What do ya get when you fall in love..

A guy with a pin to brust your bubble..

That's what ya get for all your trouble..

Ohhhh ho hooo... I'll. .. never .. fall .. in .."

This here is a girl that has had it. Laying by the edge of a huge lily pond, looking like a broken doll. Dress torn, blood dripping from a open wound to the chest, skin cold and pale. Hair undone, dripping like black inky strands with the last remains of torn flowers. Her eyes looking to the sky with not the eyes of the broken but with a new light that was not there before.

I guess you would wonder how she got here. This little girl dressed up to be a woman. Well I guess we got here just like any story. A series of unfortunate events that lead to this one moment. I guess there unfortunate because of were they lead or is it because they lead from some good? It's a curious thing.

Hello this is my first story, comments please. I would love to know if I should keep going with this. I'm very shy about writing because of my dyslexia. So any errors or other things, please tell me so I can fix it. Thank you for reading.