Hi this is my first fan fiction well kind of I really bad at beginning especially when it come to caching the readers attention so this is a test ran it wont get any were but I would really appreciate some feedback on any thing a can improve on.

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Pain it's a sensation I have gotten very used to over the trials of my life, and pain was once a gain what I was feeling. My spirit wade heavy on my heart though it was eased with a new hope through a resent lose. My skin burned, my muscles ached screaming for me to stop, my heart felt like it were going burst from my chest and my lungs were struggling for breath, but I couldn't stop I had to get stronger. They tell me I have time there right, but it's still hard to except it in my mind it seemed like it was only yesterday, though it had been over 50 years since the curse , since he got away.

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I braced myself for another hit as our blades clashed and a sickening sound could be heard as my body was thrown back in to the ground. My comrades calls my name and Inuyasha rushes in to make a hit on are opponent. As he slashed down with a horizontal cut, our opponent blocks with his sword and countered with a kick to his abdomen that sent him flying. I staggered to my feet pushing myself forward my blade clash with his and the sound of metal striking metal could be heard through the training ground. He counters with a kick and I blocked with my knee. It felt like my leg was breaking as I was pushed back to the ground. I tried to get back up again only to have my body give out on me. That's when I notice the blood collecting around me. The pain I had been feeling came at me full force and every thing starts getting dark. 'Why I'm I so weak? If I were stronger he wouldn't have gotten away. If I had gotten up faster I could have stopped him and none of this would be happening.'

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Comforting warmth washed over me as I woke. The soft sheets gave me some security that I am rarely given. I had that dream again it was about before he showed up. I lay there trying to remember the sweet details. Lost in my memories I almost didn't catch the movement outside the sliding doors. ' Doors?!' Then I remember what happened and I bolt up and was hit with a wave of an intense surge of pain. After steadying my self I look at the bed and lay back down.

"We got defected again didn't' we?" I said with a husk tiered voice not bothering to look around I already now she's there. 'Do I really sound that bad?'

"No, you don't sound that bad." She said as though she could read my thoughts. "And for your first question yes we got our butts kicked. But it's not your fault Sesshoumaru can get a bit ruff and his been getting stronger."

Like I don't now that and she doesn't sound to good her self. "Are you ok?"

"I'm fine I promise." she said warily. "I'm just tired."

Her statement reminded me of my own exaction. "you better get some more sleep, I didn't suffer the brunt of the damage Sango."

She right I know Kagome always know when some one is suffering especially toughs close to her.

" I need to check on Inuyasha and when I get back you better be asleep." she leaves with a soft smile on her face. My exaction washes over me and I let it drift me back in to darkness