Mallowfur stared coldly at the figure on the ground,before padding away,ignoring the glares that were hot in her direction.
"Starclan knows why I chose her as medicine cat,"Adderstar murmured under his breath before turning to his deputy. "Jaytail, send out a search party as soon as it's safe. Don't rest until you've found her."
"Of course Adderstar." The gray she-cat stepped away,leaving the sand-colored tom to his thoughts,while somewhere out there,trapped in the inferno, a young she-cat was fighting against an impossible enemy. The prize? Her life.
Dan-Dan-Daaaaaaaaaan! So, remember to give meh some reviews, and please, I appreciate you telling me how to improve( I need those) but don't just say stuff like ' Ugh! Your stories horrible!' Or 'You suck, blahblablah's stories are better!" Because I am already aware of all of that,and I don't need you telling me it. Thank you ^^ Ssilver.
