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The rainy night was getting heavier and heavier every minute. I held her bloody paws as we practically crawled from the abandoned house. She would wheeze and pant when she slowly moved away, finally she stopped moving and fell on her stomach. I turned around when I heard a thud and splat on top of mud.

She lied there motionless, I regained my strength and ran to her. I tugged at her torn up shirt and turned her over. She had a smile on her lips and she looked at me with tears dripping slowly down her cheek. She held on her stomach where the symbol lies and cried out in pain.

I picked her head up and I started to cry a little myself. She managed to smile again, but it was so weak, I never, ever seen her smile so imperfect before. She chuckled and whispered in my ear: 'Remember the innocent girl, (whisper softer), with the tattoo...' Her head weighed down in my arms and I w

ept, while pressing my head on hers. Her pure heart was still beating... Many Years ago...

Flippy's POV

It began when I moved to this town, everything was colorful and happy. I bought a huge log I call home next to this mobile trailer. i finally finished unpacking my only box full of things for each room and clothing. I didn't have much because I live alone. I decided to go outside and stretch my legs.

I saw many critters walking together and laughing, I always get along with other critters because I'm kind, I ran up to the first person I spotted, it was a blue moose he went to the house next to mines and fiddled for his keys. "Hello, I'm new here. What's your name?"I said.

He turned and shook my paw then continued to look for his key. I saw a moose shaped key under his feet and pointed to it. He smiled and shook my paw twice as hard and gave me a hug. "Why thank you sir, I've been looking for those keys for a week now."he said tipping his hat then walking in his house.

I shrugged and returned to my house. I spotted a red figure walking like a super model down the street. She was full of confidence and filled with nothing but happiness. It's seems like kindness fueled her excited energy tank when I waved to her.

She ran up to be and looked me in the eyes and smiled. "Hello there, I never seen a green teddy bear before."she said hugging me with all her might. I chuckled nervously and blush, her hug may be tight but it's soft and passionately lovely, I enjoyed it.

After a while she let me go and look me in the eyes again. "You have to go explore this wonderful town. Do you want me to join you?"she said quietly. Her eyes suddenly turned nervous and frightened when she mentioned the town.

"I'd love to." I said. She stretched out her red paw and I grabbed it and we made our quick walk to a restaurant. "Want a bite to eat? My treat."she said smiling showing her bright white teeth. "Oh no I couldn't spend your money, my appetite will make you go broke." I honestly remarked.

She giggles a very cute and adoring laughter and sighed after it took up most of her breathing. "It's fine, it's okay...I love to share with new friends, order as much as you want."she said. She ran over to a seat and pulled it away from the table. "Sit here."she said.

I now began to think she's way too nice for me, I think it's time to question her. Usually boys do that for girls. "Hey, um...red, hedgehog...porcupine girl.(clears throat) how come your so friendly?" I asked as I sat on the comfortable chair.

She sat on hers and folded her paws together and leaned her head on top. "Well, I'm so friendly because I am...my mother had always told me there is no reason why I should be angry all the time. YOLO!"she said. I squinted my eyes during the misunderstanding.

"Yolo?" I repeated. "You only live once, listen to the song The Motto by Drake, it's a good song. Okay getting off topic here."she ended the sentence with a chuckle. I laughed along with her, even though she didn't give me a full and logical answer to my question.

I

look away from her magnet-like eyes to see a female skunk walking to us. "How can I help you two? Oh-ho-ho, on a date huh? Who the new cutie?"said the skunk with rollerblades on. "Petunia, this fine gentlebear is...uh...well he's new.

I didn't exactly ask for his name, how embarrassing."she said. Petunia laughed then stopped suddenly when the red porcupine didn't return a giggle or even her friendly smile. "Sorry, what is your name?"she asked me. I laughed so I can hopefully get her happy again too, and it worked she began to laugh.

Great! I made her laugh at a joke that didn't exist. "My name is Flippy, and you are?" I said. "I'm Flaky my dear."she said as she kissed my paw, I blushed red when she did so. She acts like a gentlecritter herself, so kind, so very angelic and lovely.

Petunia returned her once removed smile and winked at me. Flaky stood up and pardoned herself for the bathroom. "She's so pristine, I think your going to love living here because of her. She's my best friend ever!"said Petunia happily. So that's it, she's innocent...I believe Petunia is right.

Flaky returned to her seat and ordered her meal: leaf on a branch with some flowers , and I ordered mines: fish soup and grilled honey (grilled cheese style). Flaky looked down at the table and played with her fork and knife. I watched her every move, having such a strange personality could mean she's dangerous.

"Am I hard to look away from?"she said. Those words startled me. She haven't looked at me once after Petunia took our order. It creeped me out. "W-what are you talking about?" I said. Flaky stabbed the knife on the table.

"You've been staring at me for such a long time..."she said. I gulped quietly then forced a smile on my face. Something is definitely wrong with her...her emotions are somehow twisted, she's bright and dark at the same time, but it's hard to say she's not harmless.

"I'm sorry about my strange emotions...lately there has been a huge amount of accidents going on and I believe it's a sign for something...I don't know maybe it's just me."she said as sheaid her head on the table and sighed.

I was completely nervous now, she practically read my mind. How can I stop her from being so weird? "You know there are other things you can do rather than smiling." I finally spoke. I trembled violently when I saw her raised her head up slowly to stare me in my eyes.

I knew she is against of what she say, but surprisingly she said: "Your really right...but what can I do?" I thought about it for a second. "Well you must know, bad luck comes around sometimes, you must learn it's pattern. You really don't have to worry about other people when they're gone." I speeched.

Flaky nodded her head, suddenly a wide smile came across her face. It wasn't the creepy one she had the whole time, it was beautiful. Her eyes twinkled and it shone shiny red. I couldn't help but look at the beauty last for about five seconds, when Petunia came to serve our food. Flaky blinked and the magic was gone, just like that.

"Here you go darlings. Enjoy."she said as she skated her way to the kitchen. Flaky took a bite out of her leaf on the branch and bit into her dried up, crunchy probably tasty flowers. She moaned with delight. "This is so good!"she stretched her paw out holding the piece she bit off.

"Try some."she said. I slowly took a chomp out of the bitter petal and kept it on my tongue. "Damn...uh...(clear throat) sorry...um...can I be excused?" I said turning green. "Sure thing."she said as I rushed to the bathroom to spit out the piece.

Flaky's POV

I watched my new friend run to the men's room and ate some more of my leaf on the branch. He is so adorable. I wish he would talk to me some more. I ripped my leaf off the branch, that was stuck on some sap and ate it. I bet he thinks I'm weird...I just don't know how to act in front of boys...especially cute ones like him.

I can't believe how polite I am around him. He's always staring into my eyes and looking at my mouth...what's up with that? Giggles, my friend, came by and waved at me. "Hey, who's the new cutie pie?"she said. I blushed and swept my feet around on the floor.

"He's Flippy, I met him this morning and took him on a tour." I said softly. "I should take him on a private tour, he can tour my body."she said with that seductive tone in her voice. "Don't you already have an admirer?" I said raising my tone.

"I know, but he sure is sexy, me-ow."she said motioning her claws in a circular motion. Her friend Lammy chuckled with her pal. I smiled weakly and rolled my eyes. "I actually want to be his only friend for now then I'll introduce him to you guys. I want to enjoy his kindness before you guys take him." I said.

A strong paw leaned on my back and I gasped. "Flaky, can we finish our lunch?"he said hungrily. I reached my paw on his and pat it. Blush brightened my red fur i quickly turned around and nodded, showing him the way to the table. As we ate it was quiet, until Giggles and Lammy went up to our table and interrupted us.

"Hey big boy, how are ya?"she said rubbing his back. I couldn't stand this...she's taking my friends away again. She swears she think her appearances are appealing. I gulped down my last petal, paid for the meal and started to leave the restaurant. Flippy pushed Giggles and Lammy out the way and chased m

e.

I was far away from him, but he somehow catches up with me. I jumped in a bush and saw him ran past it. I sighed and sat on the soft grass. I heard rustling in the bushes then increased my breathing. Flippy departed the bushes and surprised me by making an annoying sound with his throat.

I smacked him then walked out into the street again, but this time I was speed walking to my house. "Hey, hey...where are you going? You just left for no reason."he said. "I'm sorry I thought you were with your 'bestfriends'" I said softly.

Flippy frowned a serious expression. I knew he means what he's about to say. "Flaky, they aren't my friends...were you jealous or something? Are they some kind of popular kids?"he said. I frowned angrily then cooled off. I turned to him and he flinched, he probably thought I was going to slap him again.

"Look mister, I do not want you to be a part of them, they aren't popular either only popular in their crowd...and...I...DO NOT WALLOW IN JEALOUSY!" I exploded. His ears fell with sadness. This is a new feeling to me...this anger and guilt emotion.

This new guy has gotten me to become crazy. I must stay away from him for now. "I'm...so sorry...for yelling at you...I don't know what came over me." I said rubbing my sore head. Flippy's ears twitched, it seems like they are deciding whether to be happy or sad still. I lowered my head as I went to my door

. "Do you want to come inside?" I said. Flippy shook his head 'no'. He stared into my eyes again then at my lips which held no smile. "Okay, goodnight then." I said as I walked in my house and watched him put his paws in his pockets and walked casually down the street. I closed the door gently then readied for bed.

Few hours ago...

Flippy's PO

V

I ran into the bathroom and grabbed a napkin and spat out the leaf. "Ugh...how can she eat that shit..."I said gagging loudly. A guy came out the bathroom and he saw the napkin in my paws so I put it behind me and smiled. The rabbit looked so green it was a shame. "Your girlfriend gave you something you want to eat huh?"he said

. "Yeah...wait she's not-" i started. "Nah man, a girlfriend is a girl who is your friend. My friend Giggles gave me some treenuts, i really hate treenuts. I like carrots. I...am...a...rabbit!"he said pointing to himself as he spoke. I nodded saying 'duh' in my head. "Are you okay dude? You look a little..." Cuddles nodded

. "Yes I am drunk, do you have a problem with it?"he said. I stared at him with my eyebrows risen. "Look dude, just tell your friend how you feel about treenuts...I'm sure she'll understand okay dude? Just keep your cool, and let her drive you home. Deal?" I said holding out my paw.

He gripped my paw and shook it. "Thanks, say what's your name?"he said drinking some substance in his bottle. "Flippy, young sir." I said smiling. "The name's Cuddles, nice to meet you too."he said exiting the bathroom and I followed. Flaky wasn't at our table, instead she was at another table with a bunch of slutty looking girls.

I walked over to her and laid my paw on her back, she gasps in fear. My stomach ached with hunger, I asked her if we can finish. She touched my paw back and I blushed, and I think she did too. Her fur is so fairly red and i like it, I think red is my new favorite color now. We marched on to our table and continued lunch

. But strangely she wasn't talking anymore. I wondered what did those girls said to her to make her treasure-like smile become locked up again. Then I felt cold, but damp paws rubbing my back. I swear if it's what I think it is I'm going to go nuts. I turned and saw the two girl Flaky was talking to.

They continued to rub their cold hands on me and I looked at Flaky's angry frown, it was new to her I can tell her face was all jumbled and it was barely a scowl. She shoved a leaf down her throat and almost choked on it. She threw down some money on the table and she bust out to the other side of the restaurant .I watched her sadly running off.

Then I felt something wet on my ear l, it was a tongue. Was somebody licking me, of course. It was a pink girl licking me,tasting fur. I pushed her out the way. "What the hell is wrong with you?" I yelled making her tear. I caught her in the street under the starry night sky running to a neighborhood I wasn't introduced to.

When I saw her twinkling ruby eyes look back at me she bolted faster. Then I caught her jumping into a bush. 'Nice try' I thought i stepped on some leaves and fumbled with the leaves in the way making it rustle. I finally saw her beautiful, but nervous face hiding in her knees.

I made a squeaking noise that startled her and she smacked me. Surprised I jerked back and rubbed my face to heal the pain. I got up eventually and saw that she was running to a particular house. I asked her where she was going and wondered why she left.

She started to talk about those girls as if I made friend with those whores. I put on my serious, and persuasive face and confronted her about the girls. I even asked her if she was jealous of them, which was the wrong word. I wanted to die right there and come back to life tomorrow

. She started to act all crazy and talked all kinds of nonsense about the girls. She even began to scare me with her deep and loud tone in her speech, I forgot how loud one can be just now. The last sentence made me frighten also she just screamed in my ears so I lowered it and stared at her.

She began to bug out just now. I wanted to help her little issue with those girls, and ask her why she don't want me around them, even though I ready figured out why. But when she invited me to go inside her house i said no with my head. I was speechless to see how fast an innocent girl can change like that.

Maybe tomorrow I thought. She nodded and I made my way into the streets. This night is colder than it should be, i stuffed my paws in my pockets, I waited for her to close her door but I can feel her sweet eyes pouring it's looks on me. I smiled because those eyes won't stop being so angelic.

End of Chapter 1 I AM SOOO SORRY THIS TOOK SOOO LONG! HOPE U LIKE IT!